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Figured you'd want this pointed out. Know you meant "Rarity's" There.
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Bam! Fixed! Thanks! You're the first comment on this. Lol. It's been in the feature box for 12 hours and I still don't know if people like it.
Let me know if you see anything else! Like I said, I just wrote and posted this... I should probably go back and actually properly edit this.
I'm scared to read it! What if it's terrible? Lol.
Somehow this is the most dubious of consent I've read on this site. I'm not big on pregnancy play but it was still a hot scene. I'm interested in the mystery of this, too, though partly because that hits a memory play/mind control kind of angle.
Some great writing here. The first half of this chapter really had me hooked.
I'll admit I'm less involved/interested in the "regular" kinky times of the second chapter, but I'm still going to be watching this to see where the MC memory alteration plot goes. (Going by your other works there seems to be a good chance that it was indeed Twilight's own doing which is a fairly unique and interesting take on the concept, but I'm interested to see where it goes either way).
This is kinky, clever, and provocative. Obviously past Twilight wanted all of this set up, but also wanted to be intimidated, afraid, uncomfortable, scared--this is just so good. So far it's alternated between dread and arousal, exactly how I imagine Twilight feels. Very nice!
Oh, shit. She planned this to happen during her heat? Fuck, that's unexpected and hot. You're really creative, you know that? I hope there is still some more mystery to solve and more questions to answer.
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Thanks! Yeah, it's pretty fucking dubious. lol. I almost don't want to explain what exactly happened, because then you might lose that serious dub-con sensation. There's obviously some mind-fuckery going on...
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Thanks! I doubt it's good writing, but I appreciate the input. I need to review/clean up the whole thing, so we'll see if I can refine the 2nd chapter a bit to be a little more spicy.
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You know I love when you post on my stories! You're still my favorite author on the site. lol. Thanks for the comments! I'm far from clever, but some things seem to work. I have leagues to travel before I can write dubious steamy scenes like you can. The next bit is just porn, which will probably be poorly written, but I do intend to close this one out. This warrants three ends, two of which are comedy and one of which is the actual end. lol
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It is quite good writing, both grammatically and especially on story progression. Even more so considering the average standard of clopfics.
And the second chapter is plenty spicy (I assume), it's just that I'm geared towards hypno/mc and other more exotic concepts like that. So when I read the second chapter my brain goes: "Shame we moved from the subtle implications of memory manipulation to the boring vanilla stuff of getting-fucked-from-both-sides-by-a-married-couple-while-collared-and-chained-with-real-gold-and-dozens-of-exotic-spells-in-front-of-most-of-your-friends-neighbors-and-business-acquaintances-all-waiting-their-own-turn-at-your-holes." It's definitely not through any fault of your own writing.
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I guess that might be vanilla... Hmm... Should I have turned up the mind control? I thought that it was subtle without being too subtle, For example :
She somehow keeps ending up where she needs to be
She clicks everything in place with the overly complicated fetish setup without thinking about it
Something is very clearly messing with her mind, especially in the second chapter. She waivers between completely into it, and alarmed and confused. Even the seemingly positive sensations usually have negative descriptions like "It wanted to run", "she couldn't twist away", and "She blinked back a panicked tear, unsure of if it was from fear or ecstasy".
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To clarify, that was meant jokingly. I'm saying my brain tends to treat anything purely physical as "vanilla", regardless of actual kink factor. I'm pretty sure most people won't actually think that way, that's why I phrased it the way I did. Don't take my comments as a reason to change your story from what you planned, I'm probably not representative of your audience.
It definitely was just the right amount to subtle and I enjoyed it very much. Please don't start doubting yourself because of my failed attempt at joking, you're doing great.
Well, no doubt that it was Twilight herself that wanted to do this in any case.
I mean, who else would schedule this down to assigning ponies time slots?
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IKR? Thanks for the comment!
The premise sounded pretty cool. Nicely written.
Could Twilight always have had a hidden Jekyll and Hyde split personality that finally surfaced on its own?
I think it's more likely that this is Discord's doing. He'd be thinking, "Oh, Twilight, you're much too boring! It's time you lived a little!"
This is nuts in the best possible way. :D Twilight, what did you do and who's gonna do you? How did this get set up? I'm intrigued by the mysteries, here. Also, great description of what she's wearing and the set-up.
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Legit, one of the secret endings, non canon, is DIscord and Fluttershy sitting in Discord's house eating popcorn. Discord is like "Holy shit, she's actually going through with it! It was supposed to be a joke!" and Fluttershy is 120% toked and all "Told ya. I'm blitzed, but I think that means I get to wear the strap tonight, and you get to wear the ears, right?"
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Thanks for the comment!
Very, very hot fucking of Twilight. Oh, she's gonna be happy by the end. Sore, but happy!
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Somehow I haven't been writing much actual porn lately, so I figured I'd do that here. Glad you liked it, and thanks for the comments!
I can think of two ponies who might be crazy enough to mind-control themselves to make a rape-play fetish into the real thing. And Twi is one of them.
I feel torn. On one hand the story is well written, on the other I can help but feel that the mind control aspect is deeply disturbing for me (though that is probably a "me" problem)
Best case appears to be that Twilight indeed planned and set up everything herself and then cast a mind-altering spell to (temporarily?) forget about it (though why would still bei the question here - to make it extra kinky? It would be a pretty fucked up thing to do, even If the victim is yourself.) The other options become really dark in a hurry, quickly moving the entire thing into actual rape and mindrape territory
I find myself with some (rather morbid) curiosity as to what is behind all this, perhaps the author has some benign twist prepared, but as mentioned above, even the best case scenario seems to be on the questionable side (E.g. is there a failsafe in case mind-altered Twilight really doesn't like what is happening or things simply go wrong? She already seems rather reluctant with the Cakes...). Still, there is a Comedy Tag and not a Dark Tag, so lets hope...
My guess is that the culprit is Twilight's own sex drive that took on a personality of its own because it had been repressed for too long and took over Twilight's mind without her knowing and set everything up. Could be that Twilight had all these sexual fantasies that she locked away in her head and left her sexually frustrated until it reached that point. Her sex drive personality then decided to make her fantasies a reality.
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And the other is Trixie! Thanks!
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I'm in deep, so I don't notice the shallow waters. I don't think this one quite deserves the dark tag, but I have outside knowledge. However, certainly don't read it if it makes you uncomfortable! Thanks for the comment! I appreciate your feedback.
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It's not a bad hypothesis. Let's test it! The real question is how do we run a test like that? Thanks for the comment!
Twilight's getting used to this. That is simultaneously good and utterly terrifying. :D Good idea not to show every single fucking. I caught one typo:
I believe that's supposed to be 'snacks'.
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You fool! I tricked you into proofreading! Hahaha haha! But really, thanks. I'd be shocked if there weren't more. Fixed!
Then again, if you *did* need snakes, Pinkie would probably have you covered.
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At first I thought the "not knowing how she got there" etc. might also hint at things being a dream, but looking at chapter 2 again I feel you might be right (and I'd consider my theory about her memory wiping herself for kinks really unlikely).
And seeing as there is some mind-control going on it being some repressed part of her psyche could be the most benign option. There is a voice in her mind that "screams in victory"... if it is not her repressed sexuality, what else might it be? Some sort of nightmare possession?)
The mystery is of course still the in-story motive behind all this (still hoping for one on the benign side here) . Whatever is behind this obviously managed to set things up over a period of at least a month (i.e. was able to control/manipulate her for that long without her or her friends noticing) which implies they have already significant "control" over her, so what is the payoff to be gained from the debauchery (well, the one for a repressed sexuality would be kinda obvious - getting her to loosen up a bit... If it is something else I really hope it won't be just "Sluttify Twilight" or something like that, since those stories are dime a dozen - but I believe in tailsonpony's writing skills here... hmmm... what if she is possessed by an alternate reality "Princess of what now?" who is trying to help her ascend to double-alicornhood?)
The other thing that is odd for me is that her friends (especially Rarity) are so nonchalant about her not having any memories of setting things up. "Shy bookworm sets up big orgy and has no memories of doing it on the day it is sheduled" should raise some alarm - though of course we don't know what happens in the time she does not remember.
Panties?
Is this supposed to be anthro?
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Nope. If you're down with NSFW pics, check the number on derpi. Or search for artist:Selenophile on derpi. It's based off a series of images that should be easy to identify based on what's here. There's a bunch of great alts!
Thanks for chapter!
Have a good day!
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What horrible blasphemy to put panties on a pony in the first place
Skipping the clop to head to the plot? Always great when there is more going than just the porn, but I do hope we don't skip the entire night of debauchery.
While AJ isn't around I can see Big Mac and Sugar Belle taking a turn with the princess. Sugar was part of Starlight's crazy commune and probably believes in very open marriages. Twi would probably want to experience riding the firehouse of the biggest stallion in town.
Fancy Pants and Fleur de Lis might also have been invited, being ardent supporters of novel new ideas, maybe in the hopes of convincing Rarity to join them in the bedroom more often now that so many of her friends are trying it. And if there is a foal on the way maybe seeing her pregnant friend might warm her up to the idea of having Fancy's foal.
Oh well, we can imagine the other 148 encounters. Keep up the good work!
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Hey, I might not skip everything! We'll see. lol. Just, the scene should probably warrant a much less in-depth roll through most of it. She doesn't change positions much and at a certain point the encounters start to blur, so that should be reflected somehow. I wrote the last one while being super tired and didn't review it at all. It's slightly better now, and less embarrassing. Thanks for the comment!
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You're welcome. It's fixed (ish) now.
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Oh man. No one should ever have confidence in my writing. I'm only going to touch the memory thing here. The only one she confided the "lost memory" to was Rarity. She actively pretended like she sort of knew what was going on, but was just double checking with Pinkie. Pinkie probably just wrote it off as pre-event nerves. Now Rarity's response is perhaps a little more... calm than one might expect. She even made certain assumptions. Either way, thanks for the comments!
What a delightful bit of randomness. As much as I am looking forward to the sexy bits (and I am, especially the full costume), I'm actually more curious about the resolution. Will she remember why she did this to herself? Why did she need a memory wipe in the first place? Will any of the other Princesses follow her example? These are the questions.
Hmm, some mysteries are cleared up. That's a good thing. :) I only noticed one typo.
Should be 'everypony'
Thanks for the great update, I didn't spot any obvious issues in the chapter so I think you did very good even without a pre-reader. Also really appreciate the plot being progressed, with more potential clues as to what is going on (I must admit the mystery behind it all really caught me in the first place...).
Ok, massive speculation time (spoilered, of course):
Twilight is obviously still under some form "mind alteration/control" that did not get detected (nor dispelled) by Lyra and BonBon - the gaps in her memory, the little voice that screamed "yes" out in victory in chapter two. As such everything she thinks/feels/says is somewhat suspect (including her being comfortable with the entire situation - she was getting "trained" and "rewarded" by her amulet for the last six hours...).
The spellwork in the seats would explain why the audience remains so focused & calm as she describes. And it is a relief to see that some kind of fail-safe is included (at least for her partners) - BonBon's reaction triggering it - it would have been VERY un-Twilight like to neglect such a thing.
The question of "why" is however still open for speculation. We know that magic is based on emotion (and math) and that (incredibly) powerful magics are at work for... something. Twilight "liking being watched" sounds like a obvious excuse for the seating spells, which I suspect do more than just focus the attention - perhaps harnessing or harvesting those extreme amounts of love & lust from the audience? Also she specifically senses BonBon's love (before the fail-safe triggers) - reading "love" so often the word "changelings" immediately comes to mind.
Extra - wild speculation time:
With magic being based on emotions, perhaps knowing "the plan" creates emotions in Twilight that would cause issues somehow ("Gotta fuck ponies for 24h straight and - this critical - really enjoy it, or the DickElders from space will come and explode the world. No pressure."). Thus Princess Egghead mind-magics herself (perhaps last minute, resulting in Rarity having to distract Spike). Finally we have the gigantic spellwork - one explanation could be that the love (and lust) created is collected ("Feed a starving changeling hive: Fuck a princess today") or used to fuel some kind of powerful spell.
Edit:
Hope it is ok to speculate, I'll remove it if not.
And thanks again for the chapter :)
Of course we trust Celestia. The math says so!
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Fixed! Thanks for the comment! Really appreciate the catch!
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I actually have two different stories in the works (The Writhing, and Very Real Ponies) where major characters are eldritch dick en-titties. So this isn't one of them. But that would be a good angle! Hmm... Now you got me thinking.
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Well, yes! But no.
Fan theory:
Years ago twilight put some sexual repression spell on herself, to avoid study distractions, and now it's unraveling and her unconcious has worked to get 'backlog' out of the way
The absurdity continues unabated, and with a hint of serious-ish drama. What will happen when the spells are overloaded? Will any main characters take a turn? Tune in next time!
While you ponder Twilight's reality altering sexual escapades, please remember: There's cookies and punch by the doors
Thanks for chapter!
Have a good day!
That was a good story goodluck with the rest of it.
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*luck*
Ladies and gentlemen, I regret to inform you that reality poofed away in the next chapter, which retroactively cancelled future chapters, and also destroyed the remaining snacks.
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Oh snap! I forgot about this story. Lemme get to that.
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Huzzah! As an aside, the way you write Twilight's dialogue of being casually scientific about lewd subjects is hilarious. You have a great style, I'm looking forward to seeing how this plays out.
I wouldn't put it past twilight to rewrite the laws of reality.
Holy crap, I had forgotten about this one! And dang, this was good!
Oh... oh I love this!
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As you shouldn't... but, uh... maybe she went too far this time. lol.
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Me too! I don't know if it's any good though. lol. I ended up skipping a sex scene because I figured I'd never write it and it was just "more porn" and not story stuff.
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Thanks! I'm worried it's a little too out of left field here. The intent was run away AI, but magic. The AI (Spark) is actually from a different project that I'm never going to finish. In the other project, Spark was an active and amoral advisor to the reader/player in an interactive fiction where you had to break Twilight out of a very messed up time loop, and she could take stuff through the loop with the reader/player. Anyways, here she's just a runaway magic AI that is very, very tired after doing this a few billion times. This timeline was a joke timeline that was never meant to be the solution, but a means to amuse her by reaching the goal in an absurd way because infinity is boring as hell. Unfortunately, she made a mistake, and was too tired to care at this point. I'm not sure it comes across cleanly in the story? It's supposed to be funny in a "Oh well!" sort of way. But I'm afraid it's off-putting? Anyways, that was the intended end. I just figured I should post it.