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Considering you mentioned mistakes in the author's note, I'm going to assume I don't need to point them out, and there are a lot. So focusing on the story, I find it hard to believe that your OC defeated Chrysalis so easily. Especially since he just appeared in a new world and should be disoriented, however I'm going to assume she'll be returning since that was WAY too easy. Other then that, I'll be following this story because I'm intrigued.
Would you like a drawn cover image? I can make you one, because (and I mean no offense) the base art is off-putting
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I apologize for one of the lowest quality stories I have published. I’ll be the first to admit I fucked it badly. Unfortunately with this story I didn’t have the time to go through it dozens of times before publishing it. And I also apologize for biffing the fight so badly. Yes she will be back. And about the art thing, I would be ETERNALY grateful if you could. Unfortunately im not going to have access to my Pc for a while.
Its not bad, sounds interesting and I'm guessing the MC is some kind of animatronics?
Looks forward the next chapter!
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Here you go, I've linked two versions because the shading might be too distracting. Feel free to alter the images in anyway you please :)
My drawing
A flat colored version
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I've updated it, I hope it's better than it was before... let me know what ya think!
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Was much better! Could do with less blocks of text, but otherwise I enjoyed it, good job