I love the way you write! I love the chemistry between and Jojo. It feels real. I hate coming to a end of your stories because I feel like I'm in them!!! Please write more because you have earned yourself a watcher!!!!!
He love canal had to fight to keep it in, and ho boy was it fighting.
"Her"
Ditzy was right on the edge of her third mind blow orgasm tonight.
"blowing"
This is all I remembered to put down, there was more but I just don't feel up to editing at the moment. As a note, there are a couple of tense issues where you switched between past and present.
This.
I like this.
I demand more.
Because I like this.
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More.
I'll make more.
I'll write more.
Because more is good.
This was good exept for when dinky gave him a hung she should have just gave him a hug instead.
Dinky makes valid arguments?
Dinky also knows about sex?
Kids these days.
Dinky is the new badass in this story 'nuff said
That was fucking awesome. Pun intended. Must have moar.
I have to say, I hope to see more very, very soon
Commence read.
Well looks like Dinky may not have gotten all of the sleep she may have wanted then.
1918739 The error has been fixed. Thank you for pointing it out to me :)
1918796 I know right? At least she knows how to spell words. Unlike to many of the kids today....
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1919488 There shall be more. I'm glad you enjoyed it :D
1919693 I'll do my best, but I put the pro in procrastination.
1920299 She wasn't even trying to sleep.
1920393 Then what was she up to?
1920406 I could tell, but that'd be spoiling. She just wasn't trying to sleep.
1920412 Okay then.
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Good.
This is good.
This made my day.
Because this is good.
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Glad.
I am glad.
Glad your day is made.
Because it really is good.
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Pleased.
I am pleased.
Pleased that you have decided to make more.
Because this is pleas- good.
that would be an epic night.
I fell in love with the story, and now Fluttershy demands MOAR!!!!
...if...it's ok..kkk...ay with you?
Bravo
This is
Cumming
PUNPUNPUNPUNPUN
MOAR
1925992because it's pleasing?
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That comment is almost half a year old.
Bit late to the party mate.
2661414 meh...
I love the way you write! I love the chemistry between and Jojo. It feels real. I hate coming to a end of your stories because I feel like I'm in them!!! Please write more because you have earned yourself a watcher!!!!!
Oh btw fluttershy wants MOAR
"Her"
"blowing"
This is all I remembered to put down, there was more but I just don't feel up to editing at the moment. As a note, there are a couple of tense issues where you switched between past and present.