If she has a backpack I hope she has space for her equipment:D

A little rushed. Other that that I look forward to more.

Off to an interesting start, I was just thinking about your blog post talking about a story like this after seeing Prey (and loving it) and am glad to see you got it off the ground. Eager to see what happens next

Sunset will now have a full time bloody excitement of her life. She probably won't come back to CHS for many years by this point.

On another topic;

Option 1; Will the Rainbooms and everybody else in CHS eventually figure out the CMC are Anon-A-Miss on their own? Or option 2; The CMC finally confess themselves, because of extreme guilt?

Or option 3; It's due to the CMC screwing up themselves, and either Luna or another competent teacher catch them on the cyberbulling act?

Or the 4th, and the very stupidity worse option; They STILL haven't figure it out or caught the CMC all this time ( Even after many FRICKIN Years!? ), and still stupidity falsely blame Sunset this whole time!!??

To me personally, this last option sounds highly unrealistic. And really makes everybody look like totally brain dead idiots. And takes constantly pushing the "Idiot Ball" button to it's absolute limits, for this to "work".

And believe me, I seen all of these "options" ( Including the last one. ) in other different, but similar Anon-A-Miss storylines.

And for their own sake ( From a very pissed off Yautia/Human Hybrid Sunset, along with her Yautia clan. ), you wouldn't pick option 4!

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I think I would go with go with option 3 since maybe half of the staff of the CHS is component while the other just not, but option 1 and 2 could be the most likely in my opinion and to add what would happen if a rival clan come to earth hunting the Rainbooms or the entire city without its magical defenders ready and whole to fight this will be a good reality check for most of them right?

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Hah, space pun.

Sunset has it with her. It's what she'll use to put most of her armor when she's not wearing it. She'll also put her mask in the bag when she doesn't wear it.

Even though what I've just said will take place after she returns to Earth.

Let’s hope he doesn’t lose her head:D

I'm eager to see where this goes

Exhalant New charter a little short but still a very exalant chapter.

Ps I'm waiting a similar one but with dragon ball z chapters

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This is a crossover with the Predator franchise.

I personally would like it if sunset travels to equestria! who says that equestria is not a planet! with the mirror as a quick trip possibility!

With a spaceship, the journey only takes longer!

Hmm in canon do the Yujta actually do anything with people who they consider worthy hunters or do they everything as prey? Because this situation is rather unusual.

I need more!!!!

I know you had author's note at the top of the last chapter, but it seems unnecessary here, especially if it contains spoilers. I advise letting the readers read the chapter first and then offer your own thoughts at the end of the chapter. In case you didn't know this, there is a drop-down box for this in the author's note section. it is set to top by default I believe.

In this regard, I have made a few exceptions in my stories, though, especially if something about the current chapter changed in comparison to every previous chapter. One example I have used is the chapter might have a trigger warning so maybe some should skip it if they are easily offended and to immediately give that warning at the top so they have the informed option before continuing.

And speaking of spoilers, this is an especially grievous example.

Next chapter: Sunset and Tua'Ja enter Yautja Prime, where Sunny meets his parents, brothers, Yaut Hound and sister. She also meets his clan mates.

Why do we need that disclaimer above at all? The reader would have found all of that out anyway when/if they read the next chapter anyway.

Sunset awoke on a very comfortable bed.

This strikes me as a strange quote from a sociological standpoint. The Tua'Ja kind of strikes me as very similar to Klingons from Star Trek and that means a lack of comfortable beds. Ironically, Kligons would find such beds uncomfortable because they're not used to it and they're afraid it might condition them to become soft and "weak". It's just an impression, but it seems to me Tua'Ja would have very similar standards. He likely can't suddenly make the bed comfortable for just Sunny either. It's likely not that adjustable that I know of, nor did he really expect to have this passenger before this mission.

On a different tangent and personal note, I found the Yautja term "ooman" to be cute. Even more interesting, and understandable, when Sunset made a mental point about that issue specifically. That makes sense.

It was one of the ways his species would communicate with one another.

The quote above was almost a direct, word-for-word repeat of another in the last chapter. This kind of redundancy is not needed, especially this soon.

He then pointed to the mask and then to his mandibles and face.

"You want me to wear it?" She asked, shocked and awed.

This is illogical for one reason; the mask shouldn't fit "ooman" facial configuration at all. If this one can for some very unusual reason, it actually is worth mentioning here that this particular mask can morph it's form, Transformers style, to match her human facial configuration. And for the record, I never saw such an example of that in the movies. At least not that I can recall. This kind of feature is actually more realistic for the Yautja computer gauntlets if you're going to use any of their tech. I'm not sure, but I vaguely recall these things at least being able to record voices if not outright translate them.

Tua'Ja replied, teaching the ooman passenger about his species.

This is sort of already established earlier in the paragraph, so it comes off as an unnecessary repeat in a way. We could already see that he was teaching Sunset about his species, and then this sentence basically said it again as if we didn't get it the first time.

Not too much to say other than that. Part of my mind circulates around Sunset's feelings in this bizarre situation. She was taken from her planet by what appears to be a dangerous alien and, so far, she was given no promises to return yet. How would you feel in that situation? That might depend on what situation one is leaving behind. In this case, it might actually end up a blessing in disguise because of the negative publicity she's leaving behind, but most average humans would spare at least a passing concern over friends/family being left behind, or even casual acquaintances. There are also other concerns like medical needs might not be met where she's going, or having food she can digest there, or likely lacking her favorite restaurants. If this really happened, there are many layers of concerns and thoughts that would likely take place.

The story doesn't have to get that deep, though. Many might even prefer the simplicity and not overthink stories like this. just thought I'd make a passing comment that I noticed this. My two cents.

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In the novels and comics, Yautja have occasionally taken individuals from other sapient species and inducted them into their society at large. Mind you, it's a lot more common for the leader of a hunting party(usually an elder) to reward a non-Yautja with a trophy for an honorable hunt and kill of a member of their hunting party.