And I mean in both length of chapter and time between chapters. So sorry about that, but, as I mentioned, I'm neck deep in work right now (still a good thing), so...I'm going as fast as I can! But I do wonder: would you prefer to see the chapters like this--meaning long as I originally planned them, and probably spaced out because of personal issues--or would you rather see shorter chapters, that might not feel "complete," posted more frequently? This is just a poll, not a promise. But it might make me re-think the structure of things.
Also, yes, I totally stole her from Neil. It's okay, I think he would understand. And she fit so well.
Now this looks like its going to be an amazing sequal. Celestia waging war against the forces of the afterlife, Cadence and Twilight totally screwed until the sun rises. Ya, I cant wait to see what else you have in store for us Nom.
I think Twilight and cadence are going to end up bucking each other to the high heavens. and when Celestia gets back. well... I really wonder what Is going to happen when she finds out that Canterlot just got screwed over literally.
please don't make the trip to Tartarus and back too long.
tho I do wonder what deaths plan was all along? or maybe that was nightmare moon? meh we'll find out later.
I must say i hope Celestia does not manage to bring Luna back to life, that would be completely unfair to every single being that died before her.
But i do hope for some happy ending for them nonetheless.
The issue would be that its a big fuck you to mortal ponies in general, killing death is impossible from what we see for now at least, so thats out too. (would create to much problems for everyone anyway, eternal agony for the ones of the verge of death,deadly sick and such )
Guess we will have to see where you take it.
As for Chapter, maybe half them (instead of 20k 10k chapters), that way they come sooner and while you dont end it in cliffhangers(ok you do in this one at least, not a big one but still one since you left Twilight and Cadence in a tight spot and Celestia went irrational) with longer one, it would update sooner so leave us happier because of sooner updates probably.
I'm so very glad that I'm following this story. Anyhow I'm wondering what Death's plan in all this is, perhaps she is a big romantic as she says and wants Luna to start living again or perhaps she has some other reason to make sure Ceslestia stays in Tartarus.
Oh, on the topic of chapter sizes just make them as big as you need to make sure they feel complete, even if it means going over 20k words. No reason to let the story seem rushed.
Man, I've read a lot of stories involving the death of a loved one, but this one still managed to find a way to depress me. I'm not going to tell you what to do with your own story, but I do hope things turn out right for all involved.
So...did Twilight and Candace...just lock themselves in an impenetrable room after redirecting a lust spell that affected hundreds of ponies to just the two of them...with no way of shutting it off? Next chapter should be interesting if my understanding is correct ^^; Poor shining though, cut off from both the mares he lusts for (if only temporarily.)
They did exactly that. They may, possibly, be immune to the spell's effects, since they were the ones who cast it... But being as how they appear to have had a thing for each other in the FIRST place, this will probably not help matters much.
Was the marriage proposition in the middle of a casino a reference to Friends? You know, the scene when Chandler proposes to Monica if the dices got a double four.
“Ah never said that, missy, so don’t get yer britches all worked up into a bunch. The only requirement in my book for two of anypony gettin’ married is that they love each other and understand the commitment they’re about to make,” the stallion stated. “Ah don’t care if you’re two mares, two stallions, or a pony and a rock, all that matters to me is the feeling behind it, ya hear?”
A pony and a rock? I laughed so much!!!!!!!!!!!!! And two, some reactions from the ponies. Cadance: WHAT DID I DO!!!!!!?!???????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Twilight: WHAT DID CADANCE DO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?????? Then, at the end, maybe they can get drunk and have some sex....
at first i was like fucking make luna mortal you bitch and then you're gonna fucking kill her how bout i kill you
but then it was like omg he's killing luna right now no why nonononnoowhy what's the reason why does she have to die now???? (which im still seriously asking that)
and so i was all like reading that with heart wrenching remorse for her and celestia's all like 'no i'll stop you pony death!' and pony death's like 'lul nope' and then fucking everything seemed lost.....
AND THNE YOU FUCKING TURN AROUND AND GO 'oh i'll just say that now that luna's dead celestia's gonna go rescue her from being dead'...........
what?.....just what? no.....why would you do that? it was bad enough you came up with 1 bs way to res something living but now this? fucking now like everything , and i mean fucking everything that i've read from this story feels like a lie/betrayal , you had it going so well at so many times , just why would you do thiiiiiiiiis -.-/>_> ..........
1469347 except for you know everything she lived for while nmm was imprisoned on the moon -.- ......
1470194 except not really since it was kind of clearly stated that they are embodiments of natural forces and thus follow different renewal cycle patterns than the standard life forms on any given planet.....
Well, that was long.
And I mean in both length of chapter and time between chapters. So sorry about that, but, as I mentioned, I'm neck deep in work right now (still a good thing), so...I'm going as fast as I can! But I do wonder: would you prefer to see the chapters like this--meaning long as I originally planned them, and probably spaced out because of personal issues--or would you rather see shorter chapters, that might not feel "complete," posted more frequently? This is just a poll, not a promise. But it might make me re-think the structure of things.
Also, yes, I totally stole her from Neil. It's okay, I think he would understand. And she fit so well.
Love and Tolerate!
~Nom
Now this looks like its going to be an amazing sequal. Celestia waging war against the forces of the afterlife, Cadence and Twilight totally screwed until the sun rises. Ya, I cant wait to see what else you have in store for us Nom.
I think Twilight and cadence are going to end up bucking each other to the high heavens. and when Celestia gets back. well... I really wonder what Is going to happen when she finds out that Canterlot just got screwed over literally.
please don't make the trip to Tartarus and back too long.
tho I do wonder what deaths plan was all along? or maybe that was nightmare moon? meh we'll find out later.
cheers
Oh, uh, shit.
So, Celestia is the star of Dante's Inferno. LEZ DO DIS
I for one hope she succeeds and brings Luna back to the world of the living. She has absolutely nothing to live for otherwise.
“You say you drank brandy? But you’re a fine girl. What a good wife you have been!”
Really...? LOL! What you did there...I Saw It...
I must say i hope Celestia does not manage to bring Luna back to life, that would be completely unfair to every single being that died before her.
But i do hope for some happy ending for them nonetheless.
The issue would be that its a big fuck you to mortal ponies in general, killing death is impossible from what we see for now at least, so thats out too. (would create to much problems for everyone anyway, eternal agony for the ones of the verge of death,deadly sick and such )
Guess we will have to see where you take it.
As for Chapter, maybe half them (instead of 20k 10k chapters), that way they come sooner and while you dont end it in cliffhangers(ok you do in this one at least, not a big one but still one since you left Twilight and Cadence in a tight spot and Celestia went irrational) with longer one, it would update sooner so leave us happier because of sooner updates probably.
Hmmmm.......
I'm so very glad that I'm following this story. Anyhow I'm wondering what Death's plan in all this is, perhaps she is a big romantic as she says and wants Luna to start living again or perhaps she has some other reason to make sure Ceslestia stays in Tartarus.
Oh, on the topic of chapter sizes just make them as big as you need to make sure they feel complete, even if it means going over 20k words. No reason to let the story seem rushed.
Man, I've read a lot of stories involving the death of a loved one, but this one still managed to find a way to depress me. I'm not going to tell you what to do with your own story, but I do hope things turn out right for all involved.
Twilight and Cadence vs. the hoard if raging sex zombies. I really can't wait.
Oh man, I can't stop laughing at Twilight and Cadence now. That's just perfect.
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So...did Twilight and Candace...just lock themselves in an impenetrable room after redirecting a lust spell that affected hundreds of ponies to just the two of them...with no way of shutting it off? Next chapter should be interesting if my understanding is correct ^^; Poor shining though, cut off from both the mares he lusts for (if only temporarily.)
They did exactly that. They may, possibly, be immune to the spell's effects, since they were the ones who cast it... But being as how they appear to have had a thing for each other in the FIRST place, this will probably not help matters much.
Was the marriage proposition in the middle of a casino a reference to Friends? You know, the scene when Chandler proposes to Monica if the dices got a double four.
OK, two things, starting with a quote.
A pony and a rock? I laughed so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And two, some reactions from the ponies.
Cadance: WHAT DID I DO!!!!!!?!???????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Twilight: WHAT DID CADANCE DO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!??????
Then, at the end, maybe they can get drunk and have some sex....
ok , i guess first off , fuck you
at first i was like fucking make luna mortal you bitch and then you're gonna fucking kill her how bout i kill you
but then it was like omg he's killing luna right now no why nonononnoowhy what's the reason why does she have to die now???? (which im still seriously asking that)
and so i was all like reading that with heart wrenching remorse for her and celestia's all like 'no i'll stop you pony death!' and pony death's like 'lul nope' and then fucking everything seemed lost.....
AND THNE YOU FUCKING TURN AROUND AND GO 'oh i'll just say that now that luna's dead celestia's gonna go rescue her from being dead'...........
what?.....just what? no.....why would you do that? it was bad enough you came up with 1 bs way to res something living but now this? fucking now like everything , and i mean fucking everything that i've read from this story feels like a lie/betrayal , you had it going so well at so many times , just why would you do thiiiiiiiiis -.-/>_> ..........
1469347 except for you know everything she lived for while nmm was imprisoned on the moon -.- ......
1470194 except not really since it was kind of clearly stated that they are embodiments of natural forces and thus follow different renewal cycle patterns than the standard life forms on any given planet.....
1523688 oh god i fucking hope not.......
ha
I just got through playing Dantes Infurno. I know how this ends. NIPPLE BABYS!!!
celestia's inferno... please...
After they came up with the spell that would be burned away by the Sun, I was like 2842842% sure it wasn't going to.
My only wish would be that Death was Mort from http://www.fimfiction.net/story/30613
Aww, she dead. Though my sadness was kind of lessened when she mentioned squashing Chryssie. No one hurts the beloved Bugbutt!
Cya
Raziel-chan