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Oh boy, here we go. The ride starts here.

Okay, I know I've written some shitty stuff in the past, but this... Even I know this is gonna suck... But I'm gonna read it anyways.

This is very intresting and I look forward to more. You are probably the first person I know to write a story about Octavia in diapers.

I'm ashamed at the two people who likely thumbed this down without even reading it. That's the one thing I can't stand, thumbing down a fic without even reading it.

This was interesting.

That was pretty cool.

I don't know why this has so many dislikes, it's going to be brilliant. The only thing I would say is that I doubt Vinyl Scratch would go into Octavia's locked chest. I know I can't call it OoC but it's just a major dick move.

The writing was actually good (not great, mind you, but it didn't make me want to bring the story back behind the shed with a shotgun in the crook of my arm). I'm not a fan of "Octavia just so happens to like diapers", but it's a necessary evil for this story, I would imagine.

Looking forward to more.

i actually thought this story was pretty good , the characters seemed real and compelling , and yeah.....

I dunno, I think Vinyl would probably go into her chest. But only if they were dating or very close. Also this was a great story. Just reread it. Some ponies just can't handle things well.

I quite enjoy this story, I will keep watching.

This was nice. I haven't normally gotten into Vinyl Scratch and Octavia fics, but I could get into both characters from how you wrote their voices. There was good chemistry between them, even if Vinyl can be a little dominant. But the plot moves well and it's a pretty fun first chapter.

Nice. Are you Tyrant Hoof on DiaperedAnime? As he/she posted this story on their. Please continue, I love this story!

More please!

i bet Octavia will win a 100% i mean so did go as long a mothe without it.

2200643 I am, yes. Thought of a better name for this since posting it there, but changing it there requires a moderator to approve it again.

2199112 It really depends on how you view the character. Someone else has commented that they can see it. Some people (ponies) are just nosey and while it might be a dick move that doesn't mean a character is a dick.

2199439 What other logic is there? People like what they like, its no different than any decision on how to show a character. Does there have to be some underlying reasoning and an explanation about some childhood thing leaving her with that sort of interest? The story is about her liking diapers....so yeah, its less a 'necessary evil' and more 'the plot'.

2198682 That's kind of rude, you haven't even read it and judge it solely on it containing what is presumably something you dislike. If you dislike diapers, don't read. I gave enough warning to make it clear. If you think it'll be shitty why are you reading it?

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When it comes to something so far from the norm (as loose as the term may be), having an explanation tends to be a good idea. It provides context, development and, potentially, foreshadowing.

2201183 I guess you have a point, but its only one chapter in. That might pop up later, although having it at the start might be useful.

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Ergo, foreshadowing. Vinyl could have found a journal in the chest but paid it no heed in light of the other contents, for example.

2201115 The reason why I'm still gonna read it isn't because I dislike stories with the diaper stuff in 'em, it's cause I usually read what I think is gonna be shit and then turns out to be gold. And I read what I think is gonna be shit because I've got more shit for brains than a blumkin. Just know, I'm gonna read this, I'll probably end up liking it, but until I do, I'm going to say it'll probably be weird and suck to me yet keep neutral opinion of it until I've finished it.

I found this interesting, I usually don't like stories involving Tavi and Vinyl... but I liked this, I am looking forward to see where this goes.

Yo dude very nice chapter can't wait for the next 1 :)

I've been away from this site for more than a month, and the first thing I read when I come back is this. And all I have to say is.....
YESSSSS!!!!!!!!
There's a lot of win here. It's a really fun scenario, and I'm loving Vinyl and Tavi's relationship in this. I can't wait for the next chapter.

more please

Oh god what is Vinyl planning.

Great start, I can't wait to see where this is going to go. Also TaviScratch, sub/dom...

There are a lot of reasons I like this fanfic. The main one being that Vinyl is a complete asshole, er flankhole, and I LOVE IT!!!!!