Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie have done a lot of stuff together. Not just normal stuff like hoofacures (i don't know how to spell it don't judge me) and spa days, but taken down all sorts of baddies.
A living nightmare with god like powers bent on plunging the world into total darkness? Scary, but more of a minor annoyance.
Vampiric Bug Queen plotting to take over Canterlot? Got bug zapped.
Spirit of Chaos? ... Well they really didn't do much, but it worked out in the end.
But giant ape thing that was probably carnivorous, twice the size of an Ursa Major, and able to swallow ponies whole?
Well, as Rarity once put it: THE. WORST. POSSIBLE. THING!
"Pinkie, I'm scared" whimpered Fluttershy, "He was just staring and baring his teeth at me. Then when I tried to fly away he just laughed at me."
Pinkie hated to see her friend like this. Sure, she too was slightly traumatized from almost ending up like one of her cupcakes, but no Pinkie was going to let their friend down!
"Cheer up Fluttershy! Once everypony finds us we'll get out of here in no time. I bet the girls are out looking for us right now!"
On the inside however, Pinkie wasn't feeling so confident. When the Princesses did the emergency evacuation in Ponyville a lot of things went wrong. The Dark Terror Twiddlywink had already destroyed and/or enslaved most of the world. In a last ditch effort, mages, unicorns, and magical creatures came together to cast a giant trans-dimensional teleportation to escape the vicious tyrant.
However the last minute surprise attack derailed the casting. Thankfully the spell worked and teleported everybeing. Unfortunately the spell went off target in more ways than one. While ponies materialized together, they were missing everybeing else. They also materialized someplace really dark and damp. And worst of all, nopony could feel any magic! Earth ponies were as weak as pegasi, pegasi couldn't fly, and unicorns couldn't use magic. The Princesses still could, but they were running on a limited supply that they didn't know if they could keep regenerating.
At first everything was so strange. It looked like they ended up in some weird cave, until Rarity recognized some of the things in the room. Like shirts that could be used to make a hundred dresses. A Washer Machine the size of Ponyville Square. Now ponies were cold, hungry and scared. So the princesses organized the guards including three of the Elements of Harmony and sent them up the giant steps to the light coming from under the colossal door...
"But what if he wants to eat us?" moaned Fluttershy.
Snapping out of her depressing thoughts, Pinkie showed Fluttershy another smile and said, "Silly Filly! He already tried to eat me remember? He must not like how ponies taste though. Which is weird because I always thought I'd taste really good."
With a soft sigh, Fluttershy looks out through the distorted view the giant glass gives them.
"I just hope they don't make the giant angry. There's not telling WHAT it would do if we hurt it. And I'm not sure we could stop it if it wants to hurt us..."
WOW, half a month of nothing, and when another chapter finally comes up it's only 500 frakin words big... I was NOT expecting a reason for the ponies to arrive that was actually pretty good to explain their appearances. Very nice.
Damn shame all it does is make me more intrested in something that is pretty damn obviously going to be abandoned.
I'm loving the idea it's going around, and the small things (one of them being literal, what with the Equestrians sizes) being put into the fic helps it find it's own unique grounds. Like the language barrier, and newfound lack of magic crippling all of them, I'm lovin that!
But the lack of content is a pretty big alert to the lack of motivation/determination/whateverthefuck keeps writers writing. If this is the rate stuffs gonna come...
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I'm throwing this offensive crap around because I'm finding it really does indeed suck, I was liking this!
I agree with the guy below me. But I know your acking inspiration right now...
The plot on how they ended up there seems quite dark
amazing keep it up
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I hope I don't abandon it. As for updates... this isn't even on my top 20 of priority right now. If I feel I absolutely cannot continue this, I will let it be known. But any ENCOURAGEMENT would go a long way.
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Will be sporadic, but I will keep it up piece by glorious piece.
story thoughts
new poe idea
great set up for both a reason they left and for a funny
(o no Twiddlywink fallowed us, human walks in steps on him, oops)
needs a villain, Twiddlywink was good but totally outmatched if he fallows them, see above, seeing how this is a random slice of life comedy perhaps a brony hater room mate or parent that are hero has to hide the pony's from
also if Twiddlywink dose end up past, the pony will still be stuck here unless they could be recharged
would need to find a mana well, or something
sorry about going on and on just my thought
to sum up, awesome, totally looking forward to more
*sees 500 word*
*Brings out the Sledge hammer of motivation*
now hold still....
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NOT TODAY! CELESTIA BODY SLAM!
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2783995 I apologize for that confusing mess of a comment that was brought into existance by the great need to sleep, and confusion of not being able to determine whether the day had been crap or excellent.
That's going to be the last time I comment during the midnight hours.
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Tiddlywinks the dark a mad tyrant forgotten god of darkness that used to rule with hate and destruction. He was cast away to a forgotten place lost in the Everfree but his prison weakened and he gathered enough power from the land around him of forgotten souls that hated being where they were and freed himself. He seeks to gain revenge against Celestia and gain the heart of a fair Princess Luna that he used to know as Nightmare Moon before the whole banishment deal. Snips and tuck where ya can if ya want just an idea for a tyrant.
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I'll be brutally honest. It sounds cliche.
I'm trying to make this story lighthearted and whimsical. This includes Twiddlywink. If you did something like 'he feeds off the misery of ponies forced to watch Jersey Shore' that would be something I'd consider.
2785624 Alright really I'm just throwing an idea out there not really much of creating a villain creator
Heheheh eue, dude, this story is perfection, chapters are short but I love it XD