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Seems to me the Black Omen is spreading...
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A dark mood.
Loved the chronicles of riddick tie in.
Thing is, if they had taken the Griffin and Cat with them, and manipulated the portal and shelds. Tyler couldve gon Oniell on that battleship, and left them with a going away present from out old Earth pal, Oppenheimer.
th Darkness Sisters just want loads of followers and armada and destruction. Remove te folowers and armada, after all they demand to be treated to demonstrations of excessive overkill, and the alicorns can then be booted off world to go argue in the sand pit elsewhere.
Pity about those mind reading things, wouldve been nice for them to end up getting corupted by a self destructive mental hack virus.
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Nice idea, but we lack the tactical nuke for now. Another thing is: We do not know if they just couldn't take the nuke apart. For a magical nuke, he had to pe present and I doubt they would charge him up that much. they would rather shoot him since they learned about his magical ability to absorb unicorn magic. I don't know if a human tactical nuke would work either. This remains to be seen.
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Be intresting seeing how the Darkenss sisters deal with even a low level thing. After all, the only nuke never tested, was so simple, it was effectively slapping two chunks of metal tgether.
You seem to have lost a chapter to this story.
Dragonfox
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Lost a chapter?
All is fine with the chapter numbers as far as I see.
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I like to know what happen to the part of the story when he go in doctor hooves tartest and travel in time. the story jumps in time and is missing a lot of part that use to be there.
Dragonfox
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I checked the word count of all these 3 chapters of the Doctor Whooves Special and there is nothing missing.
I suppose you mean what happened in the meantime either in their travels in the TARDIS or in Equestria while they were travelling. Well, the "jumping" is just focus on certain things. Revealing everything would mean spoiling other things. You are right, there IS one part I left out. Something in Chapter 12, when Tyler was unconcious all of a sudden. If you mean that, bravo! You found something which is meant for Book Three. I did this on purpose, for it would be WAY too early to reveal it to the reader at this point. it would only answer questions not asked and would only confuse the reader or spoil the story for him.
If you meant something what happened after the Doctor was gone and Derpy was steering the TARDIS, then you are out of luck. I can only write so much travel before it simply gets boring. The TARDIS is fun and all, but the Doctor once put it into words most fitting:
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May be I was thinking of a different story. As I am reading a lot of story's, all at the same time. I sum times mix them up. Thank you for your time.
Dragonfox
Uh oh. I thought Mimesis is dead?
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Well... Sorta... First they sewed him together and brought him back from the brink of death (Lamira and Asira that is) and then he had a taste of his own terrible creation, the mind bug. So, he's still alive and kicking and will enter the next step of Changeling terror while in pursuit of our friends. More about that in the upcoming chapters.
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Is he really going to continue fighting Tyler knowing he's no match for him?
(shakes head) some people never learn.
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Some, however, learn some new tricks... And if the cards are mixed again, the odds are set anew again as well. Oh, this was already so much fun writing it, I'm eager to see the reactions once people see the next chapter in a couple of days.
That beginning...sound like something from God of War
Later, it sound like something from chronicle of Ruddicks...
Dude, you missed a freakin' golden opportunity for a Final Fantasy VII reference! *Pouts*
The final battle begins...
Sounds like the interrogation from The Chronicles of Riddick
I saw that reference.