While the three mares were walking out of Ponyville, another was sitting on her seat deep below the ocean. She watched the whole scenario on a big monitor while constantly caressing her pet. Finally, she began to smile widely and rubbed her front hooves. “Just as planned,” she spoke to herself.
good chapter, Derpy is a cute clichéd villain. Trixie is a great addition to the crew. wouldn't it be funny if she asked Fluttershy to show her around. the shy filly would be helpless to refuge an honest request from a persistent co-worker. and so a comedic routine, ensures. where Fluttershy try to show Trixie around with out reviling any secrets. or something like that.
This story looks like it will bring me back to the days of the inquisition, I believe I will like this.
Rainbow's reaction if she knew:
Hmmmmmmmmm... I have an idea!
Let's show Lyra a human-like being, sewn from multitude of pony corpses! Lyra's reaction to that is up to you Nero!
This story is getting dangerously interesting and hilarious. Keep it up ;)
Torture session with colgate the dentist. (Edit: Wonder why ponies are sio afraid to visit the dentist.)
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good chapter, Derpy is a cute clichéd villain.
Trixie is a great addition to the crew.
wouldn't it be funny if she asked Fluttershy to show her around.
the shy filly would be helpless to refuge an honest request from a persistent co-worker. and so a comedic routine, ensures. where Fluttershy try to show Trixie around with out reviling any secrets.
or something like that.
This is brilliant, I noticed the Austin Powers reference before it mentioned Dr Evil. One of my favourite movies.
Now that I realise it, those 2 mares have been making out while the other 2 had been slaughtering the town. All they need now is a Mini Derpy.
Awesome work, Nero.
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Sweet! Nice to see you got the reference!
I have only one suggestion right now... Pyramid Head