ahh, the feels!! I had a few issues with this chapter. First: Ponies have guns? Second: Why did the police have to resort to deadly force. As far as I know, police only resort to lethal action when thy have no other options. I understand your frustration, but I feel it has caused you to rush this chapter. As much as I want more, I want quality, and I feel it has slipped a bit. Please keep up the good work you had in previous chapters. I look forward to reading what you write next.
Eh. Off-screen death that was practically an accident. Smack Down wasn't characterized well enough for me to really care whether he lived or died. Without any sort of explanation or emotion behind his outbursts and pointless violence, he was an instrument, not a character. I need my villains to be characterized fully before I can invest any emotion into their downfall. Oh well. Fallenfeather's final moments were quite well done. You're an orphan now, Fluttershy! That means you can become Batmare and fight crime!
Just as long as he's dead, I'm happy
1632736 I've been looking forward to writing his death for weeks
Wow... Just wow....
Excuse me, I need to go have a good cry...
Lol thought it said Nutela
Also I'm picturing a reeeeaaaaally painful death for that bastard
ahh, the feels!!
I had a few issues with this chapter. First: Ponies have guns? Second: Why did the police have to resort to deadly force. As far as I know, police only resort to lethal action when thy have no other options.
I understand your frustration, but I feel it has caused you to rush this chapter. As much as I want more, I want quality, and I feel it has slipped a bit. Please keep up the good work you had in previous chapters. I look forward to reading what you write next.
1633634 Yes, ponies have guns. Also, yeah I understand your point, I rushed quite a bit.
More chappies? Glad to hear it. Been waiting for Spike to show up.
1632878 Nuttella truly does haunt people.
The plice should of made Smack Down fly into the ceiling fan..
Nice chapter. Too bad smack down died...
Nice chapter, I'm annoyed at the medical inaccuracy, but I realize it's needed otherwise the story would lose momentum.
1632736 the price was too high
1640402 yeah i wanted him alive for some good old fashion savage beatings
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Flutter Natalia Shy? That's my name! Natalia is my real name,but most people call me "Nat"
YES! HE'S DEAD!
yes. yes. I cryed a little when shy and her mom were sharing there last words then i lost it when shy hugged bow n' arow.
He cant hurt her anymore...she's free. I lost it. Broke down...
Eh. Off-screen death that was practically an accident.
Smack Down wasn't characterized well enough for me to really care whether he lived or died. Without any sort of explanation or emotion behind his outbursts and pointless violence, he was an instrument, not a character. I need my villains to be characterized fully before I can invest any emotion into their downfall.
Oh well. Fallenfeather's final moments were quite well done.
You're an orphan now, Fluttershy! That means you can become Batmare and fight crime!