So it looks Lyra has the same secret as Octavia. Intresting and rather ironic. /
“Let’s just say, if this place smelled of Octy you’d be able to tell. She’s not just in the toilet, she’s filling it. Octy is doing like the most mondo, ginormous, super sh-”
Octy is doing like the most mondo, ginormous, super sh-
butt srs tho I love this story. Can't wait for the next chapter and Lyra! Hopefully. Whatever you do I know it'll be good. I noticed a few mistakes here and there like
She would lounge around in just her diaper or sometimes a onesie or romper. sulking on a pacifier.
and if you want a prereader I would gladly oblige.
ehhh. I still feel like Vinyl is trying to take full control of Octy, and thats something that really bothers me. Seriously. Everytime Octy tries to tell Vinyl to tone it down, she just ignores her and tones it UP. Seriously. This is really bothering me.
3762904 Its Vinyls stubborn nature in attempts to coax octavia out of her shell. Octavia likes it but doesnt want to admit it. Vinyl knows this and is slowly using it to make octavia comfortable
Damnit Tyrant, now I have to wait for the next chapter!
That with Lyra was... unexpected.
But I have a Idea where this is going.
PLAYDATE WITH LYRA!
So it looks Lyra has the same secret as Octavia. Intresting and rather ironic. /
Oh Vinyl you crack me up sometimes you know that.
Loved this chapter!
Although if I may point a minor mistake.
Should be "Your loss"
This story's great, can't wait for more!
Omg, so cute!~
butt srs tho I love this story. Can't wait for the next chapter and Lyra! Hopefully. Whatever you do I know it'll be good. I noticed a few mistakes here and there like
and if you want a prereader I would gladly oblige.
Dear Sweet Celestia don't be a dead story. It was so CUTE!!! Please continue this story.
2835692 Not a dead fic, I'm working on chapter 4 but, well, my m/m r63 clopfic had me distracted for a while. PP'sP will be updated soon, don't worry.
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It's alright. I can wait.
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Just not very long
I was wondering how Lyra fit into this. Things are going to get more interesting now, I wonder how Lyra will play out later
Mmm... this is getting good!
ehhh. I still feel like Vinyl is trying to take full control of Octy, and thats something that really bothers me. Seriously. Everytime Octy tries to tell Vinyl to tone it down, she just ignores her and tones it UP. Seriously. This is really bothering me.
Oh god... hope Octy has a lot of tissues...
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Its Vinyls stubborn nature in attempts to coax octavia out of her shell. Octavia likes it but doesnt want to admit it. Vinyl knows this and is slowly using it to make octavia comfortable