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NessaPony
I uh...Yeah im into some depraved shit lmao. So if you are too! Look forward to any stories I make.(with the help of an ai ofc...)
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To hell with those who downvote m/m stuff just because.
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Nah its just not good
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Ah, i gotchu. Most of the time folks post m/m stuff it tends to get downvote bombed, so i thought this would be the case here.
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Can i ask what isnt that good about it? Im new to actually writing eroticas, i mostly write horror stuff so this is wayyy outside my expertise and comfort zone. Haha
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Maybe getting some ideas and help from ai wasnt that much of a good idea when it comes to eroticas haha
For a first attempt at writing, I've certainly seen worse. It just so happens that the kinkiness is right up my alley, so I'll give it a plus for that even if there's lots of room for improvement. Capitalization and descriptiveness could use the most work, but then there's things like grammar and pacing that need help too. Also, I wouldn't use AI to help you write. You'll need to develop skills on your own by practicing instead of letting a computer do the hard stuff.
Take it from a fellow smut writer, finding someone to proofread your dirty fanfiction isn't easy, so you'll mostly have to go it alone and take the criticism you get when you get it. Keep it up, just keep writing, you'll get better faster than you think!
I know you didn't ask for any critique or anything, but just consider this a gift from one writer to the next <3
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Oh no don’t worry! I love criticisms it helps with me learning how to write more things that aren’t just eldritch horror. Who knows. Maybe one day I’ll meld a story using my worst writing type(erotica) and the writing genre I’m most comfortable with (Horror)... Though... it might not be as hot as other May enjoy, might end up more gruesome than sexy, but hey some people are into that. Also yeah I’ll try to write using my own words than help with some ai one day. Life’s been harsh lately I haven’t had time to write anything.