if it has sex, tag it with sex, and mature. It doesn't matter how graphic it is.

"As wondrous as it was, it dangerous"
"Fallenfeather thanks him"
Not really feeling the whole multilingual thing, but do what you need to do for the story. Liking it so far.

Not even reading until it's bumped up to mature.

1598928 I agree with your argument on the multilingual thing.

1598857 The only sex word in this entire thing is cum. I personally don't think that surfaces as a need for mature.

If it has sex, rate it 'mature' and tag it 'sex'. It's as simple as that.

... Not the best but not bad.

Why is there even FAKE meat in Equestria
This would mean Ponies ate meat before it was made into tofu to get the flavour right
Also multilanguages O wander what Languages RD can speak
probably Equestrian and Awesome

Wow! Multi or Bilingual!

Meh. The multilingual thing is kind of lame to me, but the rest I like.

Well, that language thing comes completely out of left field, and feels entirely pointless.
It's not easy to attach an ability to ponies that feels truly unbelievable, given that pegasi can already manipulate water vapor like it was clay and each pony has some kind of destined special ability... but that's a pretty good example of one. Genetically ingrained cultural knowledge, eh?
Well, whatever. Still going pretty well.