Now that the tub was adequately full of water, you call out for the earth colt. "Sugar!"
A shy, white pony with a two-shades-pink mane and all-pink tail opens the door to see what he was called for. As he turned his head, you notice that his left eye seemed different than the other: the pupil was green, indicating that it was dead and blind. You pitied the poor colt for having to deal with only half vision, but after further analysis of him you could see the eye wasn't the only thing worthy of pity. With a snow white coat, pink hair with a pink bow and a muzzle that resembled a filly's, you just knew that he was going to have a tough life.
Sugarette walked over to you in a very shy manner. He had just met you not too long ago, and would take some getting used to. He stops before you and then looks over to the bath and realizes what was to come. He accepts his fate by taking off his small bow and tries to jump into the tub himself. He misses, due to the tub's towering height over him. You assist him from where he hangs over the edge,and he squirms in your grip. When he's finally in, he softly hits you to show his disapproval of your actions.
Ignoring the blow of foalish rebellion, you grab the shampoo next to you and squirt some into your palm. Sugarette instantly backs off at the sight of the product. You slightly sigh and show the illiterate colt the label. "It's all-natural. No chemicals," you explain, remembering a tip you heard about how he disliked chemicals. Sugarette looks quizzically at the bottle for a few more seconds before moving back towards you with a skeptical but trusting mood.
You begin the bath by bringing your soap-filled hand to the feminine-like colt and lathering the "all-natural" gel through Sugar's pink mane. Sugarette fidgets around at the feeling of a stranger handling his hair, so much that you are unable to thoroughly get in between each lock. "Sugar, please stay still," you ask kindly. Sugarette stops for a bit, but when you continue lathering he starts up again. "Sugar..." you warn. Sugar doesn't heed the warning though, and is now beginning to not only back away, but push you away. "Sugar!" you say impatiently to the colt, stopping him cold in his tracks.
Sugarette then looks down guiltily and starts to tear up. You heart sinks, and you move to comfort the earth colt. "Sugar, I'm sorry," you start, now much quieter than before. "I didn't mean to snap at you. I was just, impatient, that's all." Sugarette looks up at you and wipes a tear off his cheek, giving you a chance to fully make him feel better. "Look, I'm a friend," you explain while wiping his other cheek gingerly. "Just let me finish my job and everything will be fine." Sugarette nods in approval and let's you finish the task uninterrupted, which takes in all about am minute due to the colt's filly-like long hair.
Now it was time for the rinsing. You dip two cupped hands in the water and quickly pull them back on contact with a yelp. The water was bone cold! You know Sugarette liked cold water, which explains why you never turned the hot knob, but you never expected it to be this cold! You look at the content earth colt sitting in the arctic water and stare at him with shock. "How are you not frozen?" you ask with pure wonder. Sugarette giggles a bit at your shock, making you realize that, thankfully, he had become more comfortable with you.
Ignoring the pain for the sake of finishing your job, you dip your hands back in the water and quickly pour the water over Sugarette's head. Sugar flinches slightly at first contact with the water, but gets used to it after the second time. His mane takes about seven rinses, again due to the hair's length.
You lift up the colt's flank and sweetly ask him to keep it there. He cooperates, fully used to your presence, and you thank him. Grabbing the organic hair soap next to you, you squirt another handful and begin the cleaning process on his tail. The tail is also the same length as a normal filly's, so this takes you just as long as it took you to clean his mane, minus the fidgeting.
And now it was time for the second and, thankfully, final time you have to submerge your hands in the chilly water in order to rinse his tail. You move a bit quicker this time in hopes of getting the painful task over faster. Your hopes are met, and even though it took around thirty seconds last time, it now took half that. Satisfied with your work, you decide that now bathtime was over.
Reaching one last time for a few seconds into the water, you yank the plug and pull your hand straight out. You then turn to Sugarette, who is holding out his hooves to you. You smile at the true realization that now you were fully friends, you lift him up high and place him softly on the ground. You then reach over to the towel next to you, making Sugar look at you questioningly. You then realize that the towel was to his left, and so he couldn't see what you were grabbing. He shies back a bit before you bring the towel over to his right, showing him it wasn't a weapon you were grabbing. He sighs at the sight and walks closer to you so you may dry him off.
You start off by slowly rubbing the cloth over the colt's head, speeding up slightly so you didn't startle the introversal pony. He doesn't mind your motions, and gladly lets you finish his mane, then his tail, and finally his torso and hooves.
Now that all was set and done, you put the towel away and dismiss the little colt. He puts on his bow automatically and walked towards the door. When he reached the threshold, though, he stopped and turned his head to you. Apparently, the once-shy colt was now waiting for his new friend to follow! Taking his hint, you walk over to the door and lead the way to whatever fun activity you were doing next.
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Sugarette Stilez
Can't wait!
Awwwww cute story
P.s. maybe you can read mine called my day in ponyville
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Name: Rising Knight
Race: Unicorn
Home-town: Unknown
Appearance: Dark Grey with a Black Mane and tail. Green eyes. Always carries two swords strapped to his back, named Tsuki no me (Eye of the moon) and Taiyō no me (Eye of the sun).
Cutie Mark: Two crossed swords, each with a symbol engraved in them. (One with the sun, the other with the moon)
Abilities: Highly skilled in Combat Magic, usually involving his two blades, which can draw strength from the sun and moon. Is able to merge with a shadow and appear from any other shadows nearby, and has a unique set of abilities, that draw their power from the sun and moon, known as the celestial style techniques. Able to copy the unique abilities of those he comes into physical contact with, and can change into different species of creatures, (though his overall colour scheme remains the same), both of these powers were attained as a result of the experiments performed on him for the past 6 years.
Bio: Found in the wilderness at the age of 5 with no memories of his past, the only clue to his identity a small bracelet with his name on one side and an engraving of the sun and moon on the other. Raised by the two who found him, who turned out to be master assassins. He and his stepsister were trained in the art of fighting from the shadows, and were taught the true meaning of being an assassin. "An assassin does not use their skills for profit or power, but to help those who are in need or are unable to help themselves". At the age of thirteen, while wandering through the forest with his parents, they were attacked by a mysterious cloaked figure. His parents were killed, his sister was forced to flee and he was taken to a lab and experimented on in an attempt to create a living weapon. After each experiment, he was forced to fight another inmate to the death.
This went on for six years, during which time he became close to a changeling, to the point that he considered her family. The final experiment involved the replication of an ancient demon, that had been created by Discord during the war between him and the Royal sisters, which was then sealed inside his body. However, the experiment was deemed a failure as something had cause said replica's personality to become the opposite of the original, making it a Dark Guardian (A demon who would rather protect than kill). They decided that the subject had reached the end of its usefulness, and resolved to kill him the next day.
However, fate smiled on him, as that night, a unicorn broke in and aided his escape. However, while they were fleeing the facility, they were attacked, and the young unicorn sacrificed her life to save him. It was his younger sister. Her last words to him were "Don't go dying on me, and make sure you help ponies when you can, you hear. That's my dying wish, and my birthday wish too. And you know the rules, always do the first thing the birthday foal asks you to do, and always respect somepony's dying wish". With that, she used a forbidden magic that transformed her body into a living explosive, killing their pursuers and supposedly their leader, and gravely injuring Knight.
His survival was only possible as the changeling, Hollow Armour, whom he had befriended, managed to escape her cell and save his life, despite the warnings of other changelings that she would be cast out of the hive and killed if she ever returned. Knowing that she sacrificed her place in her old family, he invited her to be part of his, believing his sister would not want him to abandon his friend. Now, he and Hollow wander the world, searching for clues as to his birth family, and always getting involved in fighting injustices in the places they visit. He also gets into arguments with Rising Shadow, the Dark Guardian sealed inside him, mostly due to disagreements in regards to how much force is actually required when fighting.
Personality: Very serious in nature. Does not like to see others get hurt and will always step in when he can. Willing to lay down his life for those he cares about, though there are few, due to his reluctance to become emotionally close to anypony after losing his surrogate family. Does not usually talk much unless it is a conversation with a friend. Finds it painful to talk about his past, but does not avoid the subject if it comes up, at least not with those he trusts.
Great story DerpsandDinks! Looking forward to seeing what new OC's will appear now, and the more interesting reactions!
D'aww, that was cute.
1740137 I...I-uh, don't think that this is that type of story... to be honest. Its a rather comical story, hee-hee! Plus, he said to Pm him, Eh-heh-heh...
1740137>>1740617 Have to agree with Fyre. He seems like a Gary Stew, and I don't do Gary Stews. Sorry.
Damn. I'm gonna be in over my head here, aren't I? So, here's what I'll do: occasionally, I'll call a standstill. This means I'm stuck with my other story and this one, so please, right now I'm gonna call a standstill because I'm working on two chapters for the other one. So please, hold your requests.
1740728 Wilco, boss! I'll hold mine until you're ready! :3
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Sure, we all need a break sometimes. I'd post an "update" chapter when you take requests again
until then, you opened the OC gates, both deadly and powerful good luck!
I want yoru babies
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I find that forming a group for this is quite handy. You can take all your submission and keep them all in one place. Easy to find them!
Did this for a video game fan fic of mine.
awww, I wish I could join in but my oc isn't really ready for its debut and I haven't kept up with the other story very well either... or any of the stories I follow for that matter....
Oh well, will be interesting to see how this goes.
Here's a challenge: first to PM me an image of their OC in a bathtub gets to be cover!
Name: Jetfire
Color scheme: Bright red and yellow mane with emerald eyes
Race:Pegasus
Cutie Mark: Not needed, right?
Gender:Male
Personality: Happy and cheery at most times. Energetic and funny, even if not on pourpose( most times it isn't!) Generally curious.
Hope I get a chapter! First one was just a name, so I hope my chances are good!
(Damn, I'm forgetful!)
DO NOT FORGET
THIS IS EXTREMELY IMPORTANT
He likes the water as hot as possible and likes to be in the tub before AND after the tub fills and empties. Otherwise he's really fussy.
Sweet mercy, I have a boatload of OCs.Take your pick from the following list of names:
Christina DiamondCrystal ClearMurrayMurky DepthsClearShadow Shard/Shard Clear (same design, two characters... multiple continuities exist where I use these, they're parallel universe equivalents)
Sylvia Cloudshadow
Sweet Melody
Machina Mercury
Victor Clear
Dyane Clear
Silver Stream (Screen)
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...juuuust a little something I drew (wink wink nudge nudge)
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is the standstill still on, if not, I am ready!
1754260 Okay, it's off. Send away! I will blog about this on Wednesday so you all know the order!
Name: Sapphire Eclipse
Race: Alicorn
Description: A Filly Who has Blonde and Light-purple hair. White coat and has just earned her cutie mark (Purple Heart with pink wings)
Personality: Is shy and is Really talented, Uses excellent use of vocaburaly.
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