I already like this story. It seems to be very well written, the characters have decent development for one chapter, and we have a bad guy. The names aren't bad either. I shall continue reading.
I feel lke beating the crap outta that Smack Down Ill bring my mates and a couple baseball bats, and break his wings,legs and lower spine that should teach him
I already like this story. It seems to be very well written, the characters have decent development for one chapter, and we have a bad guy. The names aren't bad either. I shall continue reading.
Nice story so far.
I feel lke beating the crap outta that Smack Down
Ill bring my mates and a couple baseball bats, and break his wings,legs and lower spine that should teach him
1603298 I will dull my castration knives
Wow,Why did you put Fluttershy's dad as a Bastard?
Ah, so we're going the abusive spouse/father route. Buckle up, kids.