Love the new chapter. Gotta say, it was nice to see the dynamic between Selene and Radahn and it seems the Elden Ring world and Equestria seem to be parallel words with similar key events but different catalysts. Hope we can find more about them. I also love Hangaku and Radahn’s friendship. Guess her outrage at Radahn’s boasts came from her and her girlfriend’ admiration/lust for Selene. Hope they achieve their goal of nailing her. Hoping to meet Tzana as well to see how she interacts with Hangaku and Radahn. Lastly, excited that next chapter will be Leonard’s turn. Hoping we see his duel with the Kirin.
This has me excited and tense. And how the heck did you write this so quickly? So cool! And now I'm tense because I know that now that a new day has started.... Leonard is going to have a fight with a hot kyrin soldier.
11709145 Thank you very much for the kind words! And time shall reveal any and all truths, but I certainly do have some curveballs in store for everyone.
Tzana will indeed be appearing very soon, but now we have a horse and kirin match coming up.
To be honest, this is exactly the reaction I wanted for Selene's speech. Because you're absolutely right! It is hard to follow her. Like Luna, Selene is also a 'relic from the past,' in a sense. Her way of speaking is also a little confusing to follow at times, but she'll get to Luna's level as the story progresses.
At least Luna was more modern in comparison. Luna is bad, but Selene is even worse when it comes to archaic tongue.
I really like how you've done all the characters so far. This world feels very interesting, too. I'm very curious... did Leonard absorb anything, minus the potential half rune, from Radahn?
Did he absorb any glintstones, dragon, blood, or etc via proximity to Radahn?
As far as inherits or 'absorptions' go, the Great Rune fragment inside of him will definitely aid him in particular ways, of which I'm excited to reveal soon!
It sounds like the worlds are at least tenuously linked in some way. I guess knowledge of other worlds hasn't come about in this Equestria.
Ton of missunderstandings all around.
Sheesh, saline (and a her follower) got them temperament issues, lol. Best of luck to radahn
Love the new chapter. Gotta say, it was nice to see the dynamic between Selene and Radahn and it seems the Elden Ring world and Equestria seem to be parallel words with similar key events but different catalysts. Hope we can find more about them.
I also love Hangaku and Radahn’s friendship. Guess her outrage at Radahn’s boasts came from her and her girlfriend’ admiration/lust for Selene. Hope they achieve their goal of nailing her. Hoping to meet Tzana as well to see how she interacts with Hangaku and Radahn.
Lastly, excited that next chapter will be Leonard’s turn. Hoping we see his duel with the Kirin.
This has me excited and tense. And how the heck did you write this so quickly? So cool! And now I'm tense because I know that now that a new day has started.... Leonard is going to have a fight with a hot kyrin soldier.
I wonder if radon will get his swords back?
Interesting chap but boy is it hard to parse through Selene's lines at times...I'm not used to that sort of text at all.
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Ooooooh yeah...
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He will certainly need it!
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Thank you very much for the kind words! And time shall reveal any and all truths, but I certainly do have some curveballs in store for everyone.
Tzana will indeed be appearing very soon, but now we have a horse and kirin match coming up.
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Thank you very much! And you are correct; Leonard and Flare's match is coming up.
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The dual swords he wielded back in his homeworld will sadly remain there.
That being said, we will see those blades again one day.
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Thank you very much!
To be honest, this is exactly the reaction I wanted for Selene's speech. Because you're absolutely right! It is hard to follow her. Like Luna, Selene is also a 'relic from the past,' in a sense. Her way of speaking is also a little confusing to follow at times, but she'll get to Luna's level as the story progresses.
At least Luna was more modern in comparison. Luna is bad, but Selene is even worse when it comes to archaic tongue.
I really like how you've done all the characters so far. This world feels very interesting, too. I'm very curious... did Leonard absorb anything, minus the potential half rune, from Radahn?
Did he absorb any glintstones, dragon, blood, or etc via proximity to Radahn?
You're doing awesome Wordsmith!
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Thank you very much! I appreciate that.
As far as inherits or 'absorptions' go, the Great Rune fragment inside of him will definitely aid him in particular ways, of which I'm excited to reveal soon!
Good chapter.
If she had something to say, she shouldn't have decided to start a game of 'No You Shut up, no You Shut up, no you...' and waste time.
This pegasus's antics are getting old.