Fluttershy is the Element of Kindness. So of course when it comes to leading a war against Princess Celestia, she can't always be the one to save the other fallen ponies. She also has to cope with her feelings for one of the soldiers, one who can die at any moment. A sequel to the story, Elements (http://www.fimfiction.net/story/57634/Elements), as it follows the Four Year War of Equestria.
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Interesting concept, but not much was revealed on how or why Celestia is acting this way. Also, I have this problem too, you tend to get the past and present tense confused.
I was confused at the flashback. During half of that battle, I thought she was still in her flashback. And I would assume Fluttershy would be a little OOC, but I suppose that's just part of the story.
Im guessing by your name you're from 4chan? Im as bad as them, arent I?
Accept - Stalingrad
You should have Trixie roll up with akimbo Uzi's and shoot everypony up. She also has a jetpack and anti-gravity hooves attachments.
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My last story explains why celestia acts the way she does (and well... that story needs to be edited way more than it is
1503981 that explains a lot. You should put a link in for your other story.
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Its in the description, but the story isnt very good, its been a year since i wrote it and the tenses are super messed up
Fluttermac?