Another fun chapter and while I am still enjoying this story I do have two notes to make
1. Mike Harrigan should definitely be added to the list of humans whom the Yautja respect (he was gifted one of the elders great treasures with that pistol after all)
2. You seem to be doing a lot of exposition dumps and while I understand they're necessary for those who don't know a lot of AVP lore, it might be better to find organic ways to work them into the story (just establishing that this info was downloaded into Sunset's head along with the Yautja language and that it's popping into her head as it becomes relevant would be good)

Like I said though still loving this story and eager as ever to see where it goes, especially now that Anon-A-Miss is about to be revealed and her friends are definitely going to be in for a surprises when they go to apologize to Sunset.

It's true that the female or bigger than their male counterparts

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For Sunset, she will think of time differently as Yautja Prime is bigger than Earth and has a slower rotation.

She will also have a ship, weapons, mask and armor for when she returns to Earth.

Mike Harrigan will make an appearance, as wiil Dutch 'Alan' Schaffer, Machigo Naguchi and Alexa Woods.

Sunset will have weapons such as:

• Plasma Caster
• Plasma Pistol
• Combi-Stick
• Wrist Blades
• Wrist Computer
• Netgun
• Throwing Disk
• Axe

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Females are taller than males.

A Bad Blood.

What do you mean by that?

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In Predator lore, Bad Bloods are considered criminals of their race.

Yautja, A.K.A 'Predators' live by a code of honor in their society.

The Yautja Honor Code is a set of rules that govern day-to-day interactions of Yautja as well as the hunt. It details under what circumstances a hunter may kill a creature of another species and under what circumstances they may not. The code is strict, and to break it-purposefully, accidentally, or even unwillingly-is a near-irredeemable offense in many situations.

Only very high ranked seasoned warriors, such as Scarface, or very low ranked novices, such as Young Blood and Un-Blooded Yautja, are permitted any leeway as far as the code is concerned.

All hunters are expected to hunt and kill while adhering to the code and traditions. If they breach the code Yautja are expected to submit themselves for punishment honorably.

Failure to do so marks a Yautja a Bad Blood.

In either case, he is then excommunicated altogether from society and Bad Bloods are considered fair game for the remaining honorable hunters. Some Predators are specifically tasked with hunting down code-breakers that flee from punishment or hide their failures, called Enforcers or Arbitrators.

It is not entirely impossible for a Yautja that has in some way broken the code to regain their honor and rejoin society. Such opportunities are rare and limited to very specific circumstances as seen with Scarface.

In order to even be offered the chance at redemption, the Yautja in question must have acknowledged their breach of code and willingly accepted the punishment for that violation. In the case that they are offered a chance to redeem themselves, they are assigned a task that must be completed, or die trying.

It should be noted that none of these rules are official, and are instead a culmination of multiple sources. As such, the rules of the code may differ, or be false:

• Code Violations:
• Those who break the code are Bad Bloods, and are considered an insult to Yautja culture. They are to be destroyed when encountered
• Hunting Intelligent Species. There are strict rules concerning the hunting of intelligent species. Those who are not blooded cannot do this at all. However, some hunters wants these laws overturned.
• Hunting Worthy Game.
• When hunting, the hunter must be sure that his prey is considered game and lawful to kill. Worthy game must fill the following criteria:
• Can defend itself and/or is able to kill the hunter himself, of age (killing children and the elderly is considered highly dishonorable), not linked to other lives (so that removing the prey will not doom another, e.g. pregnant women), and not weakened by diseases. This excludes self-defence.
• Equalize the odds.
• Killing prey when using less equipment is considered a greater prize, and hunters should typically give their prey a fighting chance for honor's sake. If the prey demands close-combat, the hunter is to fight to their prey's standards, and should minimize use of their Plasma Caster or other projectile weapons
• Failing in the Hunt.
• Should the hunter fail in one's quest, he should take his own life to retain his honor than to live in shame. However, some cowards prefer to live in obscurity rather than die. This is considered to be dishonorable and suicide is then "assisted" by an Enforcer.
• Claiming the Kill of Another Hunter.
• To take the trophy of another Yautja, living or dead, is considered to be a great insult. For example, two Un-Blooded go on their first Hunt: one Yautja takes on a Xenomorph, and both are mortally wounded. While the wounded hunter is dying, the other hunter conveniently finishes off the prey and claims the kill as his own, abandoning the wounded Yautja. This is a crime that can be paid for with abandonment, or death.
• Murder of Another Yautja.
• To kill another Yautja intentionally holds severe consequences. This excludes self-defence and killing an opponent in a fight to settle a dispute. Murder is the worst crime.
• Show mercy.
• Those that defeated you in a fair hunt, or who are the victors in a deadlier hunt, should be considered an equal and must be shown respect.
• Never harm the innocent.
• Those who have done no harm should have no harm done to them. (It can be inferred that this rule must pertain only to harming other Yautja in their society since they hunt and kill members of many species one could call "innocent". It can also be inferred that Bad Blood Predators would ignore this rule either in part or in whole.)
• Hunting for Food.
• When hunting for food, take only the weak. This is to purify the species' line.
• Wounded Game.
• When coming upon game wounded by another hunter, and the prey is dying without sport, show honor to another's kill. If the game still shows sport, it is to be a joint trophy.
• Joining Another Hunt.
• Do not join another's Hunt, or Hunt in their territory, without their permission. All trophies taken in this manner are stolen trophies and shall be dealt with by the rightful owner.
• When in a duel with an enemy, you must reveal yourself.
• In the novelization of AVP, Lex Woods was about to be killed by a cloaked Predator, but before it prepared to deliver the final blow, it de-activated its cloak. According to the book, it is "hunting ethic" to reveal yourself to your enemy at the climax of a fight. However, the movie ignored this part, and showed the still-cloaked Predator attempt to kill her.
• Weapons of Warfare.
• Weapons of Warfare like the Electroshock Missile Battery are strictly forbidden in hunts or even by use of Non-Military Caste Hunters. They are considered too destructive to constitute a hunting weapon

Hell yeah this is amazing. Sunset Shimmer Hunter!!! LET'S GO!!!!

I’m quite intrigued so far with this. Also,

However, on Earth, things were much different...

The real Anon-a-Miss had been found out

Although it’s too late. Hmph…took those morons long enough.

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Sunset with Yautja gear, weapons and a ship? They stand no chance.

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Yep! Thank goodness PrinceOfDarkness didn't choose option 4.

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What's Option 4?

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Seriously? You didn't read this;

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I did. I just remembered.

Sorry, it's been a busy day for me.

Also, it won't be years on Earth, but weeks.

Time is slower on Yautja Prime as days are longer and the planet is Tidal-Locked. One side is dark and the other is covered in sunlight.

The planet has a slightly stronger amount of Gravity than Earth does, hence why Yautja can jump higher.

Okay, from now on I'll skip the author's note at the top because of the likelihood it may contain spoilers. That also means I'll, unfortunately, miss any other point that isn't a spoiler, but I just won't run that risk. Most of this could have been avoided if you just move it to the bottom.

In my opinion, the author's note better serves not as a recap of the chapter, but to express your own thoughts about the chapter itself, if any. Sometimes I also add pictures, videos and songs that may relate to the chapter in question. That, in turn, allows you to share your own feelings about it just as any of the readers could. That might even encourage some comments as they may see you as a fellow participant.

The ship entered the planet's atmosphere and prepared to land.

Curious about what the ship looks like. No description of it is offered so far, but that kind of makes sense from the inside perspective. For now, part of me is lightly imagining something like Samus Arron's ship, at least that approximate size.

as hunters with a strict honor code.

More shades of Klingons. Seriously, the vibes are very strong here.

The both of them walked down the ramp that unfolded outward from the ship. Eventually, both of them were standing on hard ground.

A description of the immediate environment would be nice here. Are they in a forest? The plains? In a city? Underwater?

Whichever of these you pick, further description is still encouraged. For example, if you pick a forest, they are still on an alien planet. What if "trees" around here were glowing at the tops and had cotton-like substances that float off the tree in an upward direction? And what smell does the tree have? What is its color?

"My son, it is good to see you again." T'ogah said warmly

My only objection here is the word "warmly" because that doesn't seem to fit the aesthetic of a warrior or hunter-based society, and yet I can accept the words themselves. Someone like this might say the words stiffly, strongly, and/or proudly. To say it in a way that shows his strength, but not his gentleness. In truth, his compassion is there, but this society may generally be discouraged to show it, at least among the males, and particularly while they are in public.

At least, that is my impression.

She stood next to the hunter, a look of fearlessness and determination in her eye.

the description of her emotions seems out of place in this situation. more realistically she should actually be freaking out, but maybe also fake being fearless and determined because she is observing that is how they are acting amongst each other.

I'm not saying she can't be the way you describe, but given her recent tragic background on multiple accounts, it seems a tad, but not entirely, unrealistic.

That said, I see how this reaction actually does move the story forward. had she shown any weakness in this situation, she'd not likely earn the elder's respect and that would grind the story to a halt. Can't have that. Just be mindful of how it is done.

Others may not respect you as much as my son does. They may taunt you or not see you as equal." T'ogah explained,

Now this is realistic, but it might be wise to add an additional disclaimer that it is possible for her to earn the others' respect and that is the point in their society, unless it truly is impossible for her. if that is the case, then no. he wouldn't say that here because I don't think you are writing him to be a liar, but if this was the case, I don't think is it likely she'd be brought here in the first place either.

and led Sunset to his home, shaped like a pyramid and made out of a stronger metal than what oomans used.

Okay. Finally some description here. The above at least reveals the kind of architecture they use. That gives the readers an idea of the kind of theme they use. Good job. 👍

they met Tua'Ja's mother Yeyinde and his aunt Gaun'Ja. Females of the Yautja race didn't look much different from female oomans. However, they were much taller, had mandibles and breasts.

I'm glad you added that last part because I have never seen a female version of this race that I know of. this is brand new territory.

Both the Yautja and the Equestrian-turned-human practiced hand-to-hand combat.

There had only been a select few oomans who were respected by Yautja society. Namely, Dutch 'Alan' Schaeffer, Machiko Naguchi, Alexa Woods and Royce.

You forgot Lt Mike Harrigan.

Hhmm, it is just me or this seems very rushed. We didn't get to see Sunset decision to become a hunter, she woke up, spoke a bit, then on the home planet she was like "ok, let's become a hunter", what?