Sunset is taken by Yautjas and trained like a Predator.
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hmm. wonder what will happen next for Sunset?
How many does that make so far? I lost track.
We just established that, so this is an unnecessary repeat.
I wonder how big the tree branches are on this tree, or the tree itself for that matter.
That'll do it.
Do you see the error up above before I point it out? Go ahead. Give it a careful look before you read my next sentence.
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Okay. Just in case you missed it, the word "causing" is in lowercase despite being a new sentence, but that's an error too. Should look more like, "The Waovu Nyas'i shrieked and tried to run off. This caused Sunset to give chase to the alien moose." Or if you want it more present tense, then, ""The Waovu Nyas'i shrieked and tried to run off. This causes Sunset to give chase to the alien moose."
Also, lesson learned. Do not run from a predator. That tends to encourage them to give chase.
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Seriously, what if the story ended that abruptly? I'd have to admit, I wouldn't see that coming.
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-turned-Yautja-then-turned-into-a-hamburger-helper-followed-by-a-ninja-turtle-but-that-isn't-nearly-as-shocking-as-what-she-beame-next.
Imagine if there is a cool sci-fi type, technological sound effect when she puts the weapon away. Especially if it changes its form a bit when she does.
I know she's stronger now, but how much does it weigh?
Do they ever make use of these parts she is shaving off?
I don't think it means time is moving faster on Yautija comapred to Earth. It just means days and nights are longer on Yautija Prime.
The reason I point this out is some of your readers may be reaching the wrong conclusion. I was one of them at first.
Huh? How did she do that? And if she can do that, why not keep on doing that? Multiply the meat. Multiply the ammo for her weapons. Multiply her money. Be creative.
... and then let it go again, thus making this action entirely pointless.
"Dear Princess Twilight:
Recently I killed Trixie! That was fun. It was as challenging as a heavy-weight boxer vs a small little child, and it was great! I love being overpowered and a significantly worse bully than I have ever been! And the thought of her friends and family, who didn't do anything to hurt me, will also be devastated by this loss is just icing on the cake. Ooo! I wish I could savor their tears by licking them off their faces.
"Oh, and, ah . . I also killed some stupid moose thing too today. Just FYI."
Seriously, every second that skull is on her mantle is a persistent blight on her honor. Worst of all, she doesn't even realize it. thereby convening how lost she is. She's become a worse villain than she ever was before.
Uh . . . would she get cell reception anyway all the way out here in Yautja Prime?
Friendship is Tragic.
Repeated yourself with that second sentence.
Real talk: I do that too accidentally a lot as well. I gotta watch out for that too.
What did Sunset give them in return?