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Derpsanddinks404


Just your average writer. 14, freshman, and about two months being a brony. I absolutely HATE shipping, excluding the occasional Fluttermac or OC.

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Side stories to Bathtime for Ponies.

Ever want to see yours or other users' original characters get a bath while in foal form? Well, this is your story! Unfortunately, submissions are closed until Bathtime for Ponies is completed.

Cover is Iron Galley by Irongalley

Chapters (4)
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Awwwww cute story
P.s. maybe you can read mine called my day in ponyville

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Name: Rising Knight
Race: Unicorn
Home-town: Unknown
Appearance: Dark Grey with a Black Mane and tail. Green eyes. Always carries two swords strapped to his back, named Tsuki no me (Eye of the moon) and Taiyō no me (Eye of the sun).
Cutie Mark: Two crossed swords, each with a symbol engraved in them. (One with the sun, the other with the moon)
Abilities: Highly skilled in Combat Magic, usually involving his two blades, which can draw strength from the sun and moon. Is able to merge with a shadow and appear from any other shadows nearby, and has a unique set of abilities, that draw their power from the sun and moon, known as the celestial style techniques. Able to copy the unique abilities of those he comes into physical contact with, and can change into different species of creatures, (though his overall colour scheme remains the same), both of these powers were attained as a result of the experiments performed on him for the past 6 years.
Bio: Found in the wilderness at the age of 5 with no memories of his past, the only clue to his identity a small bracelet with his name on one side and an engraving of the sun and moon on the other. Raised by the two who found him, who turned out to be master assassins. He and his stepsister were trained in the art of fighting from the shadows, and were taught the true meaning of being an assassin. "An assassin does not use their skills for profit or power, but to help those who are in need or are unable to help themselves". At the age of thirteen, while wandering through the forest with his parents, they were attacked by a mysterious cloaked figure. His parents were killed, his sister was forced to flee and he was taken to a lab and experimented on in an attempt to create a living weapon. After each experiment, he was forced to fight another inmate to the death.
This went on for six years, during which time he became close to a changeling, to the point that he considered her family. The final experiment involved the replication of an ancient demon, that had been created by Discord during the war between him and the Royal sisters, which was then sealed inside his body. However, the experiment was deemed a failure as something had cause said replica's personality to become the opposite of the original, making it a Dark Guardian (A demon who would rather protect than kill). They decided that the subject had reached the end of its usefulness, and resolved to kill him the next day.
However, fate smiled on him, as that night, a unicorn broke in and aided his escape. However, while they were fleeing the facility, they were attacked, and the young unicorn sacrificed her life to save him. It was his younger sister. Her last words to him were "Don't go dying on me, and make sure you help ponies when you can, you hear. That's my dying wish, and my birthday wish too. And you know the rules, always do the first thing the birthday foal asks you to do, and always respect somepony's dying wish". With that, she used a forbidden magic that transformed her body into a living explosive, killing their pursuers and supposedly their leader, and gravely injuring Knight.
His survival was only possible as the changeling, Hollow Armour, whom he had befriended, managed to escape her cell and save his life, despite the warnings of other changelings that she would be cast out of the hive and killed if she ever returned. Knowing that she sacrificed her place in her old family, he invited her to be part of his, believing his sister would not want him to abandon his friend. Now, he and Hollow wander the world, searching for clues as to his birth family, and always getting involved in fighting injustices in the places they visit. He also gets into arguments with Rising Shadow, the Dark Guardian sealed inside him, mostly due to disagreements in regards to how much force is actually required when fighting.
Personality: Very serious in nature. Does not like to see others get hurt and will always step in when he can. Willing to lay down his life for those he cares about, though there are few, due to his reluctance to become emotionally close to anypony after losing his surrogate family. Does not usually talk much unless it is a conversation with a friend. Finds it painful to talk about his past, but does not avoid the subject if it comes up, at least not with those he trusts.

Great story DerpsandDinks! Looking forward to seeing what new OC's will appear now, and the more interesting reactions!

1740137 I...I-uh, don't think that this is that type of story... to be honest. Its a rather comical story, hee-hee! Plus, he said to Pm him, Eh-heh-heh...

1740137>>1740617 Have to agree with Fyre. He seems like a Gary Stew, and I don't do Gary Stews. Sorry.

Damn. I'm gonna be in over my head here, aren't I? So, here's what I'll do: occasionally, I'll call a standstill. This means I'm stuck with my other story and this one, so please, right now I'm gonna call a standstill because I'm working on two chapters for the other one. So please, hold your requests.

1740728 Wilco, boss! I'll hold mine until you're ready! :3

1740728


Sure, we all need a break sometimes. I'd post an "update" chapter when you take requests again
until then, you opened the OC gates, both deadly and powerful good luck!

1740728
I find that forming a group for this is quite handy. You can take all your submission and keep them all in one place. Easy to find them!
Did this for a video game fan fic of mine.

awww, I wish I could join in but my oc isn't really ready for its debut and I haven't kept up with the other story very well either... or any of the stories I follow for that matter....:ajbemused:
Oh well, will be interesting to see how this goes.

Here's a challenge: first to PM me an image of their OC in a bathtub gets to be cover!:moustache::eeyup:

Name: Jetfire
Color scheme: Bright red and yellow mane with emerald eyes
Race:Pegasus
Cutie Mark: Not needed, right?
Gender:Male
Personality: Happy and cheery at most times. Energetic and funny, even if not on pourpose( most times it isn't!) Generally curious.
Hope I get a chapter! First one was just a name, so I hope my chances are good!

(Damn, I'm forgetful!)
DO NOT FORGET
THIS IS EXTREMELY IMPORTANT
He likes the water as hot as possible and likes to be in the tub before AND after the tub fills and empties. Otherwise he's really fussy.

Sweet mercy, I have a boatload of OCs.Take your pick from the following list of names:
Christina Diamond Crystal Clear
Murray Murky Depths Clear
Shadow Shard/Shard Clear (same design, two characters... multiple continuities exist where I use these, they're parallel universe equivalents)
Sylvia Cloudshadow
Sweet Melody
Machina Mercury
Victor Clear
Dyane Clear
Silver Stream (Screen)

1745588
is the standstill still on, if not, I am ready!

1754260 Okay, it's off. Send away! I will blog about this on Wednesday so you all know the order!

Nice, sweet new chapter! Rather liked it, to be honest. It gives a nice break form all those action filled stories I'm following! As I read this, I was listening to this:

Around ten minute-ish, is where I started off. It gave a great atmosphere to this chapter, I thought. Have a good one!

I gotta tell ya man: I was having a crap day. Nothing seemed to go right and I was pissed off. But then I read this chapter and I'm instantly happy. You portrayed my OC so well, it's scary. Thank you

1783325 Huh, I'm rather surprised. I thought I made him a bit OOC. But I'm really glad I brightened your day!:yay:

1783549 Out of character. It's not usually used to describe OCs for obvious reasons. Anyways, every time I read your name I think of this:
[youtube=http://m.youtube.com/index?&desktop_uri=%2F#/watch?v=R6VDmozvNrM]

1783704 REM: Man on the Moon. It's by a really great band. Checkem out.

1784006 Aw I LOVE REM! Did you know my initials are REM?

1784080 Yeah I love it. You know when I read that you were going to read Quicksilver Batstallion, I thought of Bruce Mane

Another great chapter. I can't believe mine's next! So excited!!! :pinkiehappy:

1784773 I believe that is what is on the list. XD I could be wrong though. It wouldn't be the first time I goofed something up. Hehe...

1786828 Same here. What did you think of my OC Quicksilver?

They get cuter and cuter.
Great chapter!

gothia. She is my profile picture.

Yay, Fondant's next! I can't wait!

:rainbowlaugh: This chapter was hilarious.

That's sad about the loss. But still great chapter

Jesus, talk about stubborn.
wait, someone else has an OC with a name related to fire? huh...

That was... surprisingly funny! I remember when I used to be that stubborn, back in those good ol' days when you only had to draw and color cut-out shapes, heh. Great job, author!

You've outdone yourself this time. That was hystarical! :rainbowlaugh: I'm a male by the way. *giggles* Thanks for dedicating this to my brother. Truly this chapter has lifted my spirits greatly. Thank you so much!!! :pinkiehappy:

First one to correctly spot the movie reference and name the movie wins an internets!

Damn... sorry about the loss.
This chapter was really short.

Oh God you did such a good job. I swear I was laughing the entire time, you portrayed Fondant perfectly. *Hands medal*

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