Really? Reeaaalllllyyyy?! This is the second interlude in a row! What is wrong with you man? I! Sheogorath! Demand more M'aiq! Give me my M'aiq! I don't care about these darn interludes! Wait. These people wont hear more me! Never mind. Forget about M'aiq. Make more interludes, I want them to hear more of my glorious voice.
Now we got that out of the way. Come my little guttersnips, I have a few comments to answer.
TheArchive said:
Pretty great so far. I didn't notice many mistakes, the story is funny, and everyone seems in-character. You now must have a running gag where M'aiq tries to give Shining Armor a belly rub everytime they see each other, regardless of whether or not they're alone.
That said...
M'aiqxShining OTP!
A running gag where M'aiq tries to belly rub Shining Armor. You sir and/or madam have thought of of the most idiotic, pee brain... AH! just pulling your leg. You sir or madam deserve a chicken dinner or two frost trolls tearing you from limb from limb, your choice.
Now as for shipping M'aiq and Shining Armor... all I really can say is this http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=umDr0mPuyQc&list=WL89ED7FD1F02B7A28 Yes that is a url. The poor man who made this interlude doesn't know what he is doing. What? I have to keep it at least somewhat family friendly.
Now one more comment.
MetaKnight145 said:
What about Stanley the talking grapefruit from passwall?
Why, he's right here. Say hi Stanley.
"HHHiiiiiiiiii!"
Poor boy. Has a high pitched squeal every time he speaks. Never been the same when he was cut in half...
Emotions set aside, I feel GREAT!
Now BEGONE! I have to spread order throughout the land! HA! Didn't see that one coming did you, Discord?
Best Skyrim crossover ever.
You need to also include a jealous Applejack.
Well, Jyggalag IS Sheagorath's alternate personality... Or is it the other way around? Bah, the daedric God of order, law and entropy is gone anyhow! Say... If M'aiq had a kitten/colt with Shining Armor (what? nobody knows how ponies breed, so it's not impossible!) would it's name be M'aiq the Shining? (Or something similar... Pony naming convenions are WEIRD.) What would it look like? Some kind of wingless hypagriff?
...should probably not think so hard about these kinds of things. They haunt me, so write more and keep my poor gutterbrain occupied!