Me: “Hmmmm.”

Skeksil: “Hmmmm.”

Okay, Twilight, just stop.

Your just being a total bitch now!!!

And gonna do some petty crap that you will regret ( And possibly Celestia eventually too ).

Besides, Cynder can easily kick your pathetic ass out of here.

Edit: Really now? Dislike?

Why is Twilight so suspicious of Cynder?

I don't fult Twilight for being sus of her, but what Cynder will eventually reveal is going to be sad. Also she may still have some of the dark powers even after she was free.

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She's worried of having another Sludge incident.

This looks good

Twilight just being greedy wanting HER dragon all to her self and a little overprotective as she does not want to go through another heartbreak parent moment

This is gonna be a good one, I can tell!

When the next update?

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I know, but Cynder is NOTHING like that scumball

Faved and following 100% now. I can't wait to see how this goes...a legitimate mom for Spike to show up. Props to you for putting the Flame that links Spike and Cynder as family, though naturally I wonder if Spyro is the dad or something tragic happened to the biological father

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You mean from when Malefor brainwashed her?

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True but Twilight doesn't know that.

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Unfortunately, Twilight doesn't know that. The only way for her to learn that is for her to watch Cynder until she sees how how nice the dragoness is.

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That... is actually a good question. At first I was like 'No she would be to young to bring eggs,' but I realize that she was turn in to an 'adult' at the time. Which will make her back story much darker story, which hopefully would not be the duration.

Hmmm, I like this. Can't wait for more.

Spyro: Hi Cyndi, who is your friend?
Cynde: he is my Son or We are son!!!!!
Spyro : WHAT?????

Allrighty, let’s see where this goes... Both in how the mommy side of things goes with Cynder and Celly, and how will Twiggles most likely fck things up.

Worthy of a read and if good later, a follow!!

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Or until one of Malefor's minions shows up and she has to work with twilight to defeat the bastard...and have to explain to them what the actual fuck is her day job is.

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It's LoS canon that what Malefor did to Cynder left her changed even after Spyro used Aether to break the spell. Given the powers she has in DotD and using the old deductive exercise of 'which of these is not like the other', there's a fairly strong argument to be made that without Malefor's influence Cynder would have been a Wind Dragon. Poison, Fear, and Shadow are all solidly 'dark' powers, if in different ways. Plus the dark coloration, the intimidating-looking arrangement of her horns, and especially a literal blade on the end of her tail. It's not just a possibility. Cynder is forever tainted by that experience, but it doesn't have to be a bad thing.

I just hope Twilight doesn't see Cynder using 'dark magic' and decide it's hero time. She can be very impulsive despite priding herself as an intellectual.

I'm onboard for this. Curious to hear the background. Is Spike's dad going to be Spyro or Malefor? Will this follow some of the LOS canon? Will we be waiting long for the rut? All this and more will be answered, we hope.

Oooh, always loved this concept! Twilight is understandably throwing a hissy fit which might bite her in the ass later. Also cynder being a milf is something I approve of wholeheartedly.

Are u going to update this

Good stuff, I hope to see more

So how's the update coming along?

I don't mean to sound impatient or rude here Mechazilla, but when is this story going to be updated? Again, not trying to sound impatient or rude, just checking. The first chapter starts this story in a good direction, I really want to see where you are going to have it go.

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As soon as me and NetherTempest have finished the next chapter of Mistresses of The Oasis, then we'll work on the next chapter of this story. And please, don't ask when that will be done cause we're kinda working at our own pace right now.

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Ok. I was just checking. By the way, that story, "Mistresses at the Oasis" you and NetherTempest are working on is a really good story. I can't wait to see what you 2 have planned for the rest of it and possible future stories. Good luck and stay safe.

I'm a bit confused with characters tags. I know that the Main 6 are part of the story, but will they start a relationship with Spike too or are they more supporting characters?

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They are supporting characters in this story.

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Thank you, I'm glad that's been cleared up.

I have an idea for an episode, one where Twilight Velvet also joins the competition of who is the best mommy to Spike, she must have raised him for a while too.

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Me and NetherTempest already have an idea for a sequel on that.

Wow this looks good, when youre gonna update???

This story needs to be beat over the head with the editing stick pretty hard. You keep abusing homonyms, and routinely mess up apostrophes in plurals and possesives. You also keep switching characters' pronouns, calling Twilight "he" and Spike "she" on occasion. It is kinda annoying to read.

It has a nice premise, though.

Well, as a long-time Spyro fan, you have my attention! This outta be an interesting one!