Gonna read this soon but um, for the short description it has het instead of her*

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Thanks for the save!

I'm intrigued, keep going!

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Same

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So when is the next chapter gonna be released?

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Dang bro It just got released

Nice keep going.

a good start, not a spelling or grammar mistake to spot so far either.
gonna keep a watch on this one.

I'll have what she's having.

Love the cover but not sure how to feel about the story…

una historia interesante

While normally stories like this aren't exactly up my ally, this is really well written, so I think I'm keeping my eye on this one.

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Apperciated!

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Soon!

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Thanks!

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That's a surprise! I hadn't done a proper sweep—aren't I lucky!

And thanks! Hope I don't disappoint.

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Careful! Rainbow's life is a dark and bitter cocktail.

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At least the cover is nice. :D

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Gracias!

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Glad you think so! Hopefully the story rolls the ball further.

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Whoops! Few mistakes went through!

Changed, edited, with revisions to dialogue.

Wow! Introspective depression porn! Haven't seen that before.

Good show. Can't wait to see where this goes!

Wow your writing is unique! After reading the prologue this story isn’t exactly what I thought but, that’s not a knock against it just my preference. Good luck with the rest of your story :)

'if there's nothing missin in my life then why do these tears come at night?'
-Lucky (from the song Lucky, as sung by Britney spears)

THIS IS HOW YOU BEGIN A STORY !!!!!!!

This is how you write a first Chapter!!

you know that feeling of satisfaction that you get after reading something great? Yeah thats the feeling I have right now....

just ...wow.....

I've been dying for more Spike x RD. I'm sure you'll kill it yet again, dude!