While Cynder's finding it difficult to bond with the ponies, at least she's making an attempt to for Spike's sake. And despite Twilight not trusting her completely she is willing to give her the benefit of the doubt.
This story you made is great and I can't wait to see what else you write for this. I also can't wait to see how you write Cynder's and Celestia's meeting. BTW, just a suggestion, try asking other authors and readers what they think of your story so far and the background of Spike's parents and how Spike's egg got to Celestia's possession and how they story will progress. Again, just a suggestion. Anyway, great story and keep up the great work and stay safe. 'Edit': Why did my comment get disliked? I was just typing out what I wanted to say. What's so wrong with that?
The dragoness lets out a frustrated sigh as she takes the dress and puts it on. After she does so, Cynder looks into a mirror and doesn't like what she sees. The dress barely reached to her knees and was pretty wide around the waist area, making it look like she put on some weight.
And the things continue interestingly. Almost can’t wait to find out what or who happened at the temple... And what might be behind Cynders little slip there... And now to wait the news to reach Celestia, and maybe what others think of Cynder after meeting her in person. Hopefully in the new outfit; RD might die of laughter if she sees the polka dot one... A serious threat...
I'm curious to know if Smolder knows of Cynder and Spyro? Also, good to see an update after a whole year. I wonder what Celestia is going to do or say when she meets Cynder?
Ohh more dragon stories with much interest!! I approve!! I wanted to tackle a story like this year's ago with spyro but i feel this would beat it out the park
11226457 Dude if you had been paying close attention to the dialogue you'd notice something happened to spyro, maybe he became the equivalent of a dragon lord and is tied up at the office? Granted Cynder said he wasn't dead so we have that much at least.
Someone should mention his grandfather too since that's the real issue here.
Yes it’s alive! It’s kind of funny that whenever I tried to picture Spike’s parents, Spyro and Cynder are the ones that always pop up. It might as well be canon.
Im curious about the timeline dynamics of this. Meantioning of the Guardians and Dragonflies pretty much locks this in the post-Legend timeline, but where does that sit with the MLP world? Like did Malefor still manage to blow up the world for Spyro to fix it and how did that effect this world? Is it even on this world? What of Ember/Dragon Lord; would Cynder be seen as below, equal or above her position?
I think it has to be Rarity's mother, Cookie Crumbles, a.k.a. Pearl. At first, I thought it would be Celestia, but there's no way that a fashion savvy pony like Rarity would make a polka-dotted dress for royalty. Her reputation in the fashion world would be torn to shreds. Her mother, on the other hand, seems a more likely fit for such a dress. Plus, it matches her coat and mane colors.
Celestia, PLEASE don't make the petty mistake like Twilight did. Otherwise, I be heavily disappointed!
Edit: Oh come on? Explained the unjustified dislike?
While Cynder's finding it difficult to bond with the ponies, at least she's making an attempt to for Spike's sake. And despite Twilight not trusting her completely she is willing to give her the benefit of the doubt.
I'm kind of scared what was Celestia will do when she learns that spikes and biological mother is here
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What would she even do?
There is no reason to be overprotective. No need for unnecessary drama, please.
( Despite the drama tag up there. )
Was?
This story you made is great and I can't wait to see what else you write for this. I also can't wait to see how you write Cynder's and Celestia's meeting. BTW, just a suggestion, try asking other authors and readers what they think of your story so far and the background of Spike's parents and how Spike's egg got to Celestia's possession and how they story will progress. Again, just a suggestion. Anyway, great story and keep up the great work and stay safe. 'Edit': Why did my comment get disliked? I was just typing out what I wanted to say. What's so wrong with that?
Uh. Princess Luna?
Wait! WHOA NELLY!
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Bingo!
Very good.
And the things continue interestingly. Almost can’t wait to find out what or who happened at the temple... And what might be behind Cynders little slip there...
And now to wait the news to reach Celestia, and maybe what others think of Cynder after meeting her in person. Hopefully in the new outfit; RD might die of laughter if she sees the polka dot one... A serious threat...
Interesting development. I especially like how she challenged Rarity, only met her once and already knows how to rile her up
Also: Who keeps disliking the comments?
I'm curious to know if Smolder knows of Cynder and Spyro?
Also, good to see an update after a whole year.
I wonder what Celestia is going to do or say when she meets Cynder?
So why didnt Spyro come with? Or is he busy with other things?
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You'll see soon.
Loo king good so far. Look forqard to the next update.
Ohh more dragon stories with much interest!! I approve!! I wanted to tackle a story like this year's ago with spyro but i feel this would beat it out the park
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Dude if you had been paying close attention to the dialogue you'd notice something happened to spyro, maybe he became the equivalent of a dragon lord and is tied up at the office? Granted Cynder said he wasn't dead so we have that much at least.
Someone should mention his grandfather too since that's the real issue here.
Whoa, Nelly! I know who Rarity was referring to
.. And it definitely isn't Crackle...
Is there possibility that the Student Six show up, even in cameo? It would be interesting if Smolder ran into Cynder in this tale.
I wonder how long it'll take before things get ugly...
Yes it’s alive! It’s kind of funny that whenever I tried to picture Spike’s parents, Spyro and Cynder are the ones that always pop up. It might as well be canon.
Ho boy! This Will get good!
Im curious about the timeline dynamics of this. Meantioning of the Guardians and Dragonflies pretty much locks this in the post-Legend timeline, but where does that sit with the MLP world? Like did Malefor still manage to blow up the world for Spyro to fix it and how did that effect this world? Is it even on this world? What of Ember/Dragon Lord; would Cynder be seen as below, equal or above her position?
Ok I get the sludge incident but twilight is kinda being a Royal Bitch
I cant wait dor the next chapter.
When Celestia finda out, it would be a blast.
"A certain large mare?"
I think it has to be Rarity's mother, Cookie Crumbles, a.k.a. Pearl. At first, I thought it would be Celestia, but there's no way that a fashion savvy pony like Rarity would make a polka-dotted dress for royalty. Her reputation in the fashion world would be torn to shreds. Her mother, on the other hand, seems a more likely fit for such a dress. Plus, it matches her coat and mane colors.
Oh my, this is so exciting, i cant wait for the next chapter.
Specially for the clop part of Spike and his first rut cycle, its gonna be awesome.
Are you on Writter Block, cause this is my favourite of your fics.
I am eating this up right now! It's so good!