Beast Boy was the first to wake up. For a moment he was getting ready to go through his normal wake up routine of to beat Cyborg down to the kitchen to make a tofu breakfast, but before he even got up though he noticed something different. Or more specifically, SMELLED something different. It was the smell of fresh air! He saw that he wasn't in his normally messy bedroom, but on the edge of a ominous looking forest, with the rest of his team out cold. He then remembered the fight that occurred on top of Titans Tower. At that instant he rushed to wake everyone up,
"GUYS WAKE UP! SLADE COULD BE HERE AT ANY MOMENT!" One by one they each groggily and painfully got up. Robin then spoke,
"Ok, whats going on here? We were at Titans Tower one moment, and now by some forest. What did Slade do?"
"I don't know dog, but what Slade did with that staff was not natural" remarked Cyborg.
"I know what it is." Suddenly everyone's eyes were on Raven. "It's the Staff of Trigon. It grants the user nearly all the same powers as my father, with his consent of course."
"So you're saying, that Slade is on the side of Trigon again!?" half-stated, half questioned Robin. She knew she didn't not have to answer that. "Well we're doomed" blurted out Beast Boy. "Friends please, let's just stay calm" begged Starfire.
"She's right, let's find some locals. They can tell us where we are and maybe help us get a way back to Jump City to stop Slade and Trigun. Starfire, fly up and tell me if you see any towns or villages."
"Yes Robin." At that instant, she flew up and her eyes lightened up. "Robin, I see a small town over this way!" She pointed her finger of what Robin could only best guess was north-west. "Well let's head over there, maybe then we can get some answers."
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*30 minutes later*
"I'm just saying guys this place looks oddly familiar to me." commented Beast Boy.
"Well B, maybe you've been here with your old team. Once you hear the name I bet you yourself will be able to direct us home."
They continued walking until they came over a hill and finally caught sight of the town. Beast Boy couldn't help himself, "Holy shit." The rest of the team just stared at him with utter shock. You never hear Beast Boy cuss unless if something ridiculous, or amazing happened.
"Guys, I know where we are." He muttered, his jaw a little slacked from the shock.
"Well... Where are we B?" Beast Boy composed himself and cleared his throat,
"Ladies and Gentlemen, it is my pleasure to say. Welcome, to Equestria!" They all just stared at him with blank looks on their faces. Finally, Starfire was the first to break their silence.
"Oh Beast Boy, now this can't be Equestria. That place is from a cartoon, even I know that."
"Aw come on Star! After the millions of times of watching it with me, you're telling me you can't tell this is Ponyville when it's right in front of you?!"
"Ponyville? B, are you telling me you're a brony?" Beast Boy could only coyly say one word, "yes." He just waited for the laughter to come, but it never did. What he did hear was even more shocking.
"Well, I'm ok with it as long as you agree that Fluttershy is best pony." Beast Boy's jaw hit the ground. Then Robin joined in, "I have to disagree Cyborg, Rainbow Dash is obviously best pony."
"I---'m more of a Twilight Sparkle fan myself." Raven admitted. Then there was an awkward silence, followed by the entire team bursting out laughing. "Wow guys, if I had known you were all bronies, I would have told you all sooner!" Robin's face then became very serious, "Well, if we really are in Equestria. How are we going to get home?" They all thought for only a millisecond before in unison they all said, "Twilight Sparkle!"
A/N: Thanks for reading chapter two. I hope you all enjoyed it. And to those that have already started following this. You have my biggest thanks. Constructive criticism is appreciated.
Good, but try to make the chapters longer
I wonder what/how will the ponies react to their fans.... maybe something like... or... maybe even... or... but most of all...
I wonder what/how will the ponies react to their fans.... maybe something like... or... maybe even... or... but most of all...
possible late addition of my OC?
i have the normal template for him if you do want too
name: Lightning streak (call me Light or Lightning)
age:about 2 years above the mane 6
gender: Male
looks:profile picture
personality: acts like a big brother to pretty much everypony, so i am pretty much a kind,happy,friendly colt but if i really need to i can buck you up so badly itll take the royal guard to get me off AND the princesses to heal you
job:former royal guard, former guard, former apple bucker [i was a great friend of the apploosa apples]
cutiemark: [if you cant see it on my pic]
gray-black cloud with lightning bolts coming out
type of pony: pegasus
hometown:cloudsdale,lived in appleoosa then moved to ponyville
>> Lightning streak Hey it's never too late. I have a very rough idea of how this story is supposed to go, so there is PLENTY of room to add your OC. Just let me figure out how to do it.
You made them all bronies. LOL thats great. Can't wait to see what happens next.
OOC intro if Possible. If it's possible I also have an explanation that could put him in the story.
Character Name: Maximillion Fortner a.k.a. Maximum Fort (I'll explain why he has a human name in a minute.)
Age: 21 but, is just slightly taller than Twilight.
Gender: Male
Looks: Take Ragna and ponify him but, change some minor details. His Coat is silver and his mane and tail are Crimson, his eyes are Brown and Blue. He has wings and a horn from a mishap with magic in the alternate version of Ponyville he is from.(Paging the Doctor and It's Sequel) He is humanoid due to the chaotic nature of the rift that brought him into this version of Ponyville.
Personality: Extremely socially awkward, fears getting mocked to the point of keeping himself silent. He is not without his inner strength and can channel the innate magic of all three pony tribes this has caused him to help anyone even at the cost of his own well being. (In short he's quiet but will take a bullet for a complete stranger if he can tell they are in trouble.)
Job: Former Freelance mercenary, Guardian of Twilight Sparkle, Traveling Hero.
Powers(Super-heroes are involved so I think this is necessary): Can focus on the extreme powers of one of the three Pony tribes and amplify it's innate power ten-fold this comes at the cost of the use of one of other two. You can tell what power he is boosting by a certain side of his CM glowing the power he gives up will darken.(I'll explain what it is in a minute.) Earth Pony powers make him become nearly indestructible and hit with the strength and impact of a speeding train. Pegasi Powers make him Extremely fast and durable stamina wise. Unicorn Powers grant him the powers over all types of magic when glowing. He can use all the spells anypony could possibly use. His most powerful ability causes all three of the symbols to glow but only lasts for ten minutes and he cannot move for a bit afterwards.
CM: Similar to the Triforce emblazoned on a shield but, each triangle is colored like the power descriptions above and hold a pony tribe symbol inside. It's unique property is the fact he can cause one of these to glow while darkening one. Thus giving him an enhanced form of that tribe's power while losing the darkened one.
Type of Being: Magi-Wing Anthorinan(Naming the Humanoid Pony types. Magi-Wing is Alicorn class.) This race is unique to his native dimension after a magical mishap transformed all the residents of the universe into half-animal half-human anthros.
Hometown: Alternate Ponyville.
How he arrives/Reason for plot entrance: He falls quite literally into the titans lap or more specifically landing on BB's head. After the rift Slade caused dragged him to this version of Ponyville. Upon learning this info he seeks to aid the titans, as when they return to their world he will return to his as well. Where he can
Yeah it's long but, it saves you a hell of a lot of thinking. And also a suggested point of entry for the character always helps. Oh yeah forgot to mention that the cast in his universe are all anthro's like he is so they would all wear clothes. He wears a aquamarine version of Ragna's outfit. (Also known As the P2 color palette. lol)
LOLZ.
I could only imagine that part where they all are animated perfectly, and when they burst out laughing its not much animation anymore, or something like that.
This just made my day.
What a minute... the fuck does Slade want to rule Equestria?
>>Syn the Mystic Well, I'm not going to say much but let's just say Trigon, hasn't disclosed all the details about Equestria.
Holy Buck
All right, this chapter was definitely better with description than the first. other than that, all i can say is when the time comes for action, I expect my shoes to be blown off, and you've got a fan sir. Keep on truckin'
This is good!!!
My OC addition
name: Jailtyme
age: A year older than mane cast
gender: Male
looks: http://grog18.deviantart.com/art/Jailtyme-281014783
personality:Arrogant, Nice, Friendly (He lived in a town with a corrupt government with a griffon friend then moved to a tribe)
job:Hunter for griffon tribe
cutiemark: Two walls with a ball bouncing between them (Free-running/acrobatics)
Type of pony:Earth pony
hometown: Griffon Tribe Near the edge of the everfree, Comes to ponyville alot
He also has a Griffon mate/wife which is why he lives in a griffon tribe
Oh, boy. This is a guilty pleasure... In any case, keep workin' on it.
If I came across as a bit of grammar nazi, then I must apologize. 'Twas not my intent - I just like seeing things I like succeed.
*On that note, you can use exclamation points or periods in the place of a question mark depending on the nature of the sentence - sorry for not being able to resist defending myself. *
Anyway, keep it up.
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Ooh! Can you at least try to put in my OC? You don't have to but it would be nice :3
Name : Speedy (she uses her magic to transform into Bluebird)
Age : About the same as the mane 6
Gender : Female
Look : Speedy is my prof pic. Bluebird's a G&P Trixie color with a deep blue mane and she's a unicorn. Bluebird has a costume, it has a cape, it's Rainbow Dash blue, it has a navy blue circle in the middle of the cape with the letter "B" in the middle, she has a utility belt, boots up to her knees, and she has a headband.
Personality : Proud, arrogant, smart ass, she likes to pretend-play that she's a superhero with her little sister, River. Her older brother, Bullet, thinks it's stupid, and she always has a smart remark to snap at him.
Job : Speedy takes the train to Canterlot to work at her uncle's doughnut shop.
Cutie Mark : Speedy has a checkered flag (running) and Bluebird has a butterfly made with capital B's.
Hometown : Her mom and dad built a house on the mountains outside of Ponyville, the one in the episode "Dragonshy"
Speedy learned a spell that transforms her into the superhero Bluebird. Bluebird is a unicorn that can learn spells by going up to a unicorn pony and absorbing it from their memories.
200091 Ok that I have been working on getting most of the OC's in here, but yours pretty much screams, "I AM NEEDING TO TEAM UP WITH THE TEEN TITANS!" I guarantee that I will get yours in there, and hey, she just may become a major role. And I am sorry but to those that read my blog, the next chapter will take longer than expected, with school, homework, taking care of my sick grandmother, and writers block, I have been having trouble writing chapter 3 . I am extremely sorry for the delay. I will try and finish it as soon as possible.
CONTINUE NOW OR ELSE ILL BE AS MAD AS PINKIE WAS WHEN AJ BROKE PINKIE PROMISE
if you do not update soon, i will cram rabit wolverines down your gullet.
anyways, i'm gonna PM you with details on the OC i want to submit
the only problem i have is that it's SHORT
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Oc addiction if possible.
Name: Fire Bolt
Age: Somewhere between Princess Celestia and Princess Luna
Gender: Female
Looks:
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Personality:Nice, Friendly,Loyal.Make her angry and everything is reversed.
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Cutie Mark: A flaming scythe..I forgot to put the correct cute mark on the image (She hides her cutie mark because ponies fear her when they see it)
Type of pony:Unicorn,gained wings by magic
Home Town:Some hidden town near Ponyville
Nice Inside joke with Raven being a huge Twilight Sparkle Fan!
Makes me enjoy Robin the boy wonder alot more
Ravens fav pony is Twilight? Ahhhh very clever and well played good sir
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OC aplication:
Pony 1: Flame Burst.
Color: Fire red
Type: Unicorn
Eyes: Also red
Mane: Fire. Just fire. (We can talk more about the OCs if you put them in as they are, special, so to speak.)
Cutie Mark: A flame
He's a nice pony.
Magic specialty: Fire magic
Other things to note: Can control mane, also can become a scorpion of any size, and can shoot fire from his stinger.
Pony 2: Frost Chill
Color: White as snow
Type: Pegasus
Eyes: Light blue
Mane: White but sparkles as if full of many ice shards.
Cutie Mark: A snowflake
Hyper and mostly happy.
Other things to note: With a strong flap of her wings she can make snow, ice, and even cold whirlwinds. Can turn into an ice bird of any size, with similar abilities.
Final note: Can fuse and become FreezeFlame (My main OC), who has powers of both. His cutie mark is half of a flame, half of a snowflake. He is an Alicorn, older brother of Celestia and Luna.
Twilight's reaction to that last sentence: whut?
Cyborg thinks Fluttershy is the best pony????
1151056 I REALLY need to comment on this. OCs like this/these are the reason why most Bronies dislike OCs. I am not saying you shouldn't have a life like that to live in, but 'OPCs' shouldn't really be used for submissions. I, in fact have an OC villain that I will use in my EVENTUALLY published story that is TECHNICALLY an alicorn, (not self insert) but I still make the characters powers, week in comparison to any of the show's characters. In fact, it is just as physically powerful as Fluttershy, but it is VERY good at manipulation. I mean turning into someone else and being able to get into your head. But, back on topic! I am completely fine with OCs, but anyone's OC that has anything more than a vague connection to equestrian history is too OPC. The only reason why I am fine with my OC being in a published work, is because It was created SPECIFICALLY for the story, the reason why is because 'It' Is the ... Spawn, of the two best villains in the show so far! That way, it has absolutely does not have any roots to the Royal sisters, or any equestrian history! It was 'born' after season 2 ended and before season 3 started. To finish of my rant that seemed to have repeated it self... go for a BELIEVABLE level of power, but don't make the OC wimpy either--- OH and don't make them LOOK to cool either!
Don't like the fact they all know what this place is
Why isn’t Starfire adding ‘the’ to everything?
In a different world, it would be:
Oh, friend Beast boy, now this just cannot be the Equestria. That place is from the cartoon, even the I know of the that!
I agree with ya, Robin
Cyborg, your fav is Fluttershy?! No way!!
Twilight and Raven (AU) are both voiced by Tara Strong.