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flutterbythebay


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Terror pulses from the heart of the burned down corpse of Ponyville as the three survivors of the traitorous invasion struggle to stay alive, safe, and free. Though many of their friends tossed them in the shadows to rot during the worst of the invasion, they fight. Doing their best to get through, and one, doing the best she can to maintain her sanity. The three survivors are none other than Twilightsparkle, Rarity, and a struggling Applejack.

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meh kind of I don't know just oc of twilight to give up like that and of rainbow to be so unloyal

1501048 I appreciate your opinion and want to thank you for reading my story :) I'll try to fix it up a bit to make it seem a bit more realistic. You are right, it does happen a bit to suddenly. :) Thanks to you I can try to make it a bit better :) :pinkiesmile:

no prob it just seemed a rushed and b if anything twi wouldn't just give up without a better fight then that and c were was Luna I mean she would be squashing all rebellions after what happened with her

1501130 not saying it isn't good just saying think about every angle

1501258 You're right :) I'll think about that next time :D

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