After Fluttershy spends a night lost in the Ever Free Forest she get's bittin by a sick animal and is changed into something no one would ever see her as...
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If you guys don't understand the end, Princess Celestia made everything go back to normal
Needstobemorespacedoutsothatitiseasiertoread.
.....
Eh.
Cheers
~iraqlobstah
New pony speaking, new paragraph. Every. Time. Every. Time.
Fluttershy with rabies? Good concept but it was quite poorly written and i couldn't finish it.
The premise is good, but you really need to go through this a couple more times. New speaker, new paragraph. Typost and punctuation are all over the place. Also, Celestia Ex Machine is always, ALWAYS a horrible way to end a fic.
well thanks for reading the fic (or trying). I'll edit it a little bit then maybe you guys can try reading it again without poor grammar and stuff like that haha!
I'm only 14 and this is my first Fic so I'm proud of it! :)
You look like you need an editor. I would be happy to be just that.
If you're interested, email me: sir0duke@gmail.com.
113068 haha I'll get back to you on that! I would love an editor (English was never a good subject for me and still isnt haha)
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Just email me your next piece of work, and I'll see what I can do.
113120 are you sure it wont be to much work? I don't want to force something onto you like an asshole
113164
Hey man i'm writting my first fic too. It's already published, but i could use some concept ideas for the later story. Just let me know what ya think and hit me back.
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Not at all! Editing is how I study for English tests.
Ah. Rabies.
113285 haha I'd like to help but it's your story, not mine. Make what you want bro! I read it and it's pretty good! Keep it up!
117605 ....dont know if good....or bad