Believing that the essence of Harmony is threatened, Twilight plans to remedy that through a form of extraction. As her ambitions manifest, Twilight struggles through an internal war between her harmonious plan and the consequences of her acts.
Good news everypony - Fluttershy doesn't die in this chapter! (chapter would have been waaayyy too long otherwise, and I didn't want to keep you waiting much longer, and this seemed like a good point to end a chapter at, and I don't want to rush through the story too fast.) And some stuff will be revealed. And we'll see the appearance of a few background ponies who haven't made an appearance in the fic yet. Bad news: ... There's a very foreboding event that can be considered a cliffhanger, and will probably have you being like "OMGWHATTHEHECKJUSTHAPPENED?!"
Wouldn't killing the two stallions cause more suspicion towards Twilight? I mean, every victim so far has been connected to her and now the two ponies guarding her has been killed too. I don't know, maybe I'm just missing a detail somewhere.
664421 Minor details, minor details... Ok, maybe not so minor details. Still, thanks for clearing that up, it's really obvious when someone is explaining it to you.
:668437 Hopefully, it'll be released within a shorter time frame than this last one, especially because I'm out of school for the summer and I already have part of it typed up.
About the trailer - even though i made it, its your fanfic so that means you are the one who has the authority over everything about it (like if you wanna annotate, download it, get a screenshot, even delete it,etc. just say so). Just so ya know.
702947 Aw, thank you! And let me tell you, I would NEVER delete it, ever. I like the trailer far too much for that! In fact, I think that I just might have that be the new picture for this! I would put a screenshot thingy from it on my deviantart, but that might be considered art theft...
I hope ur happy. I'm so excited for the chapter that my head just exploded all over my computer so now I have to use someone else's to type this. You now owe me a new computer, about 2,000,000 dollars in hospital bills, and duct tape. Lots and lots of duct tape.
885704 Well, at least your head explosion shall be settled by intense procedures and animal introductions.
And sorry, but I am incapable of forking over those 2 million dollars, or the computer. The duct tape, however... *hands over duct tape. Lots and lots of duct tape*
1106202 Yay! Time flew by today a bit faster than I would have liked, so if I don't get Chapter 8 done and up today, I almost certainly will tomorrow... I hope...
I found this story on Deviantart after reading The Experiments of Twilight Sparkle,(which got me into grimdark stories). And I have to say, Im impressed and eagerly awaiting the next chapter(On a random note, don't kill Scootaloo)
Scoot getting in twilight's way? That's easy. I can write the subplot/plot right now! AB and Scoot are determined to find out what happened to AJ, Sweetie Belle, and Rainbow Dash so they do a sherlock Holmes style investigation. No one takes them seriously even though they are actually getting closer to the answer. Twilight sees this and well, they go from being cutie mark crusaders to being cutie mark cadavers. THE END "roll credits"
1119381 "Cutie Mark Cadavers", Twilight could so use that phrase if she was out of her mind.... well, more than she already is... Poor Apple Bloom and Scoots though.... though I'm not going to give away what will happen. You could be right, you could be not...
1121114 I do agree with you that Scootaloo is awesome! ... I do feel a bit bad for her though, with her not being able to fly (according to Lauren Faust, she may never fly because she's handicapped.... or would you call it hooficapped?
1121600 not sure what their terminology for that would be, but that sounds like it sucks, especially with Twilght out of her damn mind, sometimes I ask myself why don't they have some form of armed defence
1123139 Well its simple, they thought they would only be dealing with little girls and not 15-30 yr olds who love to make fanart (im using the word fanart to encompass every fan made thing ever). Do you really need an armed defense against little girls? Also thnx. This username is what all true warriors strive FOR!
Good news everypony - Fluttershy doesn't die in this chapter! (chapter would have been waaayyy too long otherwise, and I didn't want to keep you waiting much longer, and this seemed like a good point to end a chapter at, and I don't want to rush through the story too fast.) And some stuff will be revealed. And we'll see the appearance of a few background ponies who haven't made an appearance in the fic yet.
Bad news: ... There's a very foreboding event that can be considered a cliffhanger, and will probably have you being like "OMGWHATTHEHECKJUSTHAPPENED?!"
So yeah, apologies for the long wait!
dat picture...it fills my brain with awesomenesses...me gusta.
Wouldn't killing the two stallions cause more suspicion towards Twilight?
I mean, every victim so far has been connected to her and now the two ponies guarding her has been killed too.
I don't know, maybe I'm just missing a detail somewhere.
664406 Minor correction - Blossomforth's female, actually.
As for the other thing, you shall see... and you're forgetting that there's also guards at Fluttershy's house as well...
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Minor details, minor details... Ok, maybe not so minor details.
Still, thanks for clearing that up, it's really obvious when someone is explaining it to you.
664472 No problem!
So she wrapped them in a dark-magic-cocoon-thingamafucker, stripped their bones down to the very marrow, skinned them, and burned them alive?
How old are you? Or are you an ageless demon from Hades?
This is great!
666246 That's pretty much what happened!
And now, I am not an ageless demon from Hades or Tartarus or anything - I'm 20.
Glad you like it though!
666310 Really, this is gonna be good next chapter... :3
666319 Indeed it shall - class shall be in session for the Psycho Sparkle School of Biology and Torture.
666346 SIGN ME UP FOR THAT ONE :D
666351 once you read that chapter, you shall be already signed up...
(Wow, i made that sound like one of those cursed tapes from The Ring or something)
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I Thought I would be disappointed because you didn't kill fluttershy yet but here's my reaction to this chapter:
MY MONEY JUST BOUNCES OFF THE SCREEN!
*phew* She lives for another chapter. When will the next one be released?
667572 Lol, I thought that there would be enough to satisfy your need for conflict and gore-death stuff!
:668437 Hopefully, it'll be released within a shorter time frame than this last one, especially because I'm out of school for the summer and I already have part of it typed up.
Hooray, a new chapter! Definitely worth the wait. It'll be interesting to see what happens next.
682504 Glad you thought i\was worth the wait!
And next chapter.... expect there to be gore... and psychological torment... and a biology/ecology lesson.
682539 B-b-but I just finished Biology like a month ago WAAAAAAAA.
Also where did u get the idea on how to kill the guards, that was EPIC
694154 Hey, you'll just be learning about a few animals and their, ahem, more dangerous qualities...
As for where I got the idea for killing the guards like that... I completely made it up.
About the trailer - even though i made it, its your fanfic so that means you are the one who has the authority over everything about it (like if you wanna annotate, download it, get a screenshot, even delete it,etc. just say so).
Just so ya know.
702947 Aw, thank you! And let me tell you, I would NEVER delete it, ever. I like the trailer far too much for that! In fact, I think that I just might have that be the new picture for this!
I would put a screenshot thingy from it on my deviantart, but that might be considered art theft...
703013 Who would make the claim that it is art theft? because i certainly won't and i doubt anyone else can.
706677 If you're fine with it, then in that case... To Deviantart I go! And don't worry, I shall surely credit you, rest assured!
If only there was a squee emoticon...
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707472 Well, a squee picture is close enough!
Omgomgomgomg! Cant wait for next chapter!
I hope ur happy. I'm so excited for the chapter that my head just exploded all over my computer so now I have to use someone else's to type this. You now owe me a new computer, about 2,000,000 dollars in hospital bills, and duct tape. Lots and lots of duct tape.
885704 Well, at least your head explosion shall be settled by intense procedures and animal introductions.
And sorry, but I am incapable of forking over those 2 million dollars, or the computer. The duct tape, however... *hands over duct tape. Lots and lots of duct tape*
BRILLIANT! I can't wait for the next chapter, is it going to be done anytime soon?
WHEN'S THE NEXT ONE IVE ALREADY RAN OUT OF DUCT TAPE FROM THE MULTITUDE OF HEAD EXPLOSIONS. and besides, those really hurt
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Luckily, I've finally gotten back into my motivation again, and the next chapter should be up tomorrow!
YAAAAAAY! DAMMIT NOT ENOUGH EMOTICONS!
1101155 I think you'll be giving the shocked and sad emoticons a bit of a workout within the next chapter... or two... or three...
But yeah, I'm excited to finally get another chapter out there.
Just got on and read that, then squeed. :D
1106202 Yay! Time flew by today a bit faster than I would have liked, so if I don't get Chapter 8 done and up today, I almost certainly will tomorrow... I hope...
I found this story on Deviantart after reading The Experiments of Twilight Sparkle,(which got me into grimdark stories). And I have to say, Im impressed and eagerly awaiting the next chapter(On a random note, don't kill Scootaloo)
1114873 Hopefully I'll have the next chapter up by Monday at the latest, I've been busier than I've expected.
As for not killing Scootaloo... well, it depends if Twilight deems her "in the way"...
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Just for the fucks sake.
1115378 Just replace "rape" with "death", "torture", or murder", and you have this in a nutshell.
1115378 That macro just made my day
1115248 I understand. And no rush. If you've read "A Fun Day" then you'll know where Im coming from
Scoot getting in twilight's way? That's easy. I can write the subplot/plot right now!
AB and Scoot are determined to find out what happened to AJ, Sweetie Belle, and Rainbow Dash so they do a sherlock Holmes style investigation. No one takes them seriously even though they are actually getting closer to the answer. Twilight sees this and well, they go from being cutie mark crusaders to being cutie mark cadavers. THE END "roll credits"
1119381 Thats pretty insightful, I just don't want that to happen, shes my favorite pony, by the way love the user name
1119381 "Cutie Mark Cadavers", Twilight could so use that phrase if she was out of her mind.... well, more than she already is... Poor Apple Bloom and Scoots though.... though I'm not going to give away what will happen. You could be right, you could be not...
1121114 I do agree with you that Scootaloo is awesome! ... I do feel a bit bad for her though, with her not being able to fly (according to Lauren Faust, she may never fly because she's handicapped.... or would you call it hooficapped?
1121600 not sure what their terminology for that would be, but that sounds like it sucks, especially with Twilght out of her damn mind, sometimes I ask myself why don't they have some form of armed defence
1123139 Yeah, if Twilight decides to come for Scoots and Apple Bloom, they probably won't have much of a chance to escape...
And maybe they don't have armed defense because they don't have the resources, or because Ponyville isn't considered to be needing them?
1123139 Well its simple, they thought they would only be dealing with little girls and not 15-30 yr olds who love to make fanart (im using the word fanart to encompass every fan made thing ever). Do you really need an armed defense against little girls?
Also thnx. This username is what all true warriors strive FOR!
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I'm such a good person :)
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