11325508 At first I thought the "not knowing how she got there" etc. might also hint at things being a dream, but looking at chapter 2 again I feel you might be right (and I'd consider my theory about her memory wiping herself for kinks really unlikely). And seeing as there is some mind-control going on it being some repressed part of her psyche could be the most benign option. There is a voice in her mind that "screams in victory"... if it is not her repressed sexuality, what else might it be? Some sort of nightmare possession?)
The mystery is of course still the in-story motive behind all this (still hoping for one on the benign side here) . Whatever is behind this obviously managed to set things up over a period of at least a month (i.e. was able to control/manipulate her for that long without her or her friends noticing) which implies they have already significant "control" over her, so what is the payoff to be gained from the debauchery (well, the one for a repressed sexuality would be kinda obvious - getting her to loosen up a bit... If it is something else I really hope it won't be just "Sluttify Twilight" or something like that, since those stories are dime a dozen - but I believe in tailsonpony's writing skills here... hmmm... what if she is possessed by an alternate reality "Princess of what now?" who is trying to help her ascend to double-alicornhood?) The other thing that is odd for me is that her friends (especially Rarity) are so nonchalant about her not having any memories of setting things up. "Shy bookworm sets up big orgy and has no memories of doing it on the day it is sheduled" should raise some alarm - though of course we don't know what happens in the time she does not remember.
Skipping the clop to head to the plot? Always great when there is more going than just the porn, but I do hope we don't skip the entire night of debauchery. While AJ isn't around I can see Big Mac and Sugar Belle taking a turn with the princess. Sugar was part of Starlight's crazy commune and probably believes in very open marriages. Twi would probably want to experience riding the firehouse of the biggest stallion in town. Fancy Pants and Fleur de Lis might also have been invited, being ardent supporters of novel new ideas, maybe in the hopes of convincing Rarity to join them in the bedroom more often now that so many of her friends are trying it. And if there is a foal on the way maybe seeing her pregnant friend might warm her up to the idea of having Fancy's foal. Oh well, we can imagine the other 148 encounters. Keep up the good work!
11327653 Hey, I might not skip everything! We'll see. lol. Just, the scene should probably warrant a much less in-depth roll through most of it. She doesn't change positions much and at a certain point the encounters start to blur, so that should be reflected somehow. I wrote the last one while being super tired and didn't review it at all. It's slightly better now, and less embarrassing. Thanks for the comment!
11326329 Oh man. No one should ever have confidence in my writing. I'm only going to touch the memory thing here. The only one she confided the "lost memory" to was Rarity. She actively pretended like she sort of knew what was going on, but was just double checking with Pinkie. Pinkie probably just wrote it off as pre-event nerves. Now Rarity's response is perhaps a little more... calm than one might expect. She even made certain assumptions. Either way, thanks for the comments!
What a delightful bit of randomness. As much as I am looking forward to the sexy bits (and I am, especially the full costume), I'm actually more curious about the resolution. Will she remember why she did this to herself? Why did she need a memory wipe in the first place? Will any of the other Princesses follow her example? These are the questions.
Twilight's getting used to this. That is simultaneously good and utterly terrifying. :D Good idea not to show every single fucking. I caught one typo:
I believe that's supposed to be 'snacks'.
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You fool! I tricked you into proofreading! Hahaha haha! But really, thanks. I'd be shocked if there weren't more. Fixed!
Then again, if you *did* need snakes, Pinkie would probably have you covered.
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At first I thought the "not knowing how she got there" etc. might also hint at things being a dream, but looking at chapter 2 again I feel you might be right (and I'd consider my theory about her memory wiping herself for kinks really unlikely).
And seeing as there is some mind-control going on it being some repressed part of her psyche could be the most benign option. There is a voice in her mind that "screams in victory"... if it is not her repressed sexuality, what else might it be? Some sort of nightmare possession?)
The mystery is of course still the in-story motive behind all this (still hoping for one on the benign side here) . Whatever is behind this obviously managed to set things up over a period of at least a month (i.e. was able to control/manipulate her for that long without her or her friends noticing) which implies they have already significant "control" over her, so what is the payoff to be gained from the debauchery (well, the one for a repressed sexuality would be kinda obvious - getting her to loosen up a bit... If it is something else I really hope it won't be just "Sluttify Twilight" or something like that, since those stories are dime a dozen - but I believe in tailsonpony's writing skills here... hmmm... what if she is possessed by an alternate reality "Princess of what now?" who is trying to help her ascend to double-alicornhood?)
The other thing that is odd for me is that her friends (especially Rarity) are so nonchalant about her not having any memories of setting things up. "Shy bookworm sets up big orgy and has no memories of doing it on the day it is sheduled" should raise some alarm - though of course we don't know what happens in the time she does not remember.
Thanks for chapter!
Have a good day!
Skipping the clop to head to the plot? Always great when there is more going than just the porn, but I do hope we don't skip the entire night of debauchery.
While AJ isn't around I can see Big Mac and Sugar Belle taking a turn with the princess. Sugar was part of Starlight's crazy commune and probably believes in very open marriages. Twi would probably want to experience riding the firehouse of the biggest stallion in town.
Fancy Pants and Fleur de Lis might also have been invited, being ardent supporters of novel new ideas, maybe in the hopes of convincing Rarity to join them in the bedroom more often now that so many of her friends are trying it. And if there is a foal on the way maybe seeing her pregnant friend might warm her up to the idea of having Fancy's foal.
Oh well, we can imagine the other 148 encounters. Keep up the good work!
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Hey, I might not skip everything! We'll see. lol. Just, the scene should probably warrant a much less in-depth roll through most of it. She doesn't change positions much and at a certain point the encounters start to blur, so that should be reflected somehow. I wrote the last one while being super tired and didn't review it at all. It's slightly better now, and less embarrassing. Thanks for the comment!
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You're welcome. It's fixed (ish) now.
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Oh man. No one should ever have confidence in my writing. I'm only going to touch the memory thing here. The only one she confided the "lost memory" to was Rarity. She actively pretended like she sort of knew what was going on, but was just double checking with Pinkie. Pinkie probably just wrote it off as pre-event nerves. Now Rarity's response is perhaps a little more... calm than one might expect. She even made certain assumptions. Either way, thanks for the comments!
What a delightful bit of randomness. As much as I am looking forward to the sexy bits (and I am, especially the full costume), I'm actually more curious about the resolution. Will she remember why she did this to herself? Why did she need a memory wipe in the first place? Will any of the other Princesses follow her example? These are the questions.