Sweetie Belle with a schlong....
And yet I will read this one

Hmmmm...
This story seems vaguely familiar.

But I liked it, great writing as always rape train

* Notices the new story while in public library* *reads it*...*crosses legs* Damn it Rape Train!

This is gonna get featured, isn't it?

Seeing the name Little Pip makes me want to see you make a rapefic of FoE

I'm just faving it for the image.

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Oh god no.

Damn that rape train.

A few minor errors were it should have he instead of she, but still an enjoyable read.

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I'll eat my hate if this somehow gets featured...

A colt version of Sweetie raping Spike? I can dig this.

I'm usually not a fan of gender bending characters but I'll give this one a read.

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Don't give him any crazy ideas like that. He just may do it...

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I had a few r63 requests in my PM's and I started to recall the story you made and borrowed the general idea of it. So yeah, props to you for writing it.

I liked it. Sleep rape is actually a fun fetish to read.

After reading this,My mind is full of fuck...

Not bad at all. Other then a few mismatched words where *he* and *she* but still good regardless.

I thought Sweetie's rule 63 counterpart name was Sweepy belle....

1836254 Well I think "Silver Bell" works a bit better.

In other news, this is some fucked up shit up in this fic.

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Sweepy belle just sounds retarded.

Oh you and your rapefics RTE. Please never stop writing. I swear I would feel empty if you stopped...

Heh. A story where the rapist have a bit of regret. I think that's a first for you.

I always find each story of yours gets better and better each time a new one comes out.

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NO! FoE doesn't need to have a rapefic based off of it! It's too good to be soiled like that!!

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Fallout Equestria is so over rated, it deserves to be raped in a way.

Helpful!

Can't wait for the next story rape train. Thanks for the shout out

And the worst part was, Silver was in heat.

Heat = estrus.

Stallions/colts don't go into heat.

inb4 someone else says it, also inb4 Regidar.

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Thanks for being one of the more knowledgeable people of this site. Took someone long enough to point that out.

I was just going to say that thing about heat. Whether or not heat would make someone sex crazy is also speculative.
Anyway, ignoring that, as it is a 'thing' in fiction, there was a lot of "autocorrect" ish errors here, and- yeah. It wasn't great, but it was fine. I just wanted to mention the heat part, and as you seem to be aware of it, you won't be getting a thumbs up.

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In fact, there are already two. I don't remember either title, though.

One had Pip get dehorned, drugged, and forced into prostitution (straight sex, mind you; the other female slaves threw themselves at her afterwards) set fairly late in FoE, and the other was straight up rape right after she first left the stable.

The first even had "dehorned" as a mock achievement. Quite a... well, not a nice touch. More like a mean one.

Addendum: I found the first part of the first one again! It's called "Fallout:Equestria - Harsh Realities". Pretty heavy stuff, too. The rest is still lost somewhere on the net.

Um... I... sorry, not feeling it. Rape fics tend to irk me a little, Foal clops as well. The combination just weirded me out and I ended up breaking off early. *Loads RPG* Allow me to apply this impromptu remote "Rape-train" breaking system. *Derails*

Little Pip

Little Pip i see what you did there! right?
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regidar is banned IIRC

If I see the fucking word "dragoness" one more time, I'm gonna lose it. Flutterbitch style

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its Rule 63.

Wait....this is by rape train exspress. Why am I NOT reading it?!

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Nope, they're most certainly are not.
And keep them that way.

I like the bit when the little horsie makes the feature box :3
Thank you Rape-tranin express your contribution to the literature of the world has been most appreciated.
I think this would be better if you kept the characters in their original forms, it's almost as bad as OC's

Thank you for reading my comment <3

Also I'm pretty sure dragons and horsies can't have babies :3
I mean your fictional world and all but thats not how cum works ;-; and I'm pretty sure dragons lay eggs at least all the ones I know do!
Of course internal fertilisation is my fetish :3 I like it very descriptive of the current situation.

this has like four glaring typos/errors in the first two paragraphs alone. and bang, zoom, straight to the featured box?

get your shit together, fimfic

1842521 There's typos and shit all throughout the story, like words that shouldn't be used, missing words, and all kinds of homonyms. Plus there's the already mentioned 'heat' for a male pony and the (once again)already mentioned getting the different species dragon knocked-up that just make you want to strangle a colt.

But it's porn, so people eat it up. Sadly, (almost)nobody cares about these things anymore, so stuff like this gets featured.

Blah, blah, blah, RTE, I've said it before: Fix the numerous, obvious errors and perhaps use more believable reasons for his need to boink Spines (like, maybe have him, you know, be a typical male with very male thoughts? You'd find it hard to fight your erection/be more tempted to rape somepony if they were walking around naked all the time, after all)

EDIT: I don't understand how a 1.5 ratio Like/Dislike can even get featured.

1836476 There was rape in it. Not specific scenes but there was definitely rape.

Like those kids in the beginning. And that Zebra. And those bullies when Pip was a slave.

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1836476 Yes, let's whine about things we don't like for the sake of whining.