Part Three: Dewdrop Dazzle Must Die!
Twilight had woken early the next morning just as the sun was rising. She had managed to sneak out of the house without Dewdrop waking up, or so she had hoped. Ponyville looked beautiful as the sun reflected off the glistening water left from last night's storm, but Twilight had no time to appreciate it. She was on a mission.
Carefully making sure she wasn't followed, Twilight had trekked to the far outskirts of Ponyville, to a mountainous, treacherous region just outside of the Whitetail Woods known locally as the 'Rocky Mountains' despite technically being a collection of rocky hills. Ponies generally never ventured this far out - there was nothing interesting for miles save for craggy rocky spires and stony mounds where nothing would grow. It was here that she lifted the spade she had brought and began digging.
The ground was hard, and even though Twilight was using her magic to lift the spade, it still took a good few hours until she had dug a decently sized hole. It was deep enough that a unicorn wouldn't be able to use teleportation magic to escape, but not deep enough that they would hurt themselves falling in. Twilight had been feeling slightly guilty as she worked on the hole, and so had tested this last hypothesis out by flinging herself into the hole several times to check that it wasn't too dangerous. The battered purple pony had then hauled herself out using a rope ladder she had brought, and when satisfied at the hole's effectiveness, had used her magic to carefully position twigs and leaves over the top, and then as a finishing touch placing a small paperweight she had taken from home in the very middle.
The trap was complete.
The construction of the hole had taken nearly all day, it was tiring work and Twilight had half expected Dewdrop Dazzle to pop up behind her at any moment and ask what she was up to. Thankfully this hadn't been the case. The hole was now perfectly disguised, just another part of the rocky landscape.
Twilight smiled to herself, and then went home. At least, it would be her home again soon.
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"Hi Twilight!" Dewdrop looked up brightly from her book as Twilight entered the house. Spike was sitting next to Dewdrop, listening to the blue pony intently. "I was just reading Spike a story; do you want to listen too?"
Twilight simply continued walking across the room. "No Dewdrop, and I need to talk to Spike. Spike, kitchen, NOW!" she snapped, marching into the kitchen. Spike hung his head with a whine of protest and followed her in, sure that more washing-up related punishment would follow shortly.
As Spike entered, Twilight slammed the door shut and rounded on the little dragon. "So Spike!" she said, a bit too loudly. "It turns out that an evil cursed idol is causing all the storms!"
Spike stared back, confused. "B-but I thought it was the Pegasus Weather Patrol, Rainbow Dash said they were supposed to-"
Twilight continued over Spike, talking very loudly and clearly, just in case anyone was listening in on the other side of the door. "No Spike, it is an EVIL CURSED IDOL doing it. It is just outside the WHITETAIL WOODS, near the ROCKY MOUNTAINS."
Spike blinked, looking around in panic. "But that's awful Twilight, we should go and sort it out right now!"
Twilight shook her head. "No Spike, I'll do it TOMORROW. TOMORROW I will have an adventure and defeat the idol and be a HERO to all of Ponyville. Not tonight, TOMORROW."
Spike was very flustered by this turn of events. Twilight turned to go, opening the door. Dewdrop Dazzle was standing on the other side, a bit too close for comfort. Twilight closed the door quickly and opened it again, and Dewdrop was suddenly back on the other side of the room as if nothing had happened.
"Night Dewdrop!" she smiled sweetly. "Are you coming to bed, roomie?"
Dewdrop looked up from her book and blinked, shaking her head. "No no Twilight, I thought I'd stay up for a bit."
"Good." Twilight gave a grin and climbed the stairs.
Outside, the rain was starting to fall again. Another storm was brewing.
***
Twilight hadn't gone to sleep of course. She had sat upstairs until she heard the front door slam, and could see Dewdrop Dazzle making her way through the wind and the rain outside, towards Whitetail Woods. There was a part of her that didn't believe she would fall for the bait, but at last things were going her way.
She picked up her book and began to read. She'd give it an hour before following to make sure the next part of the plan was successful.
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The wind and rain had really picked up by the time Twilight had decided to venture out after Dewdrop. It had been a struggle to make it through the town of Ponyville, let alone further into the dark, muddy area of the woods.
Caked in mud, wet and exhausted, Twilight finally made it to the Rocky Mountains. In the dark, the landscape looked even more oppressive. Tall piles of stone reflected the flash of the lightning bolts as they arced through the sky, the wind howled like a banshee, and the rain pelted down, making the ground slick and slippery.
From a distance, Twilight could see that her trap had worked - Dewdrop had obviously been convinced the paperweight was a cursed idol, and tumbled into the hole it was concealing. The covering of leaves and twigs had fallen away; she only hoped that it wasn't a stray animal or curious pony who'd fallen for it first. Gathering up her courage, Twilight moved closer to the hole to peek in.
She recoiled in shock. Dewdrop Dazzle's face was a metre from hers, wide-eyed and terrified, soaked through as she hung by her hooves for dear life onto a root that had protruded near the top of the hole.
"Twilight!" Dewdrop called up in a panic, a shake in her voice. "The ground just gave way, I-I've been hanging here for ages! I knew you'd save me. Twilight...?" Dewdrop trailed off, quivering slightly as Twilight stood above her motionless, silhouetted in the gloom. A flash of lightning broke across the sky, to reveal Twilight's face for a split second, set in a mask of contempt.
"Why Dewdrop" Twilight smiled sweetly with a rictus grin, lowering her head to be closer to the pony struggling in the pit. "So nice of you to hang around for me. I'd help you, but..." she paused, shrugging her shoulders "if you're me, and I'm up here, then you're fine. Nothing to worry about."
"B-b-but..." tears started to well in Dewdrop's rain-streaked face as she looked up at Twilight, trembling and struggling for dear life to hold onto the root.
"This is tough love, Dewdrop" Twilight snapped down. "You brought this on yourself! I'll come back for you in the morning when you've learnt your lesson. Don't hang around."
Twilight's horn glowed, and the root Dewdrop was so desperately hanging on to shrivelled in her grasp. The last Twilight saw was Dewdrop screaming as she vanished into the inky blackness of the pit. Twilight stood there for several moments with just the roar of the storm for company before turning wordlessly and leaving for home.
***
Twilight trudged back into her house silently. The initial elation at getting one over on Dewdrop had quickly faded, leaving only a sickly, guilty feeling in the pit of her stomach. There was a voice whispering in her head that she'd gone too far, that Dewdrop hadn't deserved that, but she buried such thoughts.
"Hey Twilight!" Spike called happily, a chef's hat on his little head. "Taking a stroll? I thought you were in bed!" He waved a wooden spoon in Twilight's face. "Have you seen Dewdrop, she said she'd bake some cookies with me!"
"Dewdrop's popped out Spike." Twilight stared back. "Go to bed."
Spike's face fell. "But I was hungry, and she said she'd-"
"Spike, go to bed." Twilight was not in a confrontational mood, and she certainly didn't want Spike to make her feel worse than she did already. She'd done the right thing, she knew it. Dewdrop wouldn't take the hint; she had to be taught a lesson. It would all be better in the morning.
That night, sleep came harder to Twilight than ever before. Every crash of thunder, every flash of lighting, reminded her of the little blue pony who had looked so confused and hurt, alone in the bottom of that dark hole. That little blue pony who had spent last night whimpering about the storm, even tucked up in the safety of her house. That little blue pony who she last saw vanishing in terror into the black clutches of a pit.
"Tough love" she whispered to herself, in her very empty room. "Tough love."
***
Twilight rose even earlier the next morning, racing out across the glistening landscape as it recovered from the storm, the rays of the sun breaking over the horizon. Try as she might, she couldn't escape the heavy, gnawing feeling of guilt that had been eating away at her, even though she knew what she had done to Dewdrop was a fraction of what the interloper had done to her.
She would haul Dewdrop out of the hole, Dewdrop would be upset but realise how much she'd hurt Twilight, and either leave or tone it down. Everything would go back to normal. Twilight laughed to herself; there was always a chance Dewdrop had somehow escaped from the hole and would be sitting at home cutting out photos of herself to stick in Twilight's photo album or whatever weird stuff she did in her spare time.
This thought abuptly died in Twilight's mind as she cleared the wooded area and reached the Rocky Mountains. A sickly feeling bubbled in her stomach and twisted as she surveyed the scene: where rocky hills had once risen like craggy fingers reaching for the sky, there was now nothing. The entire landscape had been blasted flat by the storm; a smooth level plain of rocks was all that remained, stretching as far as the eye could see.
Twilight galloped onto the new plain, scrambling about in an attempt to get her bearings. She couldn't even work out where her hole had been, and didn't even want to think about Dewdrop at the bottom when it had all caved in. "Dewdrop!" she cried out wildly. "Dewdrop! Can you hear me?"
"Hey Twilight!" Twilight leapt out of her skin, but the initial sense of relief was quickly washed away when she realised it wasn't Dewdrop who had responded, but a blue Pegasus pony, hanging casually upside-down in the air, a hard-hat covering her rainbow mane.
"R-rainbow Dash" Twilight gasped to her friend. "What's going on?"
Rainbow Dash simply grinned. "Did you see that storm last night? Boom! Crash! Pow! We really went for it this time! Now the Princess gave us that renovation grant, we can get a proper mountain built here, not that rubbish little thing we had!"
Twilight's mouth hung open. "R-renovation? But Dewdrop was here last night!"
Rainbow Dash just rolled her eyes. "Don't be ridiculous, no pony would be out here, its way too dangerous. Besides, I was telling Dewdrop about our lightning demolitions the other day. She'd have to be crazy to come here."
'But she is crazy!' Twilight's inner voice wailed. But then crazy or not, Dewdrop DID have a good reason for going into danger; she thought she would be saving Ponyville from a terrible, if fake, idol. The colour drained from Twilight's face as she resisted the strong urge to dry heave. She leapt at Rainbow Dash, shaking the Pegasus until her hat fell off.
"Dewdrop DID come out here last night, and it's all my fault!" she cried, shaking. "Y-you've got to get help, we have to find her while there's still time!"
Rainbow Dash just stared back wide-eyed a she took in what Twilight was saying. "O-okay" she croaked, and in a flash took to the skies to summon aid.
Twilight stood there alone, looking out across the wide, lonely plain. And then she did the only thing she could. She started to dig.
***
Twilight looked up into the sky as another wave of Pegasus ponies roared overhead. The search and rescue team had been out all morning. In fact, nearly all of Ponyville had turned out to look for Dewdrop but there was just too much ground to search and Twilight had been reluctant to divulge any more information, especially the fact that Dewdrop had been trapped in a hole of Twilight's own devising.
Twilight had attempted to retrace her steps, but this had proved impossible given how thoroughly the storm had flattened the land, so she had been left to methodically dig holes at regular intervals in an attempt to get lucky. She was currently at the bottom of her fifth such hole, and was having no luck.
"This is impossible!" she sighed as she continued to pick at the rocky earth, her head throbbing and whirling with guilt and self-loathing. She had tried to assure herself with the idea that Dewdrop would be waiting for her at home; that she would look up and Dewdrop would be staring down from the top of the hole Twilight was currently standing in; that everything would work itself out in an hilarious series of misunderstandings and comic pratfalls which they could all laugh about later. Wasn't that how things usually transpired?
Such ideas swiftly left with a sickly certainty as Twilight's spade hit something soft amongst the rocks. It was a little blue hoof, battered and bruised.
Twilight immediately scrambled into action, digging and pulling and tugging in a desperate attempt to unearth Dewdrop. "HELP!" she called up out of the hole. "SPIKE! RAINBOW! ANYONE! HELP!" But there was no reply forthcoming.
With a heave, Twilight pushed a worryingly heavy boulder out of the way, to reveal Dewdrop Dazzle, lying there filthy and tattered, her mane a mess of hair, and her body covered in scratches. There was none of the usual impossible energy about her, she simply lay there a floppy mess, looking up at Twilight.
"I knew you'd come!" she croaked out weakly, her little chest struggling to rise and fall. "I knew you'd save me."
Twilight panted out, guilt and relief flooding her veins at the sight. "Don't worry Dewdrop!" she fussed, clearing away more rubble. "Everything's going to be okay."
As Dewdrop's head lolled to one side and she gave a rasping croak, Twilight froze in panic. Everything wasn't going to be okay. Dewdrop's eyes had closed, she had stopped breathing, and a check of her hoof revealed no pulse.
Dewdrop Dazzle was dead.
Take that DewDrop............but still that was pretty harsh on Twilights side..........Still DewDrop had it coming.You mess with her.....YOU DIE!!!!
What is this strange feeling I feel?
Could it be...SYMPATHY??!! For DEWDROP DAZZLE?!
WHAT THE FLAMING FRICK IS HAPPENING HERE?!
I kinda liked DewDrop. She was like and fused.
No...
I clutched my sinking chest as I read the last sentence.
I didn't expect for her to go like that. Even to her dying breath, she's still as joyful and happy to see Twilight. Even after what her 'friend' did to her. Poor Dewdrop...
Ah, yes. The feeling of regret.
First Gilda, now Dewdrop. Curse this community for making me feel sympathy for characters like these.
i honestly feel bad for dewdrop, to STILL hold admiration for twilight her 'hero'after what she did was both sad and admirable.............
I hated Dewdrop Dazzle so much, but having her die just made my nearly cry.
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less gilda, more trixie.
Oh dear.
well twi is fucked (mentily that is)
hmm, dew should havve backkked off when she could, not twis fault
oh sweet merciful celestia...
-Switch from the Matrix-
not like this... not like this... -dies instantaneously-
Part of my mind says: "GOOD RIDDENS "
Another part says: "What the buck, Twilight?"
And the last part says: "Do I care about Dew? Lolnope."
So, yeah. Sounds like I have a terrible mind.
Yes.....yeeeeesssss
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i didnt like her but sucks she died
I have nothing to say.
Does it make me evil if I laughed at her death?
I... wait, what? Why can't I hate her? WHY CAN'T I HATE DEWDROP? LUNADAMNIT! WHAT ARE THESE FEELS?
I WAS going to feel sorry for her, but then I realized she knew about the lightning thing and still went out tere, then didn't bother to tell Twilight about the demolition.
*Looks at above comments showing remorse* Bitches please, she was begging to be killed.
YESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYES
But I expected some more Twirage to get Dewdrop killed
I refuse to believe the last sentence. I JUST IMAGINED IT! please tell me I imagined it... somebody...
Nopony deserves to die like that...
FOR CELESTIA'S SAKE TWILIGHT
I am disappoint.
well... Gosh do I feel sad or .. yea sad
Good job Twi, your biggest fan is dead.
When I saw she was alive, I expected Twilight to quickly smash her head in with a boulder to keep her silent about Twilight's doings. I have to say, I expected Dewdrop to kill Twilight, or even kill her, tattoo them and die them to reverse colours and cutie marks, then dump Twilight's body somewhere, so everypony would think that Dewdrop was dead, and Dewdrop would truly become Twilight.
YAY SHE DEAAAD
:D
Intresting story. How the hell could not not put a Dark tag on this though?
The best part of this is the comments. Previous chapters, everyone was all "OMG I hope she fakkin dies!!!11!". And now that she actually did a fair amount of people are super sad.
Heh.
Because of this, I kept expecting that Twilight would forget the ladder and Dewdrops would use it to escape.
I don't see why people hate DewDrop, I think her taking over Twilight's life was just as much Twilight's own fault. I mean Twilight didn't resist it at all, she just complained to Spike (not even to DewDrop) and made herself angry. She kept grumbling and kept herself in her books. She refused to go on adventure with her friends and she gave DewDrop permission, then she get's angry with her for doing exactly what she ordered her to do.
She could have sent a letter to Celestia that the previous message wasn't hers and that she should disregard it. Celestia even says that Twilight's reports have be reducing in quality recently. Also the fact that Dewdrop was accepted so quickly by her friends means that she wasn't such close a friend of them as she thought she was.
The fact that DewDrop was a better 'Twilight' and Twilight herself was lies with Twilight. Apparently she isn't quite the miracle mare she thought she was.
Also her pit idea was extremely stupid, DewDrop would certainly become disillusioned with her but when she tells her friends Twilight will lose the respect and love she still had from them and they would most certainly be furious at her. Also Celestia would be extremely disappointed in her.
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Dewdrop isn't a bad pony, just a little dense. If Twi had just come out and told Dewdrop that what she was doing was pissing her off, things would be different, like THERE BEING NO STORY.
I don't hate her. But Twi is being a bit of a nag.
First, DewDrop is kinda annoying, cannot deny that, but she doesn't deserve to die.
Second, what is Twi just tell Dewdrop her true feelings directly at first? Then so many things would not happen. Twi is too kind maybe, just cannot refuse ponies, she is afraid of hurting somepony so she don't want to say directly. But she still hurts, and even worse. I have the same feeling. When somepony ask me to do something I just find it hard to say no, like "can I sleep in your rooms" said by Dewdrop in this story and I will always say yes, even though I want to say no in my heart. Don't want pony disappointed. But then something worse just happened. It would be better if we can just speak out like more straight.
*sighs*
Besides, Dewdrop's death is not what Twi want to. So don't blame Twi.
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same
Dewdrop Dazzle was not The Imposter.
1 Imposter remains.