Take my like and Watch. Like a certain Sith Lord once said, we shall watch your career with great interest.

Whether it's because you've finally started bonding with RD and feel like you've missed out on making memories with her, or because she's starting to get really hot and you're reluctantly becoming down bad for her, or both , you'd rather hang out with RD before your other friends in your contact list on your phone.

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As long as she doesn't know that he took glances at her he should be fine hopefully

Okay, this is really good.

...did she just do the 'smooth criminal' thing....nice.

Tomboy childhood friends really are the hottest

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It's actually already written, originally a green that's on PonePaste, so you won't have to wait long for the whole thing.

Edit: actually scratch that, I assumed it was the same story as the one on PonePaste, but actually reading it, a lot has changed from the green, so forget what I said.

Was mildly interested for the potential clop, but now I'm fully invested in this unusual romance.

Not sure I agree with this guy's fascination of Rainbow's belly button. Her abs/sixpack would definitely be interesting to see. Not to mention just how incredibly firm and muscular her ass and legs must be! She's a fricking sports star! Of course every bit of her body would be toned, muscular perfection. So, why focus so heavily on her belly button? Even as teenaged kinks go, that one doesn't make sense.

A great sequel chapter, nonetheless. It was rather uplifting to see them finally starting to really get along with one another. And the best part is that you seem to be taking the realistic long road to romance by establishing their childhood history, building their friendship, and then likely transitioning into a budding romance. A much longer but far more rewarding experience that not too many authors take. Namely, those who just have them jump straight to sex halfway through chapter 1.

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Came looking for "plot", found Plot

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for real!!! this fic is so dang cute

I’m into this. Great build up so far.

Hopefully the party doesn't end in a disaster.

oh my god i read the green text forum story because i simply couldn’t wait. this is going to the moon 🚀🚀🚀

This is surprisingly focused and has some effort put into its story considering where it eventually leads. Keep up the good work.