My official review of this awesome chapter. 1. We finally see Lyra and Octavia in a conflict that is not violent, it's more quiet and subtle. 2. The end result of the conflict ends with the two of them feeling better about themselves, and growing from it. 3. There is emotions on both sides, Lyra being sadness, and Octavia being anger. Two different emotions shows two different points of view. 4. I'm just happy to see Vinyl is acting more like a mother to both of them now, and not just to Octavia. 5. I can not wait to see what kinds of cute shenanigans the two of them get into in coming chapters.
4832826 Alright. Now I see it normal. I don't know if it was the chapter or my PC, but it seems to be over.
Now, the review: AWESOME CHAPTER! I'm really happy to see a new chapter for this really cute story. I hope the next chapter will not take too long. Good job with Vinyl helping these two brick-wall-headed-foals to repair their friendship. The scene as Vinyl found Lyra was heart breaking... But I'm happy it turns out to the better in the end.
And it looks like Octavia is maybe getting a little playmate... or even a sister? That would mean, Vinyl is now the mommy of TWO little-big-foals.
4832861 Yay! It looks like it was fixed right away! chapter was amazing, and the confrontation was what I hoped and pretty sure I knew it would be. And it was awesome!~
4846942 Well, I don't think Bon-Bon's been mentioned once in this fic so far. It seems a bit late to just throw her into the plot. If she were established as Lyra's roommate, special somepony, and/or close friend a few chapters earlier, she could play a role. But considering her character tag isn't included, and neither is the other tag, I don't think Bon-Bon will be a part of what happens next.
4847552 Bon Bon has been referenced, in Lyra's very first appearance, by both her and Vinyl, and she's the one Lyra is afraid of being discovered by when she's having her diaper time.
With the long delay I almost dropped this story. Good thing I didn't as this chapter showed some nice plot progression, even though what happened wasn't really unexpected. Eh, it's a good story even without twists, so thanks for the update. I enjoyed it greatly.
I think this is is the only serious fic about this subject on the site; the only story that gets into the mindset of what it's like/what it means to be an adult baby/adult foal. And... Vinyl Scratch is best Mommy!
4722943 NOW!
You two did a fantastical job here
It looks like you have randomly copied parts of the chapter and put them somewhere else.
PLEASE! Revise the chapter
My official review of this awesome chapter.
1. We finally see Lyra and Octavia in a conflict that is not violent, it's more quiet and subtle.
2. The end result of the conflict ends with the two of them feeling better about themselves, and growing from it.
3. There is emotions on both sides, Lyra being sadness, and Octavia being anger. Two different emotions shows two different points of view.
4. I'm just happy to see Vinyl is acting more like a mother to both of them now, and not just to Octavia.
5. I can not wait to see what kinds of cute shenanigans the two of them get into in coming chapters.
And that is my review.
Umm... The part where Vinyl wipes up lyra repeated over and over a couple times, as if copy and pasted.
Awwwwwww......
4832826 Alright. Now I see it normal. I don't know if it was the chapter or my PC, but it seems to be over.
Now, the review:
AWESOME CHAPTER! I'm really happy to see a new chapter for this really cute story. I hope the next chapter will not take too long.
Good job with Vinyl helping these two brick-wall-headed-foals to repair their friendship. The scene as Vinyl found Lyra was heart breaking... But I'm happy it turns out to the better in the end.
And it looks like Octavia is maybe getting a little playmate... or even a sister? That would mean, Vinyl is now the mommy of TWO little-big-foals.
4832861
Yay! It looks like it was fixed right away!
chapter was amazing, and the confrontation was what I hoped and pretty sure I knew it would be. And it was awesome!~
I'm just gonna go ahead and unfav this so I can fav it again.
Awesome chapter. It not only lived up to my expectations bot exceeded them and thats saying a lot taken how long I've had to build them.
Yay, it's updated!
Now there's nothing left to do but arrange a playdate for the two adult foal musicians. They both could use some time to relax and be taken care of.
YAY happy happy joy joy
Awwwwwwwwwww Yay, conflict resolution!
Tyrant I swear if the next chapter does not have them adorably playing with one another
4841920 You'll do what?
4842378 I shall... WRITE A COMMENT SAYING HOW DISPLEASED I AM!
Yes! That went really well all things considered, To bad Vinyl had to yell at Octy though, it wasn't pleasant but it had to be done. Glad they made up
now there's only one loss end I believe.....Bon Bon. Good chapter, keep it up.
4846942 Well, I don't think Bon-Bon's been mentioned once in this fic so far. It seems a bit late to just throw her into the plot. If she were established as Lyra's roommate, special somepony, and/or close friend a few chapters earlier, she could play a role. But considering her character tag isn't included, and neither is the other tag, I don't think Bon-Bon will be a part of what happens next.
4847552 Bon Bon has been referenced, in Lyra's very first appearance, by both her and Vinyl, and she's the one Lyra is afraid of being discovered by when she's having her diaper time.
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Thanks to all of you (including anyone I might have missed) from both Vector and I.
4848002 Oh, I see.
4832752 Tyrant Hoof: Welcome to The Prissy Pony's Padding: Episode 6. After nine years of development hopefully it will have been worth the wait.
Me: oh yes it was! It was perfect!
Tyrant Hoof: Good, but unfortunately episode 7 will have to be delayed for a few months. Thanks, and have fun!
Me: FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
4854201 Hey now, I said there 'hopefully' won't be a many months long wait. Totally different.
Gripping and heartfelt story.
With the long delay I almost dropped this story. Good thing I didn't as this chapter showed some nice plot progression, even though what happened wasn't really unexpected. Eh, it's a good story even without twists, so thanks for the update. I enjoyed it greatly.
I think this is is the only serious fic about this subject on the site; the only story that gets into the mindset of what it's like/what it means to be an adult baby/adult foal. And... Vinyl Scratch is best Mommy!
more plz love it