For a story that’s obviously going to focus itself in a specific direction, this first chapter is actually incredible worldbuilding and really wholesome. Props to you for making a fic of this type that has as much story as it will ‘plot’.
11868525 Agreed. If we're getting this much quality story in the opening chapter alone, the author can take their time delivering the payload. I may come for the plot, as it were, but I'll stay for more of this.
A fantastic start to a very appealing story premise. I can easily see RD being that type of tomboy and i cant wait to see where it goes from here. Looking forward to the next update.
It's kinda sad how you more or less just summed up a surprising amount of my own childhood and teenage years in this one chapter alone. And, although I utterly DESPISE second-person pov stories on principle, this has been a surprisingly engaging one for me. Must be those aforementioned similarities that drew me in. Man, I know for a fact that if I'd had a girl like Rainbow Dash as one of my oldest childhood 'friends', my life would probably be quite different than it is now. Consider me interested in seeing what happens next, if there's a chapter two.
For a story that’s obviously going to focus itself in a specific direction, this first chapter is actually incredible worldbuilding and really wholesome. Props to you for making a fic of this type that has as much story as it will ‘plot’.
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Agreed. If we're getting this much quality story in the opening chapter alone, the author can take their time delivering the payload. I may come for the plot, as it were, but I'll stay for more of this.
A fantastic start to a very appealing story premise. I can easily see RD being that type of tomboy and i cant wait to see where it goes from here. Looking forward to the next update.
Absolutely fantastic start! Can't wait to see where it ends up!
I have to be honest here, l’m hooked. I’m glad that I’m not the only one that can see Rainbow Dash being able to beat someone ass at an early age.
Keep up the good work. I can’t wait to see what happens next.
It's kinda sad how you more or less just summed up a surprising amount of my own childhood and teenage years in this one chapter alone. And, although I utterly DESPISE second-person pov stories on principle, this has been a surprisingly engaging one for me. Must be those aforementioned similarities that drew me in. Man, I know for a fact that if I'd had a girl like Rainbow Dash as one of my oldest childhood 'friends', my life would probably be quite different than it is now. Consider me interested in seeing what happens next, if there's a chapter two.
I have to echo the sentiments from the other comments:
Great start, well written, good character development.
to be honest, this is the second time that i have liked a second person story, with You a demon (apparently) being the first
i actually like the story so far, keep it up!
I'm liking this story so far, it's really great. From rivals after so many years to friends in senior year, it's great.