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RinellaWasHere


I'm a Scots-Irishman from Montana, and I write fanfiction. I can also be found on Deviantart under the same name, and I have a blog, rinellawashere.blogspot.com, which contains my original work.

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Jetfire-Approved Pseudo-Sequel to Dangerous Business- With the rest of the Mane Six gone on a diplomatic mission for Celestia, Fluttershy is having a restful, if lonely, summer. But one day, a mysterious member of the Apple family arrives in town, carrying three strange gemstones. He explains (and demonstrates) that the stones allow any pony who uses them to harness powerful magic, beyond that of any unicorn. He offers a few local ponies a deal- if they come with him to the dangerous and unexplored North, where the stones were allegedly discovered, they can get a cut of the profits from selling the mystical rocks. Fluttershy, along with an ensemble cast of background ponies and OC's, finds herself on a grand adventure that will take her beyond the borders of Equestria.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 5 )

:ajbemused: Two ratings, point five stars. Quick skim, not that bad. Comments, empty. Why does this have a bad rating so early?:trixieshiftright:

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I'm not sure, and it worries me a little. For the people currently reading, please leave comments! If it's only worthy of those two stars I'd like to know why!

Oh man I cant wait to see what happens next! I just need to know what was so significant about the cave and then I also loved it how the cutie mark crusaders were trying to get ninja cutie marks I just cant wait

I for one am most intrigued. I have zero complaints on writing style, too... I'm honestly not sure why this awesome story seems to have been buried, especially seeing as how it's based on one of the best fimfics of all time.
OF ALL TIME. :coolphoto:
I'm assuming that the Siren or the Balrog or whatever it was that almost got them in the cave towards the beginning of Dangerous Business is the source of the calamity in the prologue?
Either way, legitimately cool story bro :pinkiehappy: Hope you don't abandon it altogether.

Hey, you should write more of this.
The reason you got several down votes right from the start is because you are writing a sequel to a fantastic fimfic, and you aren't the original author. Some people think that If you aren't jetfire, you shouldn't be writing in his/her world. It isn't any fault of yours. I know this is a little late, but keep writing, especially if you enjoy it.

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