This is your singing short description I hope it finds you well, you're invited to read this fic cause I think you're really swell! Inside you'll find romance and comedy, won't you come and have some fun with me!
So Big Mac pretty much has Luna along with Pinkie Pie,Rainbow Dash and Twilight in his herd. Still waiting on Spike to get some from Rarity, AppleJack and Fluttershy along with Celestia most likely wanting to join his herd
2178624 Maybe just a little. I think given the circumstances though, she'll be willing to forgive herself her self blasphemy.
2178767 There's probably not much I could say to really convince people at this point that the herds aren't going to end up perfectly symmetrical, is there?
2178884 All sources point to yes. Actually this was originally supposed to be Spike and Rarity's chapter, but Pinkie kind of shanghaied things
2179542 Oh she could, but self gratification is never as good as having someone else taking care of you. It's that people factor that pushes it to the next level.
2188202 Clop, in this fic? Never, I only write tasteful love scenes...
...okay seriously, I give it 50/50. Spike and Rarity's relationship isn't as easy to casually push forward without feeling like I'm being completely untrue to their characters. It's easy with Pinkie's herd, because her and Dash are so impulsive, and Mac is rather laid back. Twilight is the only one with reservations. When it comes time for Spike and Rarity, I want to make sure it feels right. So we'll see how things progress.
2192391 Glad to see you'll make their relationship more serious than the others. It's good to see that there's gonna be actual love between the two rather than just random sex.
I really enjoyed reading your story so far The clop parts were written really tastefully (especially the last one, ha!) in my opinion. I shall track and see what you shall cook up next!
As someone who came to this story recently, doesn't usually like anthro and thinks herds in general are a poorly excused (yet fun) topic I've got to say I'm enjoying myself. Yet there was one moment I felt like throwing my hands up and leaving this just sitting here without a second glance and that was when I realized you'd appended the disclaimer onto every chapter. I thought the point had been made the first time and felt talked down to every time since.
2507289 Well first off I'm glad you've stuck with it and are enjoying the story. As for the disclaimer, I certainly didn't intend for it to make anyone feel talked down to. My rational for attaching it to every chapter was based on the fact that I have updated it repeatedly throughout writing the story, and have both added and removed content from the disclaimer as certain elements of the story grew, changed, or had to be retroactively edited. Thus I wanted to make sure when I made such a change that anyone reading the story, whether they were just starting, mid way through, or waiting for the next chapter to be released would have the most up to date info right there without needing to look for it. I never even considered before now that it might come across as condesinding.
2507365 Honestly, it came off as annoyingly insecure at first but when I got to chapter eight I was wondering whether you believed your audience was able to read. I'm glad there was a better reason.
I doubt anyone else is as bothered by it so it's not necessary but someone taking a deeper interest in the story is probably going to stay to read the first comment if it's by the author and there is a site function that lets you include author's notes as well. That's what I'm used to seeing when a story has updates for long time readers and I honestly never considered that someone might do it differently.
EDIT: Harry Dresden has never worn, nor will he ever wear that hat.
2507447 Well in the interest of seeming less insecure and more charitable to my readers' perceived intelligence, I've cut the disclaimer down to just the first and last chapters. That should realistically be sufficient...and a lot less work than updating everything every time I tweak something.
And yeah, I know he doesn't and won't. But damn if he wouldn't look boss if he did.
I was putting off reading this chapter, hoping that more would magically appear by the time I got to it...
You have a true talent for writing. I have really enjoyed every aspect of this story, and I really look forward to the next installment, whenever it may be completed!
“He suggested I wait on it and see, but also said that ‘since I doubt you’ll do that, at least promise me you won’t do something crazy.’”
It's like he doesn't even KNOW her.
After all, Luna was sister to the mentor of one of her bestest friends. That alone made her someone Pinkie had been determined to get to know better, and now she would be able to do so in all kinds of fun and intimate ways.
Dat Pinkie logic. "Hey, I know you kind of well! Wanna do it? We can share my husband!" ... I just realized that this isn't a Big Mac harem story. It's a PINKIE PIE harem story.
Oh, my me... Did Celestia just take her own name in vain?
So Big Mac pretty much has Luna along with Pinkie Pie,Rainbow Dash and Twilight in his herd. Still waiting on Spike to get some from Rarity, AppleJack and Fluttershy along with Celestia most likely wanting to join his herd
Not bad.
Will the next chapter resume on Spike and Rarity's relationship? I kind of want to see more on its development.
A couple of typos near the end, but otherwise a great chapter.
I'm wondering why Luna couldnt use this technique on herself during her millennium of imprisonment. Maybe its too intense to maintain on yourself?
glad to see another update and things just got more interesting
I just love this story
Best ending to a chapter ever!
Commence read.
Well that Luna and Pinkie time.
Only to still be walked in on.
"Oh my me" HAHAHAHAH that line made my day!
2178624
Maybe just a little. I think given the circumstances though, she'll be willing to forgive herself her self blasphemy.
2178767
There's probably not much I could say to really convince people at this point that the herds aren't going to end up perfectly symmetrical, is there?
2178884
All sources point to yes. Actually this was originally supposed to be Spike and Rarity's chapter, but Pinkie kind of shanghaied things
2179542
Oh she could, but self gratification is never as good as having someone else taking care of you. It's that people factor that pushes it to the next level.
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Glad you're glad
2182569
Thank you
2182592
Thank you
2185973
If Luna could only have thought to lock the door...can't imagine how she let that slip her mind.
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2187984 Will there be clop between the two?
2188202
Clop, in this fic? Never, I only write tasteful love scenes...
...okay seriously, I give it 50/50. Spike and Rarity's relationship isn't as easy to casually push forward without feeling like I'm being completely untrue to their characters. It's easy with Pinkie's herd, because her and Dash are so impulsive, and Mac is rather laid back. Twilight is the only one with reservations. When it comes time for Spike and Rarity, I want to make sure it feels right. So we'll see how things progress.
2192391 Glad to see you'll make their relationship more serious than the others. It's good to see that there's gonna be actual love between the two rather than just random sex.
Oh my me...I do that sometimes.
I am waiting for see.
I really enjoyed reading your story so far The clop parts were written really tastefully (especially the last one, ha!) in my opinion.
I shall track and see what you shall cook up next!
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Thank you
As someone who came to this story recently, doesn't usually like anthro and thinks herds in general are a poorly excused (yet fun) topic I've got to say I'm enjoying myself.
Yet there was one moment I felt like throwing my hands up and leaving this just sitting here without a second glance and that was when I realized you'd appended the disclaimer onto every chapter.
I thought the point had been made the first time and felt talked down to every time since.
2507289
Well first off I'm glad you've stuck with it and are enjoying the story. As for the disclaimer, I certainly didn't intend for it to make anyone feel talked down to. My rational for attaching it to every chapter was based on the fact that I have updated it repeatedly throughout writing the story, and have both added and removed content from the disclaimer as certain elements of the story grew, changed, or had to be retroactively edited. Thus I wanted to make sure when I made such a change that anyone reading the story, whether they were just starting, mid way through, or waiting for the next chapter to be released would have the most up to date info right there without needing to look for it. I never even considered before now that it might come across as condesinding.
2507365
Honestly, it came off as annoyingly insecure at first but when I got to chapter eight I was wondering whether you believed your audience was able to read. I'm glad there was a better reason.
I doubt anyone else is as bothered by it so it's not necessary but someone taking a deeper interest in the story is probably going to stay to read the first comment if it's by the author and there is a site function that lets you include author's notes as well. That's what I'm used to seeing when a story has updates for long time readers and I honestly never considered that someone might do it differently.
EDIT: Harry Dresden has never worn, nor will he ever wear that hat.
2507447
Well in the interest of seeming less insecure and more charitable to my readers' perceived intelligence, I've cut the disclaimer down to just the first and last chapters. That should realistically be sufficient...and a lot less work than updating everything every time I tweak something.
And yeah, I know he doesn't and won't. But damn if he wouldn't look boss if he did.
Story still going?
2569581
Story still going, life is just going a little faster at the moment. I'm not giving up on it yet.
2572772 good to hear the story still alive.
I was putting off reading this chapter, hoping that more would magically appear by the time I got to it...
You have a true talent for writing. I have really enjoyed every aspect of this story, and I really look forward to the next installment, whenever it may be completed!
In conclusion, I must say..
MOAR!!!
It's like he doesn't even KNOW her.
Dat Pinkie logic. "Hey, I know you kind of well! Wanna do it? We can share my husband!"
... I just realized that this isn't a Big Mac harem story. It's a PINKIE PIE harem story.