3972068 Glad you enjoyed it. This chapter was pretty hard to write since I'm running out of suggestions. Do you have anything you would like to see happen in this story?
3972181 Hm... not sure if I can put that in any humorous or senseful way, especially after i established chrissy as mentally degenerated and in the role of a pet now. We will see I suppose.
3972230 That has potential and I can already imagine a way to set this up, but I do not want to make promises. I will keep this in mind, though. Like all suggestions and requests.
this was a great chapter. the 4th-wall jokes whet over well, and just when I was getting sick of it, you turned it around, excellent timing.
I was afraid the gore would be to much for me, but as long as the characters don't take it seriously it just doesn't bother me.
the shipping in the end was Hot.... I mean funny
uh! and I have an idea: I would love to see more of the CMC. I bet Scoots has a lot of new ideas on how to get there cutimark. like sowing wings on diamond tiara's back to make her look like a pegasus, and have her take the flight exam. her attempts of explaining herself would be all but ignored by the clueless exterminators, and then: its of to the factory, where scoots is waiting
Some asshole down at the market tried to rape flutters. Justice needs to be served; Saw style
One of pinkie's sisters gets kidnapped by ice ponies (Ice ponies are remotely related to the windigos. can be found around the area of the crystal kingdom mountains) Maybe they can open a small innocent looking ice cream shop run by flutters ofc.
3974857 you know, when she isn't butchering ponies she can be managing the shop. ofc. pinkie will help a little with management. and maybe they can hire someone completely without moral or care in the world that is the cashier. someone that is not known in the town... Who could that be?..
3981885 Dude, I honestly would have done the same thing in his situation. Tied up by two crazy chicks and thinking I'm fixin' to get freaky, then crying like a baby as my bones are ripped out of me
3981914 That would be a yes. Now, I need some time to get real sick in the head. Possibly go raider on your next victem (Fallout is you havent played it). Such as body parts hanging from meat hooks, a decapitated body nailed to a bed and missing their front and back hooves... Oh, oh my... Derpy Whooves, lets kill her or make her crazy. (If she does, have her eyes fix themselves from their walleyed state when she gets to killin')
Vinyl and Octavia's raunchy, public displays of affection have been driving everypony crazy. I bet no one would mind if some one were to take care of that...with meat hooks. Oh! I bet if they punched holes through Vinyl's tympanic membranes(ear drums) and put subwoofers against her ears with just bass going through her head as loud as possible, she might go crazy before she's skinned alive.
3983440 Did you know that it is technically possible to make a person's head explode by continuously aiming waves of very loud and very deep infrasound at them? The compression of air would make the skull crack like a melon thrown in a car crash test.
3983469 Yes I did, actually. Perks of practicing medicine. :P Interested in the idea? They could try to turn Octavia into a shishka-bob with her cello bow. An Octa-bob!
BRAVO! JUST, BRAVO MAN, oooooh my hawking god. That was just great. It was fantastic. Let me just tell you what happend. Beware, oh this was great.
I basically opened fimfiction in a nonsuspecting search for appropriate pictures to the thread I was in- then I saw it
A missed message. Wonderwh- it's from the guy who wrote cupcake factory. New thread. Asked for my opinion, personal alert. Clickclick *scroll scroll scroll...*
I was snickering the whole story, smiling in anticipation to how far your wicked mind has incorporated our ideas.
“True. This was starting to get on my nerves anyway. Hehe. Look at his legs now. All wobbly like sausages,” Rainbow commented.
from there on, I laughed harder then I had in a few weeks. And its fucking midnight too. So I keep reading, tears almost streaming down my eyes, and ofcourse everyone wake up. Eager to know what the hell I was up to, they grasped my tablet from my grip They started reading them:"Oh, ponies" "No! " I litteraly gasped for air here, they all just looked at me with sleepy eyes. So I scroll to the part where
Pinkie pulled on one last leather strap
they all look awkwardly at it, as if to say: you wake us all up for reading a damn porno in the middle of the night. They decided that sitting down was a better option after I more or less locked them in to read it. My best bro basically knowing that it was probably and murder fic (because of brotelepathy) just smirked as he watched over the other two's shoulders.
They read And they read. And they just seemed extremely startled. Beginning to read aloud "Dashie, go get the hammer so we can drive those nails in nice and deep... Dude, what the hell?" Then they arrived at the part of the lever, and they just excused themselves feeling sick.
I was laughing my ass off the entire time. You outdid yourself, really. You deserve a medal.
P.S:And yes, I do have this feeling derpy is secretly behind it all, she bugged everything, and is p Anning to take over the world. She was also a supergenious and can change her own age as demonstrated by littlederpyatCMCepisodes.jpg. A little bit like SGC said: she is the mad genious who actually had laser augmented sharks, in her other topsecret lab. No, not the robot hideout. No damnit also not in the active vulcano lair. The underwater secret lair? Youuuu thiiiink!
4007850 Oh it sure was. Although I totally see a cannon rainbowdash going: extr. Extrac- act- what teH!
But this is ebil rainbowdash, right. She manages to supply eryone of rainbows. Surely she can handle some tools. I did love hw you actually DID use surgical terms though. Them messing with hemostats and extractors whilest carefully using scalpels was sure not what dash expected.
Scalpel, circlesaw, hemostat, extractor, cautery... Cleaver, chainsaw, wirecutters, screwdrivers, welding tools... "I stole them from a hospital" don't suppose that was a clean crime was it.
After a while, Pinkie pulled an especially nasty trick. She picked up a sturdy iron pot and a small rodent. In a swift motion, she placed the animal in the pot and then placed it upside down on their victim’s stomach, preventing it from escaping
That. Classic.
Like I said, you outdid yourself.
P.S.: now that I think about it. If everyone is a homocidal batshit crazy maniac, how didn't ponyville's economy collapse on itself yet?
4010249 Not everyone is. Applejack for example isnt a serial killer. She just makes drugs. I guess the thing is that people who have such dark secrets do their best to not reveal them. A town could be full of people collecting eyeballs for a hobby and they wouldnt know that from one another unless it came out.
4213393 Sorry to keep everyone waiting. Real life can be such a piece of shit sometimes. But do not worry, Im working on the next chapter and its done by about the first third.
4227342 Nah, I'm good for this chapter. If you want to help, you can leave a suggestion what you would like to see in another chapter. Would help me get this story running again.
3972068
Glad you enjoyed it.
This chapter was pretty hard to write since I'm running out of suggestions.
Do you have anything you would like to see happen in this story?
3972181
Hm... not sure if I can put that in any humorous or senseful way, especially after i established chrissy as mentally degenerated and in the role of a pet now.
We will see I suppose.
3972230
That has potential and I can already imagine a way to set this up, but I do not want to make promises.
I will keep this in mind, though. Like all suggestions and requests.
this was a great chapter.
the 4th-wall jokes whet over well, and just when I was getting sick of it, you turned it around, excellent timing.
I was afraid the gore would be to much for me, but as long as the characters don't take it seriously it just doesn't bother me.
the shipping in the end was Hot.... I mean funny
uh! and I have an idea: I would love to see more of the CMC. I bet Scoots has a lot of new ideas
on how to get there cutimark.
like sowing wings on diamond tiara's back to make her look like a pegasus, and have her take the flight exam.
her attempts of explaining herself would be all but ignored by the clueless exterminators, and then: its of to the factory, where scoots is waiting
3972400
So glad you enjoyed it. And dude, that is a good suggestion.
Like all, this one is noted down.
Some asshole down at the market tried to rape flutters.
Justice needs to be served; Saw style
One of pinkie's sisters gets kidnapped by ice ponies (Ice ponies are remotely related to the windigos. can be found around the area of the crystal kingdom mountains) Maybe they can open a small innocent looking ice cream shop run by flutters ofc.
3972517
Again, nice ideas.
But fluttershy already works for the butchery. How is she supposed to manage both jobs?
3974857 you know, when she isn't butchering ponies she can be managing the shop. ofc. pinkie will help a little with management. and maybe they can hire someone completely without moral or care in the world that is the cashier. someone that is not known in the town... Who could that be?..
This~ this~ this is just too much.
Poor guy...
3976264
Yeah this ought to be one of the most distrubing chapters ive ever written.
But request is request. This is how this story works.
When I made the request... I never knew how batty the resulting chapter would get. I love it
3981711
My only question is if I somewhat succeeded in displaying your OC accurately.
3981885 Dude, I honestly would have done the same thing in his situation. Tied up by two crazy chicks and thinking I'm fixin' to get freaky, then crying like a baby as my bones are ripped out of me
3981896
In other words: Yes I did display his personality accurately.
3981914 That would be a yes. Now, I need some time to get real sick in the head. Possibly go raider on your next victem (Fallout is you havent played it). Such as body parts hanging from meat hooks, a decapitated body nailed to a bed and missing their front and back hooves... Oh, oh my... Derpy Whooves, lets kill her or make her crazy. (If she does, have her eyes fix themselves from their walleyed state when she gets to killin')
Vinyl and Octavia's raunchy, public displays of affection have been driving everypony crazy. I bet no one would mind if some one were to take care of that...with meat hooks. Oh! I bet if they punched holes through Vinyl's tympanic membranes(ear drums) and put subwoofers against her ears with just bass going through her head as loud as possible, she might go crazy before she's skinned alive.
3983440
Did you know that it is technically possible to make a person's head explode by continuously aiming waves of very loud and very deep infrasound at them?
The compression of air would make the skull crack like a melon thrown in a car crash test.
3983469 Yes I did, actually. Perks of practicing medicine. :P Interested in the idea? They could try to turn Octavia into a shishka-bob with her cello bow. An Octa-bob!
BRAVO! JUST, BRAVO MAN,
oooooh my hawking god. That was just great. It was fantastic. Let me just tell you what happend. Beware, oh this was great.
I basically opened fimfiction in a nonsuspecting search for appropriate pictures to the thread I was in-
then I saw it
A missed message. Wonderwh- it's from the guy who wrote cupcake factory. New thread. Asked for my opinion, personal alert. Clickclick *scroll scroll scroll...*
I was snickering the whole story, smiling in anticipation to how far your wicked mind has incorporated our ideas.
from there on, I laughed harder then I had in a few weeks. And its fucking midnight too. So I keep reading, tears almost streaming down my eyes, and ofcourse everyone wake up.
Eager to know what the hell I was up to, they grasped my tablet from my grip
They started reading them:"Oh, ponies"
"No! " I litteraly gasped for air here, they all just looked at me with sleepy eyes.
So I scroll to the part where
they all look awkwardly at it, as if to say: you wake us all up for reading a damn porno in the middle of the night. They decided that sitting down was a better option after I more or less locked them in to read it. My best bro basically knowing that it was probably and murder fic (because of brotelepathy) just smirked as he watched over the other two's shoulders.
They read
And they read.
And they just seemed extremely startled. Beginning to read aloud "Dashie, go get the hammer so we can drive those nails in nice and deep... Dude, what the hell?"
Then they arrived at the part of the lever, and they just excused themselves feeling sick.
I was laughing my ass off the entire time.
You outdid yourself, really. You deserve a medal.
P.S:And yes, I do have this feeling derpy is secretly behind it all, she bugged everything, and is p
Anning to take over the world. She was also a supergenious and can change her own age as demonstrated by littlederpyatCMCepisodes.jpg.
A little bit like SGC said: she is the mad genious who actually had laser augmented sharks, in her other topsecret lab. No, not the robot hideout. No damnit also not in the active vulcano lair. The underwater secret lair? Youuuu thiiiink!
4007700
That story is hysterical!
And yes, that sounds like a pretty neat idea.
Lets see how and if i can put it to use.
4007850 Oh it sure was.
Although I totally see a cannon rainbowdash going: extr. Extrac- act- what teH!
But this is ebil rainbowdash, right. She manages to supply eryone of rainbows. Surely she can handle some tools. I did love hw you actually DID use surgical terms though. Them messing with hemostats and extractors whilest carefully using scalpels was sure not what dash expected.
Scalpel, circlesaw, hemostat, extractor, cautery...
Cleaver, chainsaw, wirecutters, screwdrivers, welding tools...
"I stole them from a hospital" don't suppose that was a clean crime was it.
That. Classic.
Like I said, you outdid yourself.
P.S.: now that I think about it. If everyone is a homocidal batshit crazy maniac, how didn't ponyville's economy collapse on itself yet?
4010249
Not everyone is. Applejack for example isnt a serial killer. She just makes drugs.
I guess the thing is that people who have such dark secrets do their best to not reveal them. A town could be full of people collecting eyeballs for a hobby and they wouldnt know that from one another unless it came out.
4010786 Actually, one would assume it never came out because everyone would be blind.
Update please
4213393
Sorry to keep everyone waiting. Real life can be such a piece of shit sometimes.
But do not worry, Im working on the next chapter and its done by about the first third.
4213485 it's ok
4213485 1st 3rd ?
4223787
I aim to go for roughly 3000 words and 1000 are written.
So 1/3 is done.
4227254 need any help
4227342
Nah, I'm good for this chapter. If you want to help, you can leave a suggestion what you would like to see in another chapter. Would help me get this story running again.
this is so great. I kinda wanna see something like they force a pony to do things. If u want some inspiration, heres a link http://reitanna-seishin.deviantart.com/gallery/48975373/Muffins?offset=24