Believing that the essence of Harmony is threatened, Twilight plans to remedy that through a form of extraction. As her ambitions manifest, Twilight struggles through an internal war between her harmonious plan and the consequences of her acts.
I like this! One problem, where will this end up? Like, is Twilight gonna go crazy and kill herself for her element or something? Or is Celestia gonna catch her and take her element or what?
So Lads, who do you think is scariest: Researcher (?) Twilight, Mothershy, or Pinkamena?
Also; I like how Cupcakes and Rainbow Factory were both mentioned and the latter was speculated to actually be real, making the whole scene even more terrifying. I'm also reminded (probably unintentionally) of a certain village of, lets call them 'Eccentrics', in the middle of the Everfree Forest when Rainbow Dash in her dying moments said: "The... The marks will curse you t-too..."
Twilight somehow manages to still be adorkable even when committing mind-rape. I love it. Shadowed Rainbow, you magnificent bastard, thank you for the nightmare fuel and the sympathy pains in my thighs.
I loved the rainbow factory reference because it's only like my favorite fix ever . I was gonna make twilight in my story become more and more insane but I don't think I could ever do what you have done. Also what else is awesome is my favorite author commented 30 weeks ago good job, and you don't call yourself shadowed rainbow for nothin
If Celestia nurtured Twilight toward the study of Harmony, then Twilight is on the path to the cycles...
I molded her into an intellect with the drive to preserve Harmony at any cost. And after long studies, she found a solution. In that moment... she betrayed us all.
Ok but what is Twilight's motivation?We just see her as a sadistic criminal, but why?Also,all RD did was to say"Twilight, stop!".No"Am I not your friend?", or"What happened to you?" This just feels like a gorefest for the sake of gorefest...
Lovin' this!
Oh and Twillight -
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105526 Glad you're loving it - that was actually my first time writing extreme gore to that level, so thanks for the compliment!
And yes, Twilight does indeed torture ponies like a boss.
twilight read cupcakes and thought it was a friendship guide.
106360 More like she read Cupcakes and Rainbow Factory and thought they were friendship guides.
I like this!
One problem, where will this end up? Like, is Twilight gonna go crazy and kill herself for her element or something? Or is Celestia gonna catch her and take her element or what?
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Those arn't friendship guides? Oops
As much as I love this....
I'm going to have nightmares for a few years now....
Time to go to bed. :D
Wish me luck on not having nightmares tonight... I'll need it...
So Lads, who do you think is scariest: Researcher (?) Twilight, Mothershy, or Pinkamena?
Also; I like how Cupcakes and Rainbow Factory were both mentioned and the latter was speculated to actually be real, making the whole scene even more terrifying. I'm also reminded (probably unintentionally) of a certain village of, lets call them 'Eccentrics', in the middle of the Everfree Forest when Rainbow Dash in her dying moments said: "The... The marks will curse you t-too..."
Yeah, that was as hard to read as I thought it'd be... even if I
hatedislike Dash.Dash is always the first to die. Poor mare. Oh, but awesome.
Twilight somehow manages to still be adorkable even when committing mind-rape. I love it. Shadowed Rainbow, you magnificent bastard, thank you for the nightmare fuel and the sympathy pains in my thighs.
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Story of the blanks!!!
I loved the rainbow factory reference because it's only like my favorite fix ever . I was gonna make twilight in my story become more and more insane but I don't think I could ever do what you have done. Also what else is awesome is my favorite author commented 30 weeks ago good job, and you don't call yourself shadowed rainbow for nothin
If Celestia nurtured Twilight toward the study of Harmony, then Twilight is on the path to the cycles...
I molded her into an intellect with the drive to preserve Harmony at any cost. And after long studies, she found a solution. In that moment... she betrayed us all.
5474347 What about the reference to fallout Equestria? (I'm pretty sure the branding with dash's mark is used there)
Okay, yeah, I am going to stop already. Because I can already see this is going to be the whole plot.
And while I don't mind this kind of stuff, I'd only read it if there is a point to it, if it is part of a larger story.
But this is just going to be a gorefest, so...Nah.
This video kept coming to mind as I read this chapter:
I have trouble seeing why everyone else is finding this hard to read.
This Twilight has the soul of the devil.
Ok but what is Twilight's motivation?We just see her as a sadistic criminal, but why?Also,all RD did was to say"Twilight, stop!".No"Am I not your friend?", or"What happened to you?" This just feels like a gorefest for the sake of gorefest...
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The first chapter explains it, and also the author did say when he first wrote this, his intention was to see how gory he could make a story