Guess that wedding chapel is going to have an awfully lonely half when the day comes. Then again there's easily enough Apple and Co. family members that they might end up needing both sides in the first place.
This is the emotional nadir of the story. There's a few hard moments still to come, but after this, there's nowhere to go but up. And the other songs are much peppier!
I was referring to equine family members. But you raise a valuable point, guess it'll be a summer wedding then, since most temples frown upon allowing half a forest's worth of animals into services.
A part of me is disappointed that Carnation wasn't taken to task for her rather improbable predictions, buts the same time at least it got it over with for Fluttershy.
A civil ceremony on the steps of city hall, the mayor presiding, the town square filled with ponies and the skies filled with birds and chipmunks using hang gliders.
Hmmm. Gonna hafta file that image away for later...
I'm trying to resist the temptation to have Fluttershy quote the ancient Equestrian proverb "Living well is the best revenge" in the next chapter. Still, that next chapter, "6 - Igneous: Granite," should be ready Feb. 28th.
My current plan calls for 10 chapters with each new chapter posting on a day ending with an 8: Feb. 28th for "6 - Igneous: Granite," Mar. 8th for "7 - Sedimentary: Flint," Mar. 18th for "8 - Sedimentary: Shale," Mar. 28th for "9 - Sedimentary: Sandstone," and Apr. 8 to wrap it all up with "10: Pearl." Now to see if I can actually do it!
Came up with the whole lacinia concept and realized there could be a story there if I was willing to try writing sex scenes, I consciously decided that I was also gonna make it as head-over-heels, hopelessly romantic as I possibly could. I'm glad to see it's working!
Wow, Ive hardly ever been so angry at a character before. I'm no were near a violent person, but even I want to "beat the living crap out" of her family. Excuse my french, even though it wasn't french.
Believes that, when bad things happen to her, they're always somepony else's fault. So when her marriage and family fell to pieces, she decided it was all Fluttershy's fault.
Man, Fluttershy's really having a rough time here. Don't you think she deserves a break?
Guess that wedding chapel is going to have an awfully lonely half when the day comes. Then again there's easily enough Apple and Co. family members that they might end up needing both sides in the first place.
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Without being too "spoilery":
This is the emotional nadir of the story. There's a few hard moments still to come, but after this, there's nowhere to go but up. And the other songs are much peppier!
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I'm seeing:
Squirrels ev'rywhere.
Mike
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I was referring to equine family members. But you raise a valuable point, guess it'll be a summer wedding then, since most temples frown upon allowing half a forest's worth of animals into services.
A part of me is disappointed that Carnation wasn't taken to task for her rather improbable predictions, buts the same time at least it got it over with for Fluttershy.
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Or they could have:
A civil ceremony on the steps of city hall, the mayor presiding, the town square filled with ponies and the skies filled with birds and chipmunks using hang gliders.
Hmmm. Gonna hafta file that image away for later...
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I'm trying to resist the temptation to have Fluttershy quote the ancient Equestrian proverb "Living well is the best revenge" in the next chapter. Still, that next chapter, "6 - Igneous: Granite," should be ready Feb. 28th.
Mike
Your writing style is fantastic. It's like I'm actually in their minds, thinking what they are thinking. You know how to get me involved in a story!
And I like the really positive vibes I get from this story! Even though Fluttershy's going through such crap she's got AJ right there.
Don't stop this fic. Keep on going! I'm really liking the story and the characters you're creating!
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Thanks!
My current plan calls for 10 chapters with each new chapter posting on a day ending with an 8: Feb. 28th for "6 - Igneous: Granite," Mar. 8th for "7 - Sedimentary: Flint," Mar. 18th for "8 - Sedimentary: Shale," Mar. 28th for "9 - Sedimentary: Sandstone," and Apr. 8 to wrap it all up with "10: Pearl." Now to see if I can actually do it!
Mike
This story makes me want to believe in falling in love.
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When I first:
Came up with the whole lacinia concept and realized there could be a story there if I was willing to try writing sex scenes, I consciously decided that I was also gonna make it as head-over-heels, hopelessly romantic as I possibly could. I'm glad to see it's working!
Mike
Wow, Ive hardly ever been so angry at a character before. I'm no were near a violent person, but even I want to "beat the living crap out" of her family. Excuse my french, even though it wasn't french.
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They're about as nasty:
A group as I've ever written, and about as nasty a group as I ever want to write.
Mike
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Carnation:
Believes that, when bad things happen to her, they're always somepony else's fault. So when her marriage and family fell to pieces, she decided it was all Fluttershy's fault.
Mike
Shhhhh fluttershy it's OK... Now excuse me while I handle a small problem.... _draws sword and whispers_ now where was that shop again.....