Sunset is taken by Yautjas and trained like a Predator.
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Well, that's something.
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Yeah. I got bored of it being plain, so I added some human-Yautja sex. Now Sunny has a boyfriend/lifemate.
But what neither of them knew was at that moment, two of Sunset's eggs were fertilized, thus creating new life within Sunset, who started rubbing her tummy. At least that would happen in my version.
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I was getting to that. Don't worry, it happens later on in the story, near the end.
Ah oh! They found out about Trixie! A clearly inferior challenge who was also very much unwilling target who tried to run instead of fight, but fought in a panic only when cornered.
At least Gilda tried to put up a fight, but Trixie made it abundantly clear she was unwilling to fight seriously.
Why is the Bad Bloods campsite so offensive to Yautja law?
But she's been hunted by one. Turnabout is fair play?
I'm surprised she asked. Thought she'd just say something like, "Yes Sir." then salute him.
Why is this other guy going? Is he related to the affair in question? Or is he like a more official police officer overseeing Sunset's hunting quest to make sure justice is served?
Man! Really? The picture shown on one of the author's notes earlier showed the image of an example of her ship. It was huge! I can tell because of the humanoid in the foreground for size comparison.
... a partridge in a pair treeeeeeeee!
they sure like to do this
Not gonna lie. This is kind of badass.
Guess they are not going to collect this head for a trophy, and I can see the point of trying. Not as a badge of honor, but as proof of their deed to take out the criminals.
Finally the sex genre tag on this story is just starting to earn its keep.
I'm beginning to see the real point of this character in the story. From the arbitor's perspective, apparently, Kher'Ja does have something to do with the Bad Bloods victims.
Now confession time. I'm not going to copy/paste any of the sex scenes in this comment. Those who are interested in those can go through this chapter and read it.
I don't have a problem with clop per see if it's done well, but here . . . I quickly lost interest. At first, I started skimming through it with boredom, and then I just skipped to the end of the chapter.
Good clop has an emotional connection, history, and reasons for the relationship. It makes it feel like the sex has become the only option after the incredible chemistry the couple shared together.
However, this feels thrown together last minute like bad porno, because bad porno doesn't need a reason. It just skips to the sex. To me, it feels hollow so I have no interest.