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Based on the lazy Hasbro recolour of Twilight Sparkle. One dark and stormy night, Twilight Sparkle is visited by a strange pony. But this pony knows a lot about Twilight Sparkle; in fact, she might just be Twilight's number one fan. And that couldn't be a bad thing, right?

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Hah,Hah,Hah,Hah.Hah.Hah......that's what you get Twilight wannabe.

Nopony can replace Twilight. NOPONY!!!:twilightangry2:

Huh. I was just thinking about rereading this story on E-Daily.

What the fuck is wrong with DewDrop Dazzle. She's become a real stalker.:rainbowhuh:

O.K now that's just weird. DewDrop just wants to take everything that Twilight has worked for and take it for herself.
I mean the friends part was O.K but owning the house and letting Twilight live in her own house is just crossing the line:twilightangry2:


Twilight HAS to KILL that BITCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:Take that DewDrop............but still that was pretty harsh on Twilights side..........Still DewDrop had it coming.:twilightangry2:You mess with her.....YOU DIE!!!!:scootangel:

This one time when I was in Walgreens I saw some MLP toys so I went to check them out. What I saw suprised me:pinkiegasp:. I saw all of the MLP Mane 6 but they were different. Ofcourse DewDrop was sopposed to be Twillight, there was one that represented Fluttershy named Cupcake and the others I don't remember.
The only real character was Pinkie Pie whitch they showed how she is in the show but only her.

You should make a story were DewDrop comes back with her friends to meet Twilight and her Friends, but then all that happened to Twilight would happen to the rest of her friend since the impersinators would try to mimick them as well.

The only weird thing would be when both Pinkies meet each other since they look exactly the same. Might cause some confussion but I bet you have a plan for it.

She turned from a stalker to a mary sue-ish character, not that it is a bad thing, in fact, i really like it.

Chapter shares the Title of Frank Sinatra song. You realed me in with class. I'm staying for content

The more things change....
Good story.
:trixieshiftleft:

And yet we never saw what her cutie mark was, i don't think i remeber, but in the context of the story, two equal shaped forms would make sense. :pinkiecrazy:

The great thing about this fic is that it's narrative het some laugh out of you, while managing to be a little dark at the same time, wonderful job, i can only imagine what would happen with trixie....:trixieshiftleft:

Wonderful work:pinkiesmile:

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I believe on the toy, Dewdrop's cutie mark is a Japanese Love Umbrella :twilightblush:

Whoa, that was an AWESOME fanfic.:pinkiehappy:

Oh man, this is awesome. Even more so since just a few minutes ago I dropped Dewdrop Dazzle into boiling water, squeezed off her head, and started cutting out her neck with an exacto knife. :pinkiecrazy:

It always surprises me that we make up stories and personalities for background ponies, but never the toys. This is an awesome concept, with excellent writing (save for a few punctuation mistakes), and I'll be watching this.

I remember when I was a child, and my mom read me the story of The Hungry Caterpillar.
Fucker gave me nightmares for months.

*Ahem* I have to say, though, that I am loving this story! Twilight really does detest cheery, Mare-y Sue, character, doesn't she?

*characters
(Gorram virtual Ipod keyboard...)

:moustache: Dewdrop reminds me a lot of Pinkie Pie :pinkiecrazy: for some reason.

Please, let it be a mallet. A really big mallet.

What is this strange feeling I feel?
Could it be...SYMPATHY??!! For DEWDROP DAZZLE?!
WHAT THE FLAMING FRICK IS HAPPENING HERE?!

So... Is Dewdrop Dazzle something of a... stalker and a liar? :rainbowderp:
And she used Twilight! That bitch! :twilightangry2:

Freaking beautiful.
I can only wonder at what happens when Trixie snaps...
If she even snaps, that is :twilightoops:
So is Dewdrop still imitating ponies, or has she learnt her lesson, or does the story benefit more if I don't know dot sure?

Gorramit, meant to say "for", nor "dot"
Bucking Ipod and autocorrect!:flutterrage:

:moustache: If I were Twi, I would let DewDrop do my job and take her money, after all, she seems easily influenced.

:ajsleepy: I kinda liked DewDrop. She was like :pinkiesmile: and :twilightsheepish: fused.

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Thanks.

The ending is deliberately open ended so the reader can make up their own mind as to what happens next. I'd like to think that everyone came out of it slightly better ponies, but who knows!

Yeah, I'm feeling pretty bad for Twilight now. I thought everything Dewdrop was doing was cute at first. Then she started getting irritating and now she's gone way overboard.

But I still hope nothing terrible happens to her and everything gets resolved peacefully. :twilightsmile:

:rainbowhuh: Why in the world did The Hungery Caterpillar scare the living day lights ot of Spike?
It's a harmless book about the caterpillar eating diffeent foods. :facehoof:
Good job by the way.

No... :fluttercry:
I clutched my sinking chest as I read the last sentence. :fluttershyouch:

I didn't expect for her to go like that. Even to her dying breath, she's still as joyful and happy to see Twilight. Even after what her 'friend' did to her. Poor Dewdrop...

That was a great read! I'm really glad Dewdrop was okay, but I feel kinda let down by her reaction at the end. I thought her view of Twilight being perfect would change a little after her revelations about the trap and they could end up being real friends. But it's like as soon as she discovered Twilight's flaws, she immediately set her goal to find another pony to imitate. I wonder if she even learned anything.
I guess she's just crazy. Like, completely, maybe. :derpytongue2:

Oh yeah, I also laughed at the part where Spike shows up and finds them kissing. :twilightsheepish: I automatically imagined him saying 'awkwaard' like he did in the show before I read him actually say it. :rainbowkiss:

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The more you build someone up, the higher they have to fall. I'd like to think Dewdrop did learn something, even if the lesson was 'Don't try to be like Twilight Sparkle' instead of 'Don't try to be like another pony'.

Of course, you could look at it another way. If Twilight wasn't so passive-aggressive towards Dewdrop, the whole thing might (or might not) never have happened.

It's up to you as the reader how much they both learnt at the end of it; I'm generally more of a fan of bittersweet endings - happy tinged with a bit of sad and uncertainty, because that's how life is most of the time.

(And for what it's worth, I started writing the fic thinking Dewdrop was the most awful pony ever, and by the end I just wanted to give her a big hug)

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I choose to believe that she hasn't learned anything. And that not only will a similar sequence of events happen again, but that this isn't the first time something like that happened to her. Like, this is just another day in the life of Dewdrop whatever.

Ha, that Hungry Caterpillar part was hilarious!

good story so far you are really good at making people frustrated at dewdrop seriously i hate her and im frustrated at spike to good work :pinkiehappy:

Wait what, 666 views:pinkiegasp: I just know how this is gonna end

Why did that ending remind me of the film Funny Games? Urgh...

Brilliant fic! Very bitter-sweet, and I like how it was left open at the end for reader-interpretation of Dewdrop's current mindset. I seem to have misplaced five of my stars while reading it.

Ah, yes. The feeling of regret.

for a minute or two there i thought something horrible was going to happen also poor trixie.:unsuresweetie:

Oh lawdy, dat ending. That was a pretty good read, thanks!

that was an awesome read and now twilight is my fav pony you pushed pinkie down to number two thats quite the achievment :twilightsmile:

5 bits says Trixie will stab Dewdrop in the first week :trixieshiftright:

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105664 Celestia,luna and every mary sue out there

First Gilda, now Dewdrop. Curse this community for making me feel sympathy for characters like these.

i honestly feel bad for dewdrop, to STILL hold admiration for twilight her 'hero'after what she did was both sad and admirable.............:pinkiesad2:

"Not even Princess Luna in her darkest of hours had ever killed another pony. It was unheard of. Inconceivable. "

...uh huh, except the part where eternal night would slowly kill everyone and she knew it and simply didn't care. :facehoof:

I feel sorry for Dewdrop I mean yeah she's a stalker but being crushed by those rocks???????


But really a good story I love it!!!!!!!!!:pinkiehappy:

I hated Dewdrop Dazzle so much, but having her die just made my nearly cry.

I just can't shake the impression that Dewdrop's 'grey' before-life and her coming to Ponyville (and subsequently being very annoying) is some elaborate metaphor for bronies, and our escapism through MLP:FiM. Maybe I'm thinking into this a smidge too much

I actually think of an ending when I read stories like this I was picturing twilight committing suicide (by jumping off a cliff her head hitting rocks below) in front of her friends' eyes.

you know, I'd rather compare DD with Rarity...

6 feet under the grass pls.

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