Gah finally! Nice chapter, some little thinks I don't quite agree with. But then again having another opinion on things like war and relationships and having me (a reader, not my jaded cantankerous self) feel something towards this chapter is in and of itself a victory in its own right, that I felt an emotion at all is signs of good story telling.
Ok, finally decided to take the plunge and continue reading. With what little I had remembered. It took me a while to remember that you always start with a flashback.
Really glad to see this is still alive. Time to read the next chapter, and hopefully (no pressure though) we won't have to wait 2 years again.
“Pfft!” Celestia laughs. “He would fail. But he won’t try anything like that. He has a great record. He’s not a troublemaker, he’s never broken any law, he had perfect attendance at Hoofvard and at his high school, he claims to have never had a sip of alcohol in his life and I believe him, and all of his friends and everypony associated with him also have pristine records and are upstanding citizens. There is absolutely no reason to feel threatened by him.”
I have a bad feeling about this guy. I mean he looks like he's perfect and all. There's just one problem with that: Nopony's perfect. And he's just too perfect.
Daaah shit its Alive!
Two years later, epic chapter.
I love it! This is a great chapter.
7132830 And THIS is why I leave tracking tags on idle stories I really like. So glad to see new chapters!
Thanks for leaving enough hints in this chapter so I could recall what actually happened in the story previously.
I almost cried at seeing a new chapter
Wonderful! Good reading.
Took me entirely too long to realize this wasn't your other story.
Sleep deprivation sucks.
Gah finally! Nice chapter, some little thinks I don't quite agree with. But then again having another opinion on things like war and relationships and having me (a reader, not my jaded cantankerous self) feel something towards this chapter is in and of itself a victory in its own right, that I felt an emotion at all is signs of good story telling.
Nice one mate. Glad to see the story continue.
She probably has muscles on her eyeballs!
Thank you daddy.
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Wonderfully done. From one reader to writer, I am glad you continued this very heart touching story. It made my day. Thank you!
Finally after 2 YEARS! sweet release!
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It's nice to see my favorite author on this site updating my favorite story. Hope to see more, but no need to push yourself.
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Ok, finally decided to take the plunge and continue reading. With what little I had remembered. It took me a while to remember that you always start with a flashback.
Really glad to see this is still alive. Time to read the next chapter, and hopefully (no pressure though) we won't have to wait 2 years again.
I laughed harder than I should've at this. I am totally using that.
after checking every month for years it's finally been updated.
My week has been made
I have a bad feeling about this guy. I mean he looks like he's perfect and all. There's just one problem with that: Nopony's perfect. And he's just too perfect.