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1090288 Because she's not foolish. In her last attempt she put a ridiculous number of guards on the Elements on the off chance that the bearers would reach them (which paid off). Any action against Canterlot would need a contingency for dealing with the Elements.
This chapter had grand plans being made , characters being developed , and even a hint or two of comedy ...
1091229 I wasn't talking about the gems actually - why would she make such a deal out of them is she successfully prevented them from being used before is a separate question - but why does she hate Pinkie? None of the mane 6 except Twilight did jack shit to stop her except for getting into one fight with her soldiers which accomplished nothing. They are totally background ponies for her.
On a separate note, eagerly anticipating Chrissy, Discord & Princesses... involvement.
1091250 I don't get the feeling that she hates Pinkie personally, it's more like she's an obstacle that's getting away. What she hates is not getting her way.
It's not Pinkie specifically, it's Equestrians in general she has issue with. Equestria should have been a ripe and easy feeding ground, lots of love, very little in the way of defenses. Only it didn't really work out that way for her, and she let a stupid slip up ruin everything. She feels cheated out of what should have been an easy win, and is bitter about it. So this time around she's not holding back, hence Discord.
Plus she really, really disliked the time she had to spend listening to Pinkie's party suggestions while disguised as Cadence.
1100172 Well here's hoping I can convince you it's a good wrench. 1103528 Pinkie breaks many things, physics, 4th walls, princesses... 1119025 Thank ya kindly
“Oh come now Chrysalis,” Discord pouted. “Are you really going to make us fight over the children? Next you’ll be saying you plan to take the house as well.”
A villainous alliance with Discord is always tricky. Good try though, Chryssi. At least you unleashed an ancient enemy of Celestia to annoy her. That's something.
Bad ass exits
bite our royal backside this line made me think of Bender so much
Why is Chrysalis after the elements? Did she taste the rainbow in this AU? Why would she be after anypony but Twilight, Cadance and Shining?
1090288 Because she's not foolish. In her last attempt she put a ridiculous number of guards on the Elements on the off chance that the bearers would reach them (which paid off). Any action against Canterlot would need a contingency for dealing with the Elements.
This chapter had grand plans being made , characters being developed , and even a hint or two of comedy ...
BUT WHERE IS THE ROMANCE!!
1091229 I wasn't talking about the gems actually - why would she make such a deal out of them is she successfully prevented them from being used before is a separate question - but why does she hate Pinkie? None of the mane 6 except Twilight did jack shit to stop her except for getting into one fight with her soldiers which accomplished nothing. They are totally background ponies for her.
On a separate note, eagerly anticipating Chrissy, Discord & Princesses... involvement.
1091250 I don't get the feeling that she hates Pinkie personally, it's more like she's an obstacle that's getting away. What she hates is not getting her way.
1091250
It's not Pinkie specifically, it's Equestrians in general she has issue with. Equestria should have been a ripe and easy feeding ground, lots of love, very little in the way of defenses. Only it didn't really work out that way for her, and she let a stupid slip up ruin everything. She feels cheated out of what should have been an easy win, and is bitter about it. So this time around she's not holding back, hence Discord.
Plus she really, really disliked the time she had to spend listening to Pinkie's party suggestions while disguised as Cadence.
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Romance be coming, never fear.
Hmm. Not sure I like this wrench being thrown into the story, but I definitely like the way you're writing it. Discord was pulled off beautifully.
Okay that's just a fucking brilliant way to pull Discord into the story.
1100172
Well here's hoping I can convince you it's a good wrench.
1103528
Pinkie breaks many things, physics, 4th walls, princesses...
1119025
Thank ya kindly
A villainous alliance with Discord is always tricky.
Good try though, Chryssi. At least you unleashed an ancient enemy of Celestia to annoy her. That's something.
So no Twilestia, and there's Sparity.
My enjoyment of this fic is waning fast.....
Frankly, including villains in this story just feels needless. There's enough interpersonal drama to satisfy a need for conflict.