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The pre-classical era and the missing connection between the alicorn war and written equestrian history.
It was a bit hard to mix the show and the story together, given how fast-paced the Magical Mystery Cure was. I think it turned out well.
Would have had the Rangers at DEFCON 1.5 during Sparks' (my nickname for Twilight ) test as the EoH were disabled at the time (or at least that's my head cannon for the MMC episode), as Equestria would have been extremely vulnerable. In my professional opinion, it's better to have wasted effort, then spilled blood. Other than that, the whole MMC situation felt rushed, but that's the same way it was in the actual episode.
I kinda want Tyler to achieve immortality. Then another part of me wants him to break it off with all three alicorns and become emotionless. So confusing
It's been so long since the last update It actually took me awhile to place which 'verse this story was.
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Well, Celestia only ordered them to stand down so Twilight could fix this. Since this is crossing both the plot line of the story as well as the show, there was little to be done to make it feel less rushed. Thus I came up with the add-on of Clover the Clever what stretched the chapter quite nicely.
And since there are no villains in this one day of a defenseless Equestria in the show I saw no need to change that in the story either. I can't say what the Rangers would have or should have done in case of an attack right then since despite their powers, they aren't ready to fight... yet.
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You'd have to be a god amongst authors (and then some) to make anything to do with the MMC episode not feel rushed. I wasn't saying that you could have changed it, but that it's pathetic that the writers of FiM were dumb enough to make an episode that was too rushed to make any real sense. Their fault, not yours.
They have at least four members that are ready for a fight, and have proved that they are ready, so they could have at least been keeping an eye out. Even one day of not being ready for a fight is something a leader of a combat outfit shouldn't be comfortable with. After all, it's that leader's responsibility to ensure that his personnel don't die for nothing. There is a difference between spending lives and wasting them, and if they had been attacked during the whole MMC fiasco, the opening shots would have resulted in wasted lives due to the defenders not being prepared to defend themselves and those under their protection. (I'm ex-US Army, so "not being ready for combat" is not an excuse that will fly with me )
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Well, you saw how unhappy Tyler was and he at least had someone on the lookout just in case. But four humans can not hope to defend every pony in the entire country. So if there would have been a citadel in the skies, that would be a disaster anyway.
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Even so, being on as high of alert as possible, with as many personnel as possible, allows you to react to situations faster than if you were in a stand-down readiness. The faster you react, the more likely you will be able to minimize those losses.
Down side to those high alert levels is that it can strain resources and exhaust personnel if it is maintained for an extended period of time. Well trained and well rested soldiers can maintain that level for at least two or three days before problems could start to develop.
They couldve stood down, of course, but then they couldve gone camping, in various places accross the country, that just happens to be strategic, with equipment for a bit of downtime training under exceptional circumstances, running on a tiered hot active, scramble, rest and recovery setup.
These guys are allowed to bend the rules to get results, why not have them more towards Special Ops end of things as Rangers, due to the small numbers, instead of bulk infantry etc?
Trouble is now its so long till the next canon sequence in Season 4, and Celestias back story still hasnt been lifted from the cutting room floor, so theres all sorts of fun to be going at.
I wonder what would happen if the recent Darpa stuff of Big Dog, faster than Usain Bolt, and the infantry armor that can withstand a 50 cal, dragon scale, reaction cloth, etc turned up.
Im still waiting for that research wall shield to be released thats been used to hold neutronium for research for at least the past decade.
Alicorn foals in a crystal sphere? A cross between Superman, and Rock Farming?
You don't know? Laura Fauster confirm it. Twilight is not immortal, the only one immortals are Celestia and Luna because they are goddess
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Even if that would be the case in my headcanon, does Tyler knows that?
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…no? Is he immortal?
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Tyler is not immortal. He said it himself that he is mortal.
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Is he going to stay that way? Humans can find useful to have a human King god
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Now... What sort of author would I be to spill the beans so early? Lightingace, shame on you! There are so many things to see and do for him to even make that decision... That is, if it even becomes his decision. Immortality will be an issue in this Tylerverse But remember what Derpy and the Doctor already heard:
Does that sound like Tyler is enduring the times?
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Yeah I kind of skip the doctor parts of the story, I was felling like I was trying to read it when suddenly you put the breaks all of the suddenly and we go into a detour. No offense I just don't that big of a fan of the doctor.
And why you suddenly sounded like Rarity for a second there…I'm speaking to her? If that is the case, hang in there, lady I still have hope the author will find you your special someone,
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The human you knew as Tyler is no more. Perhaps because he became something else hmmm?
But still, if future humans would come to Equestria it would only be wise for him to stay.
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"That was Tyler the Gray... I am Tyler the White."
Care to explain your theory? Sounds interesting.
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I was thinking in that way yes. But I am still not sure which way to go with it.
You said that the Tyler they all knew is gone. But that can refer to him having lost all of his memories of them. Or perhaps the 'Darkness sisters' did something to him that scrambled up his values. But i doubt that you will make him into an heartless monster.
Then there is the fact about what Celestia and Discord were talking about.
So I am not sure wether or not he becomes an Alicorn later on, or stays in his human form.
Afterall time is a fickle thing. Perhaps the timeline in which 'The Doctor' surfaced wasn't even in the correct dimension. Hell, you could even ignore everything that went on in there. Perhaps Tyler did something that changed the entirety of the timeline itself.
So jeah, I'll just wait till you finish more of the chapters.
Do Moar! Also the wizards in lotr are immortal because they're born from magic.
Thisss ssstory appearsss to have sssome sssnakesss in it
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Your help has been noted, thank you. As we speak, Samuel L. Jackson is being send to hunt down the snakes.
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You're welcome
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I go
There is something I don't get, What was that human specimen Lyra said? I don't get and even less that about eating cake, no really, I'm lost, what the hell was that?
And also, why is Tyler a moron? I'm with him, this was Twilight moment, not a family moment, staying behind was a very good thing, going in front…yeah I don't see why, honestly I think they all minus Tyler where the morons, and attack the poor guy without reason
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That with the specimen is an inside joke about her Anthropology. Like Tyler is specimen 1, Flynn Sam and Rachel are specimen 2 to 4. The thing with the cake is some sort of analogy: Live your life today, not tomorrow or next year. You know what I mean? If you worry all the time about the future, where would be your life?
From their point of view, there was no way he could spoil Twilight's moment and he should have stood next to her. You know? Otherwise it looks awkward that the herd mate isn't there to support her in her greatest moment. But they meant well, it's not that they bashed the guy for his decision to stay a bit out of the way.
Then again, I had to stay canon and he was not there in the show, so I had improvise a bit. Thus the humans are a bit in the background and wonder: "Hey... We're important figures as well, how is it that we don't stand more in the front rows? Or at least the lover and herd mate of the coronated princess?
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Je good point, you know, I still wonder if more humans will join the team, I still kind of wish 2 things, one that a human could be for Rarity and 2 and this is just a bit of a stretch if humans can get all sort of magic as soon as they discover they call, kind of cutie mark will it have a human with more…chaotic powers? I think it will be something like that stair painting, that will be awesome if they have a chaos caster in their team
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(Darn, he bested me for the 100th comment... Didn't paid attention...)
I gave it a thought or two who might be Rarity's special someone. And yes... this will be addressed in this book. After a bit of research, I came up with Hrithik Roshan, an indian movie actor as reference material to imagine something...
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This doesn't mean that Rarity gets someone indian as special someone, only that I gather reference material. The thing with Rarity and her human will be more of *cough*loveonfirstsight*cough*
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AWESOME! Yay, team human will get a new member and Rarity will get some love, they will only going to need one more and they will have 6 humans to activated the elements, in a what if scenario.
So he would rather put the majority of his herd through the event of his demise than possibly put himself through some form of suffering by becoming immortal?
Yeah, really noble sacrifice he's making there.
Yes Twilight is an alicorn now,... but what about Applejack!?
Dang, so many feels!
OH MY GOD YOU MADE ME CRY, YOU JERK!
I have a bad feeling about this, given context in previous chapters where celestia was talking about "him" being ready in the same context as Twilight..... and given the talk of immortality and mortality and Tyler's views on it....... Celestia is about to do something very stupid and Tyler will resent her for it......