I’m really enjoying all the seapony history you’ve integrated into this story. On top of Star and Flow’s romance, it makes for a very sweet story. I also greatly appreciate the use of Tempest, especially with how brutal she can be in her methods, here.

“Well, let’s recap real quick. They fled their home, and started living adjacent to yours. You seaponies lent a fin because...” He trailed off, looking to Flowing for an actual reason.

“’Cause it’s our thing. Shoo be do, remember?”

“Right. You shoo be did your best to help them, and they shoo be stole your waters in response.”

I love you for this.

Shoo be do
Shoo be did
Shoo be done
Shoo be going
Shoo be partying
Shoo be home by ten
Shoo be quiet
Shoo be another piece of cake
Shoo fly shoo

Tempest's a serious villain. Let's hope she can't follow Star Point and Flowing underwater...

It's only stuff. Stuff can be replaced. People? Not so much.
Time to see if Flowing has the good stuff! It will be the longest kiss they'll ever share!

Excellent job writing Tempest. She is a truly scary enemy. Especially for someone who isn't a fighter too. I am very much enjoying this story. I know it has a good ending because the Storm King is defeated and Tempest is reformed. But I am very excited to see how they get there.