This little hellion is the absolute best.

The hook here is such a great setup. I really enjoy there being some pretty high stakes to their story. And from the way things are looking, that romance is only going to keep blooming.

Awesome to see you taking the original story this direction.

Well get a fav from me! AMAZING!

This is looking very good already. They're going to have some real trouble with Tempest...

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Какой планируется размер истории? (Надеюсь наличие встроенного переводчика в браузере не проблема?)

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At the moment, the completed story sits at a little over 65,000 words, across 13 total chapters.

That sort of expanded canon storytelling is exactly what I dig. Will eagerly read all
Amazing cover art, btw!

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Thanks! To say I'm pleased with how it turned out would be a huge understatement!

This is really cute, can‘t wait for more!

Isn't the fish stank caused by breakdown of chemicals as a result of death and deregulation? That is to say, she shouldn't be all that stinky just by being in a container overnight (so long as she's still living).
It occurs that we haven't noticed if she's been described with a transformation pearl shard, so she must be a true seapony and not a transformed 'griff?

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bait and holding tanks have a fishy smell. it lingers lightly. dry it out it gets worse for the reasons you stated. been a navy sailor and a commercial fisher. trust me, the stink carries. even the coast has more than a smell of water and plants.

I don't know if you'll go back and see this due to how late I am to the story and I hope you don't find it rude

taking a hefty swing of the mead

swig

nontheless

nonetheless

only to go and get run around anyways

I could be wrong but im guessing you meant run aground here

to much the chagrin

much to the chagrin, its a feeling so think of it like saying to much the embarrassment or much to the embarrassment, alternatively you could take out the word much

try to borough in through your gills

burrow, a borough is a town

This one not slimey and smelly enough

slimy

Again, I hope I'm not too bothersome doing this but I'm really loving this story and its concept so want to see it be the best it can be