Chapter 8: For Real This Time
"Greetings, creature. On behalf of the Ponies of Equestria, I thank you for being so patient with us. We did not mean to invade your domain and wish to open peaceful dialogue," Celestia said with what she hoped looked like a sincere smile. Hopefully the monster would understand her friendly tone and respond without violence.
And hopefully call off whatever it had called to it's aid.
As she stood there waiting for the monster's response, Celestia reflected on the situation with Cadance and Twilight.
When they had done the spell that sent that last of the free ponies to this world, Cadance and Twilight took a rather nasty hit from the backlash of the spell. Being not as old or as powerful as Celestia and Luna, they slipped into some type of coma and had yet to wake up. Several theories were proposed to why this happened. Being more magically attuned than most other creatures, they may have been shocked by the sudden displacement of magic. It could be that whatever went wrong with the spell and sent the other races elsewhere caused the backlash. Or maybe they caught some type of pathogen that was specific to alicorns. It was simply a matter of waiting and hoping things would get better.
Celestia's lips gave a small quirk. When Twilight woke up she would be rather upset she didn't get to be apart of this first contact situation. Well, that was if... No she would wake up. She and Cadance just needed time to heal. Anyways, depending on what way this meeting went it may be better that Twilight isn't awake. She appreciated her student's quick thinking and fierce intelligence, but when panic and uncertainty set in Twilight had the potential of becoming slightly... unhinged. And Celestia needed every ounce of sanity, patience, and calm to make this go right.
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Well... that was possibly the most solemn, serious thing I've heard ponies squeak yet. Considering that I'm surrounded by ponies with toothpick sized spears, and they are all giving me glares, I'd have to guess she's demanding the return of Pinkie and Fluttershy's safe return... or else. Which would be intimidating if it wasn't so gosh darn cute.
Assuming that they are demanding the return of the Elements, I'd have to think about my options. I currently have two Elements of Harmony captured, so I've effectively disarmed Equestria's version of a WMD. Do I want to give that back to them? Despite their dainty exterior, for all I know they really are here to take over Earth! Even if they weren't, what would they do to me? Would I get stoned too?
... “THERE IS AS YET INSUFFICIENT DATA FOR A MEANINGFUL ANSWER.” Ergo, I need to play for time. But how do I distract these ponies until I can think of a course of action? And while I'm at it, I might as well have some fun messing with them.
Giving my best "I'm totally sincere and innocent, and am in no way leading you on" smile, look Celestia square in her face, and say, "So, I hear you like bananas."
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Y U NO WRITE MADAFAKAAAAA
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Well if you want to read more, you should read the author notes. IT MIGHT HAVE IMPORTANT INFORMATION PERTAINING TO YOUR QUESTION.
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nothing wrong with tiny pony :c
Writer's block. One of the worst things that can happen to you as a writer. Even though I don't write fanfics, I understand it when you just can't think of anything. Just keep up the good work when you think of a good way to continue the story.
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So, the reason you're having trouble expanding this is that the Tiny Pony's group is tiny.
a this is still good
This could very well be cannon to the tinyhammer fics, The timeline would go
-ponies- 2000 years -dark dude- nouther 2013 years (give or take) -humans- 40,000 years -Angry marines- ??? years? -time travel- -Profit-
WMD?
3629230 Weapon Of Mass Destruction
ahhahahahahahahahahha great fics man images5.fanpop.com/image/photos/26600000/yes-her-man-is-a-good-job-indeed-she-knows-arthur-and-gwen-26617961-424-239.gif
3629549 cool.
love that last line,
speaking of your group you might want to see if you can get any of the other members to advertise it on their blogs to get the word out
this story is interesting and entertaining. but... I think what may be keeping interest away is your slow updates combined with tiny chapters. maybe getting chapters out sooned or releasing 1k-2k word chapters would increase the attention this story and your group gets.
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My muse is firing blanks at me. This is meant to be more for my entertainment than other peoples, though I appreciate the positive feedback.
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...... I should go to sleep
night........
your welcome!
sorry. was reading in bed using my nexus 10 tablet, and zonked out came to and my screen was off and hitting the power button wasn't bringing me to it's unlock from sleep mode screen. so I got out of bed to trouble shoot it. got my tablet back up and running now! more ponies now!
the displayed pony image is way bigger than a thumb though....
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And?
4143473 "How will they take being the size of your thumb?"...
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Dude, I'm not going to go get a commission for this. If you know a better picture, send it to me. Otherwise, it's a cute picture of filly twilight to draw readers in.
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4144650 i have lots , buuut they're either nsfw or human nsfw.....
Well, this has been just adorable.
Would love to see how this turns out, but too bad about the Hiatus bit. Thanks for writing it, at any rate. 
I love it, I really love it.
Nicely done! XD