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Boom! It seems our story is starting to wrap up, and our favorite commander is on a new path in life. Any way to see if we get a time skip to life after the movie ,or a jump by a few weeks? Overall, I’m thankful you came back to this couple and managed to write a nice send off story for them.
Any plans continuing with them or are you going to focus on new projects?
Good, Fizzlepop. Eat your thought food. It will take a while to sink in, but it's healthy and will help you grow!
It is interesting that Seasmoke is apparently the only one to notice Flowing missing. Perhaps her continued absence who remain unnoticed until reported.
Well, that's going to leave a scar. All the better to regale the young ones with, right?
A seed has been planted. Though I am surprised they didn't pick somewhere else to lay low, rather than trust to Tempest covering for them.
That line punched. I see we're still incomplete so there's at least an epilogue on the way, but that would have been a hella strong way to end the fic. Still a great way to end the chapter, showing that Tempest will silently keep her
friendpartner from future hunts without any long-winded explanation needed or given.11696935
One more chapter/epilogue is still to come, which I hope will satisfy your wants.
I'll probably come back to them again, though likely not right away. I've got a few other ideas for oneshots of the same romantic clop variety, and longer non-clop ideas that I want to hammer out. But I had a blast writing Flowstar and this story, and I'd absolutely love the opportunity to do so again in the future.
Well damn. Good writing. I wanna see a story of tempest and cirrus...like...can that be next!?
AAAAAA THIS WAS SO EXCITING!!!! I was hoping so badly that flow would save tempest and that tempest would have a change of heart. I was in the edge of my bed in anticipation for what would happen and you resolved it all soooooooo satisfyingly. I would have been heartbroken if there was some sort of plot twist where tempest died, flow didn't get away, they didn't get reunited etc. Sometimes the most simple sort of "endings" are the most deeply satisfying.
I haven't felt as invested in a storys outcome since FoE and Project Horizons tbh. This was so exciting, thank you so much for writing and sharing <3 can't wait to explore the finale!!!