Always a highlight of my day seeing this get updated.

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Sweet. Can't wait for Part 2.

I love the slow burn approach you're taking.

And meanwhile, you haven't even arrived yet.

If you're gonna write scenes like this, you probably should start giving names to your OCs. That's one of the reasons why I hate second-person povs. It starts to become confusing without named characters filling the scenes.

Not a whole lot happened, but that okay. The story is still progressing, slowly but surely. Though, I do confess some surprise that Mr. No-Name #2 didn't try to break Mr No-Name #1 to vent his frustration and rage at Rainbow Dash, especially after such a fresh break-up and public humiliation as that.

I distinctly remember a story a lot like this appearing a while ago before seemingly vanishing. Am I alone in that?

I'm glad people are liking it, I'll have Part 2 (chapter 4) out by tonight/tomorrow as to not leave things hanging until next week.
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I'm sure you've noticed the new things I've added compared to the previous green, as I'm completely rewriting it from the ground up. There'll be slight differences and new additions so not everything's predictable, but within reason.

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If there was, it wasn't this one. First time I've posted this story here.

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You have a point, though that guy's role in the story is pretty much done as he wants to avoid future static with RD, but I could retroactively name him directly in that scene if you think it's necessary and no one minds. But you're right, all future major side characters will be named.

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She's intended to look more like the cover art in the beginning, but there's certainly room to have more focus on her abs as she chisels them out in the future.

Thanks for the feedback!

At least the dude didn't take his anger out on the MC

I kinda of agree wi th the asshole. Trying to force an apology is useless amd makes more bad blood