Thanks for adding Dawn to your favorites.

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Well, if you liked that, maybe you'd like this blog post I wrote: https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/764362/extract-of-a-beginners-guide-to-the-melodic-method-by-ley-lines

Thank you for the favorite of The Stars Will Aid in Her Escape!

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The basic premise is in and of itself good, changing up the timeline for when she becomes an alicorn allows for interesting possibilities for continuation, and the characterization was fairly spot on. You had good dialogue, and grammar^-^,, and what I always consider most important in stories with magic, you got into explaining it, and that's something I enjoy, I love exposition on magic in a story on it, and will always applaud^-^

Thanks for the favorite, was there anything in particular you liked?